Manasa dear first of all really a big sorry for commenting so late but after exams i became very lazy lol, but now i am here to give my long comment. No worries Romi 😳 BTW when will u update Fateful Night? Am waiting 😃
Ok now coming to the updates i read part 2 and 3 in one go. I don't know what should i say to u, superb, awesome brilliant nah i am bored of using same words again and again, i need to learn some new words plz wait till then lol. Baap re 😲 I dont think I am all tat good 😆 but thanks 😳
I just loved ur concept, good, bad and battle between evil and angel.
I loved the way u managed to write the action scenes, really hats off to you for writing them in such a realistic way!!! Wow piya battled and killed selene, i just loved this feisty piya. Selene was the one murdered piya's father and piya wanted to meet her father's murderer once and see the game of destiny she managed to get a hand on her father's murderer and rewaeded her too with a tortured death!!! I just loved this part yaar. Pia had to avenge her father's murder n I guess I went a lil too overboard with that coz I frustrated with my office teammates 😆
Abhay and sid that part was just awesome. I can understand abhay's pain, sid was his only family and his guider, he was the one to teach him his duties as a slayer but fighting with ur own brother is not that easy but abhay atlast managed to choose the right path, that whole scene was just brilliantly written, described and explained. It was indeed difficult for Abhay but in the end the slayer won over the brother in him.
Coming to abhiya part, i loved the romance, their confession and love making part, that was surely hot yaar but beautifully written, it was not at all vulgur, it was sweet, soft amd subtle kind of romance, u did a gr8 job dear!!! Thanks dear 😳 I am quite shy when it comes to writing such scenes 😆
Augustus loved his side of story and felt bad for him, marcus is surely evil, i loved the way u wrote the whole story and concept in it, it was clearly explained not for once did i get confused or didn't understand anything, really gr8 job and i find somewhere abhay and sid repeating the same story again but yes like marcus sid had not chosen this life for himself, there is a difference but ultimately sid has become evil though he had some emotions in him for his brother but after abhay staked him i don't think he will have any more brotherly emotion left in him. U r right abt that Romi, Sid did not choose this life for himself Lets see what will happen in the final Abhay Sid confrontation 😕
So finally abhiya confessed and was ready to leave for dehradun but alas their life can never be bed full of roses so sid kidnapped piya, i hope abhay will find his piya soon, i know he will.
Once more just awesome job yaar, loved loved loved this OS cum SS, waiting for next part now. I want to know what the climax will be, so plz do continue soon, waiting for next part and yea thank god reader's BBB worked on u lol. I shall write it only next week dear coz I am totally exhausted after writing this update 🥱 Thanks a lot for such a lovely comment 🤗
Thanks for the pm.
.I knew some twist wud be coming as Abhiya can never hav happily ever after so easily. Of course Sid wouldn die so easily now would he? 😆
Dont push me over the edge 😛 U never know, I might end up writing not 16+ but an 18+ plus update 😛 Lets just hope it doesn come to it 😆
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