SS- ONE NIGHT WITH THE ENEMY last chap pt-2 + epil - Page 25

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: captainplus

al the best 4r ur xam 👍🏼

nice update ⭐️
lo❤️e 2 c abhay jelous
hope the mu b/w abhiya gets cleared soon
tnx 4r the pm 😊

😆That wld be soon
Thanks fr liking
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Posted: 12 years ago
ohh !!!how sweet that you updated !!!!😳!!!i am waiting for your update but i though not to disturb😭😭😭 !!!!...you !!!otherwise there will many messages on your inbox saying *plzzz update *😆!!!

the update is nice👏 !!!how can you say😲 this is pathetic 😡😡😡!!!!...plzzz update soon 😭!!!for the future ...

thanks for the pm !!!!you are ⭐️new shinning star in our forum !!!!😳😳😳...

abhay jealousy so cute 😳...now also abhay feels for piya😳😳 !!!!i am so happy hearing this 😃!!!!...
i am really excited to know what is all about messages 😉...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vampireking

ohh !!!how sweet that you updated !!!!😳!!!i am waiting for your update but i though not to disturb😭😭😭 !!!!...you !!!otherwise there will many messages on your inbox saying *plzzz update *😆!!!


the update is nice👏 !!!how can you say😲 this is pathetic 😡😡😡!!!!...plzzz update soon 😭!!!for the future ...

thanks for the pm !!!!you are ⭐️new shinning star in our forum !!!!😳😳😳...

abhay jealousy so cute 😳...now also abhay feels for piya😳😳 !!!!i am so happy hearing this 😃!!!!...
i am really excited to know what is all about messages 😉...

its k u can disturb me any tym😆
Thank god u liked it. Wilp try to update asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
painful but awsomee update dear🤗hope Abhiya reunion soon...😊
ur relationship break up...I knew its painful but I suggest u free ur relation if its ur its come to ur life again & if not,,,just wait will must better waiting for u somewhere dear🤗All the best for exam👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Abhiya_eternal

painful but awsomee update dear🤗hope Abhiya reunion soon...😊

ur relationship break up...I knew its painful but I suggest u free ur relation if its ur its come to ur life again & if not,,,just wait will must better waiting for u somewhere dear🤗All the best for exam👍🏼

Glad u liked it n thank u so much fr that piece if advice😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow I read all update , it is really outstanding ,
whether in abhiya emotion , feeling of betryal with each other due to lack of trust in his / her love , this all scenerio , problem , misunderstanding created due to that evil t , hate to core , due to her abhiya suffer five years ,
hope both will know true feeling of each other & passed with flying colors in future , this all fiasco arised due to t & b/w his /her lack of confidence in trust issue
thanks for this abhiya lovestory
continue soon & pm me all update whenever you update
best luck for your exam
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: singhshailesh86

wow I read all update , it is really outstanding ,
whether in abhiya emotion , feeling of betryal with each other due to lack of trust in his / her love , this all scenerio , problem , misunderstanding created due to that evil t , hate to core , due to her abhiya suffer five years ,
hope both will know true feeling of each other & passed with flying colors in future , this all fiasco arised due to t & b/w his /her lack of confidence in trust issue
thanks for this abhiya lovestory
continue soon & pm me all update whenever you update
best luck for your exam

so i was able to pull another reader:D thanks fr liking n sure wld pm u
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice work jack. love jealous abhay
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Posted: 12 years ago
I have read this story in another forum i.e. Madhubala Forum...are you the same writer??
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi guys, presenting another update to you all. I know its short, but sorry i was not in a mood to update more. But don't worry the next update would be surely in a day or two:)


I was wondering whether or not should i continue this story, seeing the drop in response. From 40 likes, it has shifted to 20. And its very disappointing. I'll update another chapter and if still the response doesn't increase, i'll discontinue this story. Sorry for being blunt, but if I'm working hard, i expect some response. Anyways do enjoy this short update:) Please ignore the mistakes, typed though mobile:D


And yeah, this story is only about Abhiya.

CHAPTER 8


'What the hell is wrong with him? How could a person change so much?' Pia muttered to herself, sitting alone on the bed of a low grade hotel room in the Mumbai city. The Abhay she knew, was anything but a cruel and self- centered person. Then why did he stoop so low?


Her mind was debating on only one topic- Abhay Raichand. She had seen that confused look on his face, when Kabeer had mentioned those messages. Could it be that he's not responsible for those?


Her head was spinning with all these questions, and there was no one with whom she could share this dilemma. Kabeer had left the entire responsibility on her shoulders to meet Jeh Khurana, the man who could probably help them in this situation. Kabeer had gone back to his native place, Pune, to be there for his wife Misha, who was due to deliver their child. She was happy for the two. During this hard period, it was good that they were expecting happiness soon.


Pia knew she had to do all in her power to get Jeh Khurana agree to the deal. After all she had promised to help Kabeer and Misha during their hardship, as they had helped her.


The hotel phone rang, breaking Pia's thought process. "Hello?" she spoke into the receiver, wondering who could call her.


"Piya Jaiswal." The voice from the other side spoke.


"How the hell did you get this number?" Piya tried not to let the sensation of sheer panic overwhelm her. But she was shocked to hear Abhay's voice.


"Do you think finding a mere phone number to contact to you would be difficult for me?" he spoke. Piya could clearly visualize the smirk and wicked smile on Abhay's face.


"What do you want?"


" I want to meet you. Today. ALONE." Abhay spoke tautly.


"And what makes you think that i will listen to you and come?" she challenged him. Though she was eager to know the reason for this sudden meeting, she also wanted to play hard with Abhay, for a reason unknown to her.


She heard his laugh. " Piya, either we do this easily, like friends." he paused at the word- friend. " Or i don't mind playing the enemy, and making it done the harder way. The choice is yours. No matter what, I'm meeting you today." The depth of his voice scared her and she knew she had no other option than to do his way.


"Where?"


He laughed again, this time, it was the victory laugh." My place. At eight. Let's have dinner together. I'll send somebody to pick you up." Speaking the last words he cut the call making Piya wonder, in what trap was he pulling her into?

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Abhay was tense as he stood in the open lawns, outside his mansion. He was thinking deep...Why had he asked her to meet him, really?


Abhay told himself, it was only because he wanted some answers. His belly clenched. It was much deeper than that, and he knew it. He wanted to see her humiliated as he had felt that night. He wanted to see her emotions exposed, as he had his. He wanted to see her in pain, the same pain he had felt when he got to know that she was married to that Kabeer Rathode and was caring his child in her womb.


He couldn't forget the shock he'd received, when he got to know about Kabeer Rathode and his wife. The two were looking for somebody who could invest in their business, which was soring low.


Kabeer Rathode, owned textile business in Pune, and the land where he had set up his industry, was the land Abhay wanted badly, it being in a resourceful area. He had left this work on Tanushree, who was still trying to convince the Rathodes.


But at present, the Rathode business was drowing. And they badly needed investors and hence were here to find somebody who could help them in this matter. Kabeer Rathode got married two years back and his wife was expecting their first child. Abhay knew, the wife was no other than Piya. Otherwise how could she know him and why would she accompany him?


This knowledge about Piya being married to somebody else, had pinched him badly. He was broken and now all he wanted was to see her break.


Edited by jack-12 - 12 years ago

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