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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#811

hey just caught up with all the last 5 updates...!!

wow!!! the story is going awesuummm dear...!!!! 👏hmm...so pia now knows about abhay's dreams...she is having a feeling that he is her abhayendra but her mind is rejecting the idea..! on the other hand abhay is happy n excited to meet her again...!!😳

loved the library scene...n their convo too..! 😊hm..alina didnot like seeing them together...n sidh is back...!wonder wat effect it will create...!!

waiting for the next..plz updat soon...! tc..

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@.Chashmish.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#812

A great upd sayu , loved it story getting More n more intresting , loving it . Loved abhiya convo wonder wars with piya and Sid , jaldi upd 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

#813

Hey friends ! A biiig sorry at first this time I couldn't reply anyone of u by comment , coz I didn get sufficient time due to my increasing study load 😔 but I read them all and am very much thankful to u all for liking my writting and encouraging me so much 😛 nowadays m too much busy in studies , thats why Update comes a little late . Sorry for keeping you all waiting , finally the wait is over 😃 , m updating within 10 mins 😊

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670134

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Posted: 13 years ago

#814

Update 17

It was just another beautiful morning in Dehradun . As soon as the early ray of sun showed its sign , cool breeze of early morning started to scatter a little shievering but still so comforting sensation , birds started chirping to welcome another morning with their song . Abhay opens his eyes slowly as a little light of early has fallen on his face troubling his sleep . Abhay seats up on the arm chair & looks at his whereabouts while rubbing his eyes . Yesterday he slept at balcony ? On an arm chair ? Oh ya , he was thinking something standing here & when felt sleepy he was not in mood to go back to room , he fell asleep seating on this armchair . Abhay passes his fingers through his hairs and looks forward . His eyes get broaden up in surprise , the last trail of sleepyness too vanished ! Piya ! He is seeing Piya in front of him just now ! What is she doing here ? Abhay notices a cup in her hand . Piya came to give him coffee ? Abhay keeps staring at her with broadening eyes . Now she speaks out " what are you seeing like this ? Take it , I have other works too !" , but Abhay still kee's staring on her like a statue . Now she holds his hand and dipped his 1 finger in that mug of hot coffee . Ouchhh ! Its too hot ! Abhay pulls his hand back then and there and observes it well , no it did not burn , but still why she did this ? Abhay looks up to her and gets surprised again to find Haseena standing there . Not Piya , its Haseena who came to give him coffee ! Abhay stammers in surprise "Mm-Mom ! You ?"
Haseena replies in an irritated tone " Ya me , you are behaving like you saw a ghost ! Just take it !" she gives the mug to him & leaves .
Abhay keeps seating there totally paused , totally speechless in surprise . It was Haseena , why he thought its Piya ? Is it a result of thinking about her too much ? A faint , but a sweet smile gets painted on his face , he takes a sip from the mug . Coffee did not taste so tasteful to him before . He stands up , while roaming around to and fro he finishes his coffee and looks up outside . Today everything seems to be so different , so beautiful to him . As if nature is smilling in joy ! Abhay looks down , the flowers in the garden are attracting him too much ! The butterflies which are flying from one flower to another asking him to come down , to see them from close . He himself gets amazed to think from when did he become so nature lover ? But the fact is today he is just loving everything that coming in his vision . He comes back to his room & gets freshen up quick . While leaving for garden , his eyes get stopped on the Guitar hanging from the wall . He remembers how much in love he was with it , but now ...now he hardly gets time for it . But today everything seemed to get changed for him . He takes the guitar from there and comes to garden . He never knew in early morning it feels so great to be so close to nature . On every move he is getting a new surprise , as if the wind is whispering something , the nature on whole telling an interesting tell . Abhay pulls 1 string of the guitar and its rhythmic noise made him more happy . After a long time today again he is feeling to sing .
Abhay spared a little time on the screws and strings and finally starts in a low tone , as if he is singing for himself only , he is unfolding the mysteries his heart bearing to himself only ...

