New ff- the fateful night bk2 updt on pg 138 2/11

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#751

fab update to black witch aa gaya...!gud gud story aage badhai jaye😉

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Posted: 13 years ago

#752

@Rumk it is just a Feb parts ,i am looking forward to story ...hope they will find piya soon thanks for pm

Edited by love-piya-abhay - 13 years ago

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Ayesha khan

@abhiya4evr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#753

awsome romi 🤗 🤗 i liked the suspnce u creat 😃 u describe abhay 's pain very well 👏 i want next update soon but u take ur time nd update when u feel well 😃
thanks for pm

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Rumki

@rumki34

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Posted: 13 years ago

#754

awesome update👏.liked the twist

so it was dark witch who took Pia with them.

hope they will find Pia soon

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Resh

@SheDevil

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Posted: 13 years ago

#755

Awesome update.I guess somebody kidnapped Pia.Oh poor Abhay.PLz cont..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#756

Awesome update. I could feel Abhay's pain because you wrote it so well and Piyali was also described beautifully. I'm sure a supernatural has taken Pia because she can't be sensed. I think Jeh is related to this incident as he was smiling or was he just happy that Pia is lost? It's getting mysterious... cont asap:)