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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bellaaa

really nice up
abhay is so sweet na
friends scene was nice
but piya said i love u to jeh abhay misunderstand
abhay heart broken when reality hit to him
hope piya forget jeh soon
cont soon

thanks..yea he is..
Glad u like my work...yea i will continue soon now
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: --Rose--

Yaar when will u update the next part??


Hope so this sunday
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: meerubzara

fabulous update

love truth & dare game
continu soon


Thanks..glad u like it..yea i will
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Posted: 12 years ago

Yea i will post it on sunday
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Posted: 12 years ago
yea i will update now on sunday..yea i will pm u.
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Posted: 12 years ago
We will get update on Sunday?Awsm
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Monami_50

We will get update on Sunday?Awsm


i hope u all like the update..because the next update is very long..n full on abhiya..so guess what i mean
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part B half
Piya hits abhay n said:its a joke..huh.
Abhay:ooch i m really hungry n u hit me...i dont want to talk with u..
Piya kissed again:m i forgiven..
Abhay:yea..now dinner plzz..
Precap:i m in love(piya pov)n also she is ready to confess her love for abhay...
P.C:guys i know after a long time i update.the main reason is that my computer,s window uninstall..so i will install later..i update this part from my mobile...guys i did my best..if u like then hit like button n also i love ur cmnts...
I hope u all like my update..sorry 4 mistakes...forgive me guys if u want...love u all take care...
Edited by Aish-Naksh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter#3
Fun with u😆
At riachand mension 11:30
Piya:i love u..
Abhay(smile):i know piya i love u too..
Suddenly abhay saw that piya is jumping on the bed..
Abhay(smiles at her wife kids action):yeh kya kar rahi ho..dekho sara bed kharab kar diya hai..neechay utro..
Piya (still jumping):tum bohat hi bad boy ho..mujay loktay(roktay) ho...bad boy..katti..mai nhi bolti..
N piya turn her face aside..n she sits on her aka their bed n starts crying..
Abhay shock to see piya change reaction..
Within second ran to her n said:what happen..why my wife don,t want to talk with me..huh??
Piya(still sobbing):because u r bad boy i hate u...
Abhay(his heart like crying):piya plzz don,t hate me...if u want to jump then jump everywhere in garden,kitchen,room,bed,library n everywhere..its all ur house..
Piya start laughing:sachii.
Abhay:muchi..
Piya hug abhay n touch his dimples n said:u r good boy..
Piya again start jmping on the bed like a 5 years kid..
Abhay(thought):what happened with piya..kabhi vo hasti hai phir roti hai n phir..uff mai pagal ho jao gaa...
Piya(while jumping):tum bhi meray sath karo na jump,.
Abhay:no me not..
Piya again start crying n said:u r a bad boy..
Abhay:ok ok..but me not bad boy..understand..
Piya nodded in yes..
Abhay also now on bed n try to jump like piya but he could not..
Piya:u r such a budhu itna bhi nhi aata..
Piya gave intruction to abhay..n now abhiya r jumping on bed(me dreaming)
Piya tries to make abhay fell on bed but abhay is strong...
Abhay:so mujsay aap jeetnaa chahtay ho..
Piya:huh...
Now its abhay turn so now abhay make fell piya on bed n now abhay is on top of piya..
Piya:u make me fall..
Abhay:i won..i won..
Piya:u r such a bad boy..
Abhay:no me not..
Abhay click his n piya photo.
N now abhay warm breath on piya,s face n piya close her eyes..
Abhay come close to piya lips n about to kiss piya when his cell start ringing.
Abhay:shit..
After 5 mins of abhay,s buisness call..
When abhay return he saw piya is sleeping on the bed peacefully..
N then he saw that the whole bed sheet mess...
Abhay:u r looking beautiful while sleeping...
Abhay lay beside piya n kiss her forehead n caressing her hairs...
Abhay remember all the movements he spend with her seriouse piya,lovely piya,n naughty piya..but what happen when reality strikes???
