AbhiYa#108::Take My Breath Away ❤️ - Page 73

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan

saw it /... thanks and your comment was short 😆 you had lunch? whole week i cudnt get lunch from home for various reasons and ended up ordering it from outside... not pleasant...

Originally posted by: mandy1024

sorry had to restart my system for updates. Yep I have 😊

Originally posted by: mandy1024

So true, even I dont like outside food 😛 But behind my office u have an old couple who make home made food n serve it. They have turned their house to a mini eat out kind n the food there's so healthy 😊 Now I dont mind skipping lunch from home few times.

U found my comment short? 😲 I am kinda done with half my update for Guardian 😛

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan

hmm the telefilm patter would be like that. i already have a idea in head which will fit 20 mins i hope 😆

it will start a girl and his fiance reading a newspaper on the morning while the girl is saying the boy about news of another murder in town. murder patter is - brides getting killed aft marriage on the wedding night and it supposedly a serial killing kiss. she would be joking, dont do this with me ok since we know each othan from 3 months only." the guy would be joking too. they are modern people with no family so their marriage wud be simple and lonely. but the guy is very rich. next scene would be the guy brings the girl- his newly wed bride to a distant deserted place saying its his property. the girl would be calling her boyfriend in secret saying she will take all his money soon and they will be happy forever. when she will enter the house, after a few moments the guy will be killing her saying the serial killer in the newspaper they read in the morning is himself. story finished at the girls shocking face dying.

hows it? 😕 its just the idea.

Hmmm I feel it would be slightly predictable na? Coz in the beginning itself u would have established the theory of a serial killer who kills the bride just after marriage n the gal too says dont do this with me. So audience will be always think that this guy could be the murderer after all. She might be cheating on him but since she is the bride everyone will assume she will be the next victim. I got an idea but I donno if its ok or not How abt the gal killing the groom n running back to her boyfriend with all the money n her boyfriend then killing her n it turns out her boyfriend was the killer after all? Sorry I know my ideas r crap

Originally posted by: mandy1024

Hmmm I feel it would be slightly predictable na? Coz in the beginning itself u would have established the theory of a serial killer who kills the bride just after marriage n the gal too says dont do this with me. So audience will be always think that this guy could be the murderer after all. She might be cheating on him but since she is the bride everyone will assume she will be the next victim. I got an idea but I donno if its ok or not 😕 How abt the gal killing the groom n running back to her boyfriend with all the money n her boyfriend then killing her n it turns out her boyfriend was the killer after all? Sorry I know my ideas r crap

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan

👏 your idea is better. let is be. she runs away with her fiances money, skipping the killing part and reaches her boyfriend when they get married and last scene remains same. he killed her instead. wat say? 😃

Originally posted by: mandy1024

Ok 😉 U seriously found my idea nice? 😲

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan

yes because yours one sounds better than mine 😛 see why i have such confidence in your writing? im proud of you

if i ever become a producer of a show, i will hire you in the creative team if you agree to join me offcourse 😆