"Kyu hawa aj yu ga raha hai
kyu fiza rang chalka raha hai
mere dil bata aj hona hai kya
chandni din me kyu cha rahi hai
zindgi kistaraf ja rahi hai
mere dil bata kya hai ye silsila
kyu hawa aj yu ga rahi ga rahi ga rahi hai !"

his fingers keep playing with the guiter's strings , while he looks to and fro and a beautiful red rose attracts his eyes

"ye kiski hai chehra jise main
har ek ful me dekhta hu
ye kiski chahra jise main
har ek ful me dekhta hu
ye kiski hai awaz jisko
na sunke vi main sun raha hu
kaisi ye ahate a rahi hai
kaisi ye khwab dikhla rahi hai
mere dil bata ye kahani hai kya
kyu hawa aj yu ga rahi hai ga rahi hai ga rahai hai..."

he was totally lost in his own world , when a sound of clapping brings him back to sense . He stops his song & guiter and turns back and finds Alina standing behind him . Before he could speak out anything Alina speaks up " Wao ! Amazing ! Seeing this guitar back in your hand after such a long time ! It seems like you are very happy today ?"
Abhay feels a little bit irritated , what is she doing so early of morning here ? Doesn't she has her own works ? But still replies in a gentle tone " Nothing special , just my eye fell on it & thought to play . Nothing more "
"Oh.." now Alina requests "one more please !"
"No ! " Abhay replies in a harsh tone"I didn't even brush till now . First I need to get ready ." & he leaves for his room without allowing her to speak further . He is feeling indeed annoyed . How beautiful this morning was , how nice it was to sing after such a long time ! But everything spoiled within a minute ! Abhay keeps his guitar on the bed & heads to the washroom . He splashes the cold water on his face , cherished the cold sensation closing his eyes for sometimes . He opens his eyes a little later to take the towel , but before that he gives a pause , he is seeing a beautiful face in mirror as if she is standing just behind him . Abhay turns back surprisingly , but as he knew no one was there in thd closed washroom . Abhay opens the shower , he is really puzzled now , he saw Piya 2 times from morning while he knows it very well that she is not here . Whats all this happening ?

Alina was talking to Haseena , but Haseena's words were not entering her ears , she was lost in thoughts somewhere . Abhay answered her so rudely ! She is noticing , just after their engagement he has changed so strangly ! He used to talk to her more politely before engagement , but in past 2 days he has been quiet rude to her . Why ? Why is he behaving so strange ! Alina heaves a deep sigh . She wish she could know it !