N then he remember when ruhi change the glass..
Abhay:so its mean piya drank alcohal n she..
N then he remember piya,s behaviour changing system..
Abhay:mai in sab frnds ko nhi chorugaa..
N then he remember piya said i love u..
Abhay smiles:nashay mai hi sahi but kaha toh sahi..(divya d.l.g)
N then abhay close his eyes.
Morning 10:00 AM
Piya wake up n fell dizzy n unwell n then the next she saw that the mess of bedsheet n bed.
Piya:what happen to bed..n why i m feeling so unwell.
Piya(thinking):if...abhay n me.no..what r u thinking piya..he is a nice guy n i told him na that i m not ready so he did not do this without my permission..
Piya(thought):if abhay without my permission.n she start crying,than she turned toward her bed n she see that she n abhay lying on bed n kissing.
Then she see her saree in such a state.she again start crying.
Piya:no..its not happen no..now she shouts:No..
Abhay comes n see piya that she crying
Abhay:what happen piya..what happen.
Piya stood up n start walking towards abhay n said:u done this to me.
Abhay:i cant understand.
Piya:i thought u r lovely caring innocent guy but u not..i told u that i m not ready but u..i don,t beleive it..n start crying..
Abhay:piya plzz tell me aur seedhay seedhay batao
Piya slap him hard n again start crying:abhay tum toh aisay react kar rahay ho jaisay kuch hua hi nhi hai..don,t be innocent...i said i want time but no.
Abhay:i love u piya..so how i..
Piya:i don,t beleive this..
Abhay:piya u don,t love me..i thought u love me..but no u even not trust md..beleive me..but not..u did not even listen to me...
Abhay starts crying..
Abhay:if u said i done this then prove it..
Piya also crying n points toward at bed😆
Abhay(thought)he laugh or cry..laugh because of such a cheap thing n night.or cry because she don,t love him,trust him,care him,beleive him not..
Piya(whilr sobbing):say tell me..
Abhay:this is prove but meray pass is say bhi bara prove hai mobile..
Piya saw his n piya jumping n laughing pics on ph.
Piya(thought):u..piya..u r just a silly,selfish n abhay is so nice,lovely but u what u did.u slap him.he love u..but u slap him not even trust him..
Guitly r now full on piya eyes..abhay eyes is now in tears.
Piya eyes could not meet eyes.
After a silence piya said:i m sorry.i know sorry is a..
Before she could complete her sentence abhay said:not need to be..u don,t love me,beleive me,trust me..u not so why is now sorry word huh.his words r so simple n lovely that piya is accepted that he shout at her,hurt her but no.
Piya:i thought that..
Before piya could comeplete her sentence abhay left piya.
Before left her he said:get up n breakfast is ready.
Piya start crying n fell on ground n said:i m very very bad,selfish..i broke abhay heart..he love me so much n i..what i did..i even did not trust him...i slap him..he is so nice..i m falling 4..
Before piya could comeplete her sentense piya releize she got up n ready..
She went downstair n said servent:where is abhay.
Servent:don,t know mam.he left while crying..
Piya (heart like crying):oh did abhay took his breakfast.
Servent:no mam.when u r sleeping.he said that kay aap aur vo dk sath karegay but us kay baad aapnay room sai bahar aaye n chalay gaye.
Piya:kya unho nai kuch kaha.
Servent:no mam.is everything alright.
Piya:yea yea..(try to handle the situation)
Servent:mai aap kai liye breakfast ready karti hu..
Piya:no need..i don,t wanna eat..
Servent nodded her head n left.
Piya(thought):agar tum nai nhi breakfast kiya toh mai kaisay.
A tear rolled from piya eye,s..
At 2:00 pm evening.
Piya is waiting 4 abhay.because she prepared many dishes 4 abhay..madhu help her,but piya noy even eat a single bit of food beacuse abhay is also not eaten..she is now very hungry n nervouse because she first time made abhay favourite food.piya said:hope u forgive me..uff i m so hungrh plzz abhay come fast😆if i m hungry he is also same hungry then she laugh a little.
Piya again went downstair suddenly she see that abhay is coming with T hand in hand.
Piya(feel like someone slap him)
She went near abhay n T n said:Hii T.how r u..
T:me f9 babhi how r u..
Piya:me also.
Piya feel again jealous to see abhay held T hand.
Piya:abhay come n havd dinner n u also T.
