Murder in Retrospect.Last Chp P139,140 Feb13

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flora212

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Posted: 13 years ago

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IT WAS JUST AWSOME DISHU...DO PM ME...I😛 KNOW I DONT I DONT COMMENT ON UR FFS..😭.PAR I READ THEM!! BUSY WITH STUDIES...

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harinisriram39

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Nice one Dishu. But I hope no tragedies in this FF, esp leading to Abhay and Piya permanent separation.

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Trishna

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Posted: 13 years ago

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wow dishu another story, i think its ur first writing on abhiya which is not supernatural... and ya its my fist experions wid dis story as i never read any such novel of agatha "The sleepy murder"... i dont knw anything but waiting 4 ur update of 1st part to get the sketch of story... and its gud dat abhiya are married... ya pm me dear

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Disha

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: harinisriram39
Nice one Dishu. But I hope no tragedies in this FF, esp leading to Abhay and Piya permanent separation.

my stories never have abhiya separation harry.😳 not even a break up

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bellaaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

wow dishu waiting 4 it
cont soon

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sadia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

i am glad you come up with one more ,nice cs and concept waiting for chapter

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Monami Tasnim

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Yipeee.U came up with a new idea.I ws feeling upset after the ending of Chronicles of Life.Nw we have a new FF/SS 2 read.

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harinisriram39

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: ..dishu..

my stories never have abhiya separation harry.😳 not even a break up

Oh Dishu, Love you for this. Just wanted to ask you. Any specific reasons for killing Chandeena and Danish & Panchi ? Or will this be shown as a flash back?

Jeh is married to T. You won't believe me, but I so much wanted this in the show, in case PKYEK continued. Its not just love failure for Jeh, but some thing much more seeing Abhay win and losing out Piya to him. And I thought that meanie T will take this advantage and marry him so that she would be constantly plotting something evil in his mind to separate Abhay and Piya. Ofcourse not just like a college bimbo, but like something possessed T and she badly wanted to separate Piya and Abhay.

I also wanted a much more powerful Alina, though not portrayed as the good , peace loving girl, but as some one who has been discarded and treated as dirt and one who never leaves an opportunity to gain her family's affection which makes her dumb enough to even go against Abhay, yet not wanting to let any harm befall him.

I wish I could think creatively Dishu. But I get struck and am not able to imagine the story track beyond.

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Disha

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: harinisriram39
Oh Dishu, Love you for this. Just wanted to ask you. Any specific reasons for killing Chandeena and Danish & Panchi ? Or will this be shown as a flash back?
Jeh is married to T. You won't believe me, but I so much wanted this in the show, in case PKYEK continued. Its not just love failure for Jeh, but some thing much more seeing Abhay win and losing out Piya to him. And I thought that meanie T will take this advantage and marry him so that she would be constantly plotting something evil in his mind to separate Abhay and Piya. Ofcourse not just like a college bimbo, but like something possessed T and she badly wanted to separate Piya and Abhay.

I also wanted a much more powerful Alina, though not portrayed as the good , peace loving girl, but as some one who has been discarded and treated as dirt and one who never leaves an opportunity to gain her family's affection which makes her dumb enough to even go against Abhay, yet not wanting to let any harm befall him.

I wish I could think creatively Dishu. But I get struck and am not able to imagine the story track beyond.

Abhay's parents were simply not required and Pia's parents being dead form the crux of this story. There will be no Panchi even in flashback. Though there will be Danish in flashbacks. even in the CS as I mentioned, i dont think Jeh, Sid, Alina or Kabir would have anything to do here. THe story most probably will revolve around Abhiya with Misha and T helping them. Basically as I mentioned in the disclaimer, that this concept is not mine, so I have to keep the characters in mind regards to the original story 😳