IN DOBRIYAL MANSION

Arnab was seating on a sofa in his room . He was impatiently waiting for Piya and Panchi to come . Panchi enters the room and informs "Piya is coming" before she could finish , Piya comes there . On the first sight her eyes strikes on a man seating on the sofa just next to Arnab . Siddharth Mehra ! Siddharth ! Piys notices him well , he did not change a little in this long 25 years . Thats nothing new , Piya herself everyday looks at mirror that change could not make its mark on her too . Piya is damn sure not only in looks , but in mind too Siddharth is still the same Siddharth , a cheater ! A betrayer ! Piya moves his face otherside so that she does not get to see him much . Siddharth was staring at Piya still now , as soon as she moved her head to avoid him , his face becomes pale , no doubt she hates him still now . She still thinks that he was respinsible for all those what happened in long past . Arnab starts bringing out an old , almost torn paper "Finally Siddharth found it . This is the map which will guide us to the temple in full moon night . So now we have gathered up everything to taste success . Now we are just one step away from that potion & that step is that key . Now we want the 3rd part at any cost !" Arnab looks up to Piya " Piya , it was your responsibility , you got to know about it ?"
Piya looks back to Arnab in a confusing eye , how can she make him understand that she just did not get time for it ! Suddenly so many strange things are coming in her ways , she has to put lots of effort just to come out of them ! She hardly gets time to concentrate on this . But she can not answer this to Arnab , she says in a low tone "didn get it till now , but am hopeful will get to know about it very soon ."
Arnab replies " Hope this soon means really soon !" he looks up to everyone , and resumes again " By the way Siddharth wants to tell us something , he is saying its important ! Lets listen to him "
Siddharth stands up and says " Yes , its really important , infact its so much important that may be we need to think again should we really do that we all are aiming for !"
Arnab asks in restless tone " what do you mean by that !"
"I mean danger !" Siddharth replies"while researching on this , I got to know this potion is not only magical to us vampires , but for werewolves too ! When it comes to get the potion , we should not forget this potion actually belongs to those werewolves . Its their heritage . So if they come to know that we are searching for it, they will leave no stone unturned to stop us . We must be alert before making every moves !"
"Werewolves !" Piya whispers in surprise , she never imagined she had to gone through this word in this life again ! She sighes , fate has been always cruel to her .
Panchi seems to be unfamilier to this new word . She asks "Werewolves ? Now whats this ?"
Siddharth explains " Werewolves are a special breed of wolves who has power to shape shift in humans like us . They also lives within humans , wearing a human's mask just like us . I am surprised , you didn't know about them before ?"
Panchi nods her head in form of no , Arnab seems to get annoyed " Siddharth ! I think you are thinking about them too much ! These werewolves are present in earth from centuries ago , I agree many time we faught , sometimes we won , sometimes they won . But I don't think they can create any problem for us this time . "
Siddharth says in a serious tone " Let me complete , then give your opinion . I think they are just waiting to get chance to create problem for us . You know yesterday when I landed here , I felt a weird sensation that was telling me there presence . They are present in Dehradun ! Just then when we are searching for the potion ! Do you think its a coincidence ? Not at all ! They knows very well what we are upto . They are just keeping silent eyes on us . When passing through the jungle yest night I sensed a strong aura , which indicates , the most strong , most powerful werewolf , or should I say the leader of their clan is currently in Dehradun . Now you tell , what are they doing here ? I think they are also researching on the potion and they too have reached Dehradun . May be following us , or may be individually . But the thing is a huge devastating disaster coming in our way through the path of that potion . They are just getting prepared to welcome us . " Siddharth stops .
"Hmm..." now Arnab too sounded serious " So strange , they are here ! Perhaps we have even meet them , still we don't know who are they ."
"Yes , they have hidden their face perfectly . We can sense them only when they are in wolf form , but its sad that we will not be able to recognise them when they will come in human form ."
"Hmm...it would be really foolish to even think about fighting with them . They are more in number than us and currently they have their leader with them which has enhanced their power more ."Arnab says in a worried tone .
"Yes ! I think we should inform our superiors , may be they help us out ?" Siddharth suggests .
"Yes , you are right ." Arnab seems to agree .
Piya was not feeling much keen to listen all this discussions . She is just amazed , in last two days , just in two days everything got puzzled up in her mind . She wish , she could catch someone to solve those puzzles , but perhaps no one in this earth can help her out , she herself has to solve them , though she is not sure she will be able to do so or not . She silently leaves from there .