Abhay:we have our dinner in a restaurant.
Piya,s heart broken into pieces.
Piya:u n T together.
T:yea bhabhi..he is really hungry so i join him.
Piya(feeling sad because mehnat gayi baar mai)😆
T:abhay bye..bhabhi u too bye..
T hug piya n kissed her.
N then T hug abhay n kissed his cheek:n said bye.
Abhay:bye too.
Piya again heart broke after seeing that T kiss abhay cheek.
Piya(thought):whu i m feeling so jealouse then she close her eyes n remember the last night when she kiss abhay.
T left abhiya alone.
Piya:abhay do u want a cofee n tea.
Abhay(try to sound nice not to show his pain):no..i have it with T.
Piya now could not take it anymore she start crying n ran towards their room n lock the door from inside.
Abhay(thought):what happen to piya..why she is crying n left..what happen..
Abhay moved towards their room when servent stop him n said:sir..have a dinner..
Abhay:i have my dinner.
Servent:but bhabi made it 4 u..
Abhay:she ate.
Servent:no sir she said when u cone then u both take it together..
Abhay:oh shit.,did she had her breakfast..
Servent:no sir..i said her again n again but she said that u also don,t then why she..
Abhay(heart broken):ok.
Abhay(thought):tum nai meray liye breakfast nhi kiya sur mai..uff aur ab dinner bhi nhi,.what i have done..aur tum T ko dekh kar jealouse ho rahi thi..its mean (a big smile)
Abhay knocked at door..pita open the door n see that abhay is standing..
Abhay pick piya up n help her to sit on bed.
Abhay broke the silence n said:breakfast kiya.
Piya nodded in no.. N said:tum bhi toh nhi kiya.
Abhay:mujhsay naraz ho..
Piya start crying:naraz toh tum ho.abhay..
Abhay:mai apni wife sai kaisay naraz reh sakta hu.
Piya:really u forgive me..how slap me.
Abhay(smile):r u mental i n slap u..don,t even in dream..
Piya:abhay slap me..i slapped u na,.i m so bad n selfish.
Abhay:no piya u r right at ur own side n i m own..now forget it..
Piya(smiles):abhay ek cheez puchu.
Abhay:huh..
Piya:abhay raat ko kya hua tha..mai aur tum bilkul bacho ki tarha thay us pic mai..
Abhay stood up n start laughing loudly..
He try to stop him but could not..
Piya is now hurt.piya again start crying:abhay tell me if u not then.
Abhay(stop himself):piya kal ko tum ek bachii ban gayi thi bilkul 5 years old ki aur tumhay patah hai tum kya kar rahi thi(abhay told her all the incident)
Piya also start laughing n feeling so shy..abhay kept teasing piya about her behaviour..
Piya hitting abhay chest:abhay stop it u know jab humari bachii itni bari hogi na toh phir tumhay pata chalay gaa.
Piya not even notice what she said
Abhay:really..but usay mai humari bedsheet kharab nhi karnay doogaa.
Piya:voh karegii.yea
Abhay:no..
Piya start hitting abhay n then with start throwing him pillows,
After 2 hours of their cute,lovely moments..
Abhay:bas piya u know tumnay aaj mujay bohat maraa hai..
Piya:abhi baki hai...
Abhay then remember:piya slap me..
Piya:r u mad me not...
Abhay:piya tumnay meray liye dinner bhi nhi kiya.aur tumnay toh subha ka nhi,.
Piya:yea i m very very very hungry.
Abhay pick piya up n pocess toward their dinig table..
Abhay took bit n said:yummy..i just loved it..n kissed her both hands.
Piya smile.abhay said:ab meri baari..abhay make piya eat all dishes one by one..piya is dnjoying food beacuse abhay fed up with his hand.
Piya:i m now full now ur turn..
Abhay(try to run away):piya bas aur nhi mai itna nhi khaa sakta i m human na..
Piya:now whay u had a dinner with T.
Abhay:someone is jealous no..
Piya:n why she kissed u..
Abhay:someone is jealouse huh..tum toh mujhay karti nhi ho.toh ab T nai hi karni hai..
Piya kissed abhay cherk n said:now understand i m ur wife..agar ab tum us T ko lekar aaye toh i swear.
Abhay:ok toh yeh baat hai...ok piya me gonna sleep now..
Piya:u have to finish it all.
Abhay stood uo😆piya excuse me..
Piya:where r u going.
Abhay:washroom😆
Piya:i know u very well sit n eat.
Abhay(puppy face):ok madam.
Piya kissed abhay cheek n said:me too sleeping..
Abhay(thought):i love u piya..i know u will love me too..i see in ur eyes that u love me,care about me..but u r fighting from ur heart but soon u will win from ur heart n accept me as ur in true senses
Abhay then kissed her forehead n pick her up towards their bedroom.


