Murder in Retrospect.Last Chp P139,140 Feb13

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Seema

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Posted: 12 years ago

#931

first of all it was not a boring chapter at all it was rather a v v interesting and a realistic update.loved it.ye book parrtay parrtay may b sherlock holmes ban jaonga and credit will definitely go to u.thanx for pm and continue soon.

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Disha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#932

Originally posted by: mandy1024

It was defo not a boring update Dishu 😛 Its necessary that u come up with a plot that will build on the suspense element n u have done a wonderful job at it 👏 I somehow find Dr. Roy creepy 😕 Dont feel like trusting him 🤔 Y do I feel he is misleading Abhiya? 😕 I hope they get their answers in Italy n loved their argument 😆 Abhay will never tell Pia anything abt his suspicions as he knows Pia may do something reckless that will alert the culprit 😉 Please do update soon 😃

i somehow did not like this chappy much. i was yawning while writing it.😆 as for Dr. Roy, hmmm... wait and watch😉 as for Italy, they may or may not move ahead with their detectivegiri.😆

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Disha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#933

Originally posted by: nidu_dsena
unres
ok first of all its not at all boring
so abhay suspected d murder good abhay isse toh detective hona chahiye..abhiya off to italy ok..pia ki tarah mai bhi budhu hun toh mujhe samajh nhi aaya abi tak who is gonna b d murderer..so still lot of confusion for me..waiting for nxt chappy update soon..btw awesome update as usual..

thnx dear. and things r gonna get adventurous from next update tho in all i guess only 3 updates are left now.

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Disha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#934

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-
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ohk...everything was really fast...and mere kuch palle nai pada ecxept that abhiya had flown to italy and maya had replied to the ad...well baki ka...plz explain...

ruhi replied to the ad not maya. and baaki ka i cant explain yet na. things will start getting clearer from next update.

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Disha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#935

Originally posted by: fabliha
lovely update 👏pia & abhay's nokjhok was soo sweet... 😉

nok jhonks between lovely couples is always sweet 😳

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Disha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#936

Originally posted by: Alicia2001
wow great story plz update soon
it's geting really good now
thanks for the pm

thanks alicia. the story is gonna get adventurous now and will end in probably 3 updates

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Disha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#937

Originally posted by: Monami_50
Lovely update.Abhiya off to Italy now..interesting

yup to meet Angelo 😳

Originally posted by: pkyekrox
Very nice upd8!! Do cont soooN!!!

thnx gauri

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Disha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#938

Originally posted by: lost_in_love
that was just fav dishu !! 👏 it was boring in no way..instead the feel of excitement b4 the start of an expedition was there..👍🏼 just thrilling!! 👏
awaiting the next part. Plz update soon..

thnx indu, and ya as u know now the things will get adventurous

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Disha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#939

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--
How can u say this is boring?
This is awesome!!!
Does Abhay really know who it is? Who does he suspect? Why did he say it was beneficial to meet them?
Going to read the whole FF again... Maybe it will help :P

he surely suspects, but he wants to be sure before taking any action 😉