Its alomost 6pm of evening . Abhay was seating on a sofa in his room , opening his laptop , but he is feeling too reluctant to work . His mind is fully engrossed in some other thought . Today he could not manage a single glimpse of her . Its so strange ! Yesterday he wanted to escape from her , but destiny pulled her infront of him again and again . And today ? Today he was so much eager to meet her , but she did not come to college even ! Abhay feels really disappointed . He closes his laptop and takes his bike's keys , suddenly then Misha entered his room .
"Hey Champu ! Where are you going ?" she starts like a storm .
"Umm...don't know...just ...why ?"
"Then comedown to hall " and without waiting for his reply , she starts to pull him holding his hand .
"Wait ! Why do I need to go to hall ?" Abhay enquires .
"Ohh ! Just now the photographer delivered your engagement pics . We all are going to watch those , but not obviously not without you . Come na !" Misha sounds impatient .
Engagement pics ! Abhay's mood suddenly went off . But still he silently follows his sister . At hall he founds a lots of photos scattered on the center table and everyone watching them with great amazement . Alina picks up a photo where she was putting the ring on his finger , while blushing scarlet red , she shows it to Abhay " hey look ! You were looking so handsome here !"
Alina was expecting that Abhay too will praise her saying she was also looking beautiful & all , but again dissapointing her Abhay keeps watching other photos . Suddenly he stops at one photo . Perhaps this is the only photo Abhay found most beautiful . That photo clicked Piya alone . Only her close up . Dressed in a white salwar she was really looking like a fairy that day . Abhay remembers, for the first time when he saw her from so close , her frightened baby brown eyes , hesitating pink lips...all were mesmerising him so much ! Abhay looks up , everyone is busy in seeing photos , no one is noticing him , Abhay slowly picks up that photo & keeps it in his pocket . Now Abhay speaks up to Misha " Hey Mish ! I forgot my cell in my room , give me your cell , I need to make a call ."
Misha , being totally absorped in the photos , doesn't even looks back to him , silently passes her cell to him . Abhay smiles a little , he hopes whats he searching , he will get in her phone . Abhay secretly opens the contact list and searched for P . Oh great ! Only one name existing there & its Piya ! Abhay reads the number again and again so that he does not forget it later , and then gives back her phone to Misha and says " No ! I think I should use my cell for the call . Sorry , but am leaving , just now I remembered an important work " & leaves for his room without staying for a single second there increasing Alina's level of dissapointment one step more .
Abhay comes back to his room and shuts the door . Huh ! Finally he got it ! Abhay picks up his cell and entered Piya's number . But...he stops before pressing the green button . What will he talk to her ? He just hopes she will not feel annoyed to talk to him . Umm...atleast he can asks if she reached home yestnight safely or not . Or why didn't she come college today , is she ok or not . Abhay keeps thinking for sometime and finally presses the green button . As soon as the ringing sound started , Abhay discovers his heart is beatting faster , suddenly the ringing sound stopped , Abhay feels as if his heart will now punce out of his body as he heard a soft , familier voice replying from otherside "Hello !"

Edited by Saayaniz - 13 years ago

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670134

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Posted: 13 years ago

#815

Hey friends update 17 is posted 😊 for the first time I tried to write dreaming scenes & singing scene , donno how did it turned 😕 waiting for ur precious comments , plzz leave a comment after reading and if you liked it don't forget to hit the like button plz 😃

Edited by Saayaniz - 13 years ago

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#816

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wow!! lovely cute update!!!! 👏 i so loved it!!! ❤️

loved the way u showed abhay's feelings...he playing the gituer,appreciating nature's beauty,seeing pia in his imagination every now n then was very wonderfully written...!!!!!👏 the way he was dying to meet her n finally managing to get her number..was really cute!!! 😳

pia is disturbed seeing sid...n sid seems not bad here...they want the potion whereas pia is nt at all interested! 😛

great!! finally pia picksup the call...lets see how she reacts n wat abhay says...! 😳

awiting the next update eagerly!!! 😊

tc...

Edited by lost_in_love - 13 years ago

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pia surve

@piaviviandsena

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#817

amazing update princess!! i hope abhay ko jaldi reliase ho jaye tht he luv's pia!!😳! agyhhh tht silly alina subah-subah mere abhay ka mood kharab krne aa gyi!! 😡 hey khurana's hi warewolf's he kya?? wht is sid & pia's past?? next 1 plz update soon!! 😛 thax fr pm!! 😊

Edited by i_luv_abhiya - 13 years ago

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Monami Tasnim

@Monami_50

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#818

Superb update.Luvd it.Alina is so chipku,hamesha abhay se chipak ne ki kosish me rehti hain nd uska mood kharab kar deti hain.Eagerly waiting 4 abhiya convo in next chappy

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Kakoli

@MistiAbhiya

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#819

wahooo sayu ...sooo romantic dear😊our Abhay really sooo romantic mood😊uff ye kab me hadi Alina😡kab niklegi Abhiya ki beach me se...wahooo Abhay call pia😳...jeh werewolf hai na?wht past piya,sid & Abheyendra?wish 2 know soon..update asap😊