Edited by Aish-Naksh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
part B
Next morning
At breakfast table.
Abhay:ummh,i forget to tell u that T arrange a dinner for us at her house.so get ready at night ok..we r going.
Piya:hmm..u r not angry on me na.now..
Abhay(smiles):yea i m still angry on u(try to make fake angry face)
Piya:u said u forgive me.
Abhay:u broke my heart..
Piya:i m sorry.really sorry.
Abhay now turn to see piya at his reaction tears rolled from her eyes.
Abhay(now worried):oh i m lying..i forgive u..now..stop..crying..i can,t see tears in ur eyes.plzz forgive me..i was just playing with u..
Piya(now stop criying):abhay.u r such a big liar..(hit on his shoulder)
Abhay:plzz stop it yar its hurting me.
Piya(again hits on his chest):no its ur punishment.
Abhay(innocent face):plzz.
Piya(smiles):oh,,ummh...okk.
Abhay:piya abhi kuch hi dair pehlay meray ek client ka ph aaya tha..aaj humara office mai bohat important meeting hai.so i have to go now..if u want anything servents r here 4 u..i will come at night n then we will go T,s place..r u agree??
Piya(smiles):ok..but..
Abhay:but.
Piya:what will i wear at night?i mean.
Abhay:u can wear anything..because tum meray liye aisay hi rahogi humasha.
The whole day passed like few hours.abhay called piya 6/8 times to asked her that she is getting bore or anything...
At night abhiya room.
Abhay:what r u doing piya.get ready na..we r getting late..
Piya:abhay only two mins.
Piya open the door,she is really nervouse because she wear a saree gifted by abhay.
Piya:abhay kya hua..tum mujay aisay kyu dekh rahay ho.
Abhay:piya u r looking very very beautiful..i must say u r my angle.
Piya(blush at abhay cmnt):now ab jaana nhi hai.
Abhay:no..
Piya(hits abhay chest):what u mean...
Abhay:u know..
Piya:i know u know.
Abhay:u know
Piya:stop this.
At T house.
T welcome them..she hug piya n also hug abhay n said hi n also kiss his cheek.
Piya(thought)(her mind said):why i m feeling so jealouse u know that u love jay n only jay but why.abhay is ur great frnd piya..so just chill.
Piya,s heart said:piya he is ur husband not only ur frnd.he is ur husband n how u bear that someone kissing n hugging ur husband..
Piya:uff i m gonna mad..
Abhay:kuch kaha..
Piya:no.
T:come inside i will show u my house.
Piya:ummh T ur parents i mean we three r alone..no one is coming except us..
T:my parents r died n yea some frnds r coming like alina,kabir,ruhi,angad u know them bhabhi..
Piya:yea..
After an hour piya visit T whole house.
Whole gang also arrive at their house.
Ruhi points at abhay cheek n said(teasing manner):bhabhi kissed abhay..n here how romantic..
Alina:wah..how romantic couple.
Abhay(who is try to handle this situation)
T:hey i kissed abhay not bhabhi..she is sharmili.
Piya:(who is want to cry like someone slap her..she is really very felt bad)
Ruhi:sorry bhabhi i thought.
Piya:its ok.ruhi its not ur fault after all.
Aleena:forgive us bhabhi..
Piya:its ok..i said u na..
Abhay(though):i know piya felt very bad n dispointed..i know she don,t like T much.
At dinner
Abhay:piya where r u lost??huh..eat.
Piya:ummh..abhay give me some water.
Abhay:hmm..
Kabir broke the silence n said:bhabhi so do u know k abhay ka favourite food konsa hai??
Piya was about to say..at her surprised T quickly said:chiness rice..
Piya again felt bad.sadness visible on her face..again she said:why i m feeling so sad n jealouse.again her mind n heart fight with each other..
T(to abhay):right abhay..
Abhay(smile):yea..
Alina:so bhabhi abhay ka favourite colour kon sa hai..
Abhay:alina stop this..piya is getting bored..
Piya:red..
Alina to abhay:abhay..piya,s ans is wrong or right..
Abhay:yea right..
T:but abhay u said that ur favourite colour black then why u lie.
Alina:yea abhay,s favourite colour is black..
Piya:abhay wanna go now...
Abhay(totally surprized by piya,s reaction):but piya.
Piya:abhay i said..
Abhay:ok.
Piya:bye everyone..
T come n again hug abhay n kissed him on his cheeks n said:see u later abhay.sweet dreams.
Abhay:same here T.will meet with u again soon..
T:bhabhi c u later..thanks 4 coming..
Piya: oh its ok..
At riachand mension.
Piya change her dress.n without saying a word she lay on bed.n satrt thinking Tanushri n abhay moments.
Piya(thought):why i m feeling so sad..n jealouse..like i m falling in love...
Her mind said:anyways left it..u have not a right on abhay..hope abhay love T..
Heart:he is ur husband piya..n he love u..n u also try to love him..n remember why T kiss abhay infront of u..his wife..
Piya:uff i m gonna mad..what is happening to me..
Abhay who is coming out of washroom n said:kuch kaha..car mai bhi tum khud sai hi baatein kar rahi thi..
Piya:nothing like this..
Abhay:r u sure?
Piya(smile):yea..
Abhay also come near piya n also.lay beside piya.
Piya(thought):what is happening..
Abhay switch off the lights n said:piya now sleep...its really late..
Piya(sleep isn,t coming into piya eye,s because she is fighting with her feeling)
Piya:abhay i m not sleeping..
Abhay:so..
Piya:so what..
Abhay:but i m sleeping na..
Piya hits abhay with pillow n said:wake up..
Abhay switch on the lights n said:what happen.
Piya now put her arms towards abhay chest n said:abhay can i ask u something..
Abhay(half sleep):huh..
Piya:T likes u..
Abhay now full waked n said:why she like me piya..she is my frnd..
Piya:no abhay..i know she love u..
Abhay:piyaaa...anyways tumhay yeh kisnay sochnay par majboor kiya..
Piya:T nai..
Abhay:reason..
Piya:she kissed u so many times n also hugged u..
Abhay now start laughing at her innocent wife:piya r u mad...
Piya(shouts):seedhay seedhay bolo.
Abhay:mujay toh is dunya ki har larki nai kiss kiya hai toh is ka matlab yeh toh nhi k vo mujhsay pyaar karti hai...for example tumnai bhi toh kiya..but
Abhay not even notice what he said..but piya is feeling so much sad n also jealouse n also guilt at same time..that abhay need love.but..
Abhay:its now very late night..now sleep ok.
Piya nodded her head in yes..but she is so jealouse,sad n also feel guilty..she kissed abhay cheek n said:good night..abhay smiles n also kissed her
1 month later..leap
Before the one month:
The whole month passed like a machine..at evening piya waited for abhay..she now missed abhay badly because he attend his office works...she busy her with some books,novels n also some newspaper..now it was her hobby that she prepared different dishes for him..abhay was impressed n happy..piya was also began to like abhay more...because he spare specially sometion for her to go for shopping,dinner n different places..he also take piya to her parents house..after week by week..he was taking good care of her..n now piya is more comfortable in the house..
Present:
Piya was making baryaani for abhay..piya,s ph rings..she pick it up at first time..because she knows very well who is at the ph..
Before abhay say something..
Piya said:hows ur day??
Abhay:boring n ur??
Piya:making food for u..
Abhay:really..which??
Piya:not so easy mr.riachand..wait some more time..
Abhay(smile):oh really..
Piya(smile):yea i m serious.
Abhay try to play with piya..because he used to tease n play with piya..
Abhay(smirks):anyways..u know i had my dinner.n also some kisses..
Piya(jealouse):abhay...aaj ghar toh aanay do..dekhna mai kaisi khabar leti..
Abhay:oh piya.. U take it..
Piya:so what u said...ab dinner kar kai aana ok.bye..
Piya was also playing with her naughty abhay...she said:tum nhi jaanty kay ms.piya sab jaanti hai...
On the other hand abhay:ab toh gaya tu abhay n smiles..n picked his mobile where his n piya pic on wallpaper..he smiled n kissed the pic..n said:i love u my jaan..
At 4:00 pm.
Piya,s wait for abhay is now difficult n also she want to meet abhay n she was not able to wait a min now.
The door knocked..piya ran toward the door n hug abhay tightly n kissed his cheeks n his forehead..
N said:itni late why..
Abhay(smile):oh really..so someone was waiting for me n missing me..but i heard that someone is going to kill me..
Piya puts her hand on abhay mouth n said with all love:i m not angry n never thought n say such a words ok..understand..
Abhay:yea..now i m very very very hungry..
Piya:ok tumnai abhi tak dinner nhi kiya..
Abhay kissed her hands n said:kaisa kar sakta hu jab meri beautiful si wife nai meray liye beautiful dinner banaya hai huh..waisay meri wife nai kiya..
Piya blush deeply n said:no..
Abhay:what..piya agar mai late ho jau toh is ka matlab yeh nhi hai kai tum dinner na karo...
Piya(smiles):we dinner together na..
Abhay:so u r hungry more then me..
Piya:no not like u..but umhhh thora sa..n yea i remember u said on the ph that some girls kissed u..huj.
Abhay:darling its just a joke.


Edited by Aish-Naksh - 12 years ago

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