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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abhayfan_dishu

<font color="#ff00ff" face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="3">hey nice update. so is pia in shock coz jeh cheated on her?</font>

Thanks and u will come to know about jay soon. One more thing thanks for the previous suggesion of writing dates and chapters on updating in the title. I have done it.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vikramdey

nice update full of suspence


Thanks a lot. Suspense will be solved soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update 😊 So Pia is mentally unstable? 😭 Please yaar dont make her love Jeh. Only want to see her with Abhay 😳 Continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mandy1024

Nice update 😊So Pia is mentally unstable? 😭Please yaar dont make her love Jeh. Only want to see her with Abhay 😳Continue soon.


Thanks a lot for ur sweet comment. Piya is not mentally unstable it's just that due to an incident her mental condition is not good. Jay will play a important role in piya's life maybe good or bad? I will try to update asap.
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thank u so much for ur appteciation.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Alicia2001

wow great story plz update soon
thanks for the pm


Thanks a lot yaar for ur appreciation. I will update today only and u r welcome.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Here is the next part
Chapter4
The journey from Raichand mansion to city hospital was around one hour. The journey was almost going silent. Piya was getting bored so, she thought of breaking the silence.
Piya-: Abhay, do u have cd's in ur car.
Abhay-: yea, check in the tray box infront of u.Piya opened the tray box and checked all the cd's.
Piya-: Abhay which century are u from?
Abhay-:(shocked) what? Why? I,mean why are u saying so?
Piya-: why are u so shocked? I was just saying about this cd's. I think these are from some other century. Don't u have cd's of some new songs?
Abhay-:(relaxed) no, I don't like new songs and old songs are real songs. They have some meaning not like now a days song which don't have meaning.
Piya-: u don't have any choice. New songs are better than old ones atleast they keep us awake and listening to old songs make me feel sleepy.
Abhay-: so, it's better na. I don't think we need song for keeping us awake. Songs are for making our mind relaxed. And don't u know that old is gold?
Piya-:u don't know anything about music. Now I am sure that u are not from this century.Abhay not wanting to drag this fight more stopped the car.
Abhay-: (rudely)get out!
Piya-:(shocked) what?
Abhay-: we have reached city hospital look outside.
Piya looked out of the window and saw a white building infront of her.
Abhay and piya both got down from the car and headed towards the hospital. Abhay went towards the receptionist. The receptionist was continuously staring at the drop dead handsome guy coming towards her.
Abhay-:( with his signature smirk) Lady, can u pls tell me where is the chamber of dr. danish singh rathore?
Receptionist-:(nervously) sir, 2nd floor, 3rd room from left.
Abhay-: thanks but no thanks(rudely) Receptionist(humiliated and with a choking voice) u are welcome sir.All this time,Piya was continuously staring at abhay, when she saw him smiling at the receptionist she felt a mixed emotion of sad and a tinge of jealousy but when she saw him behaving rudely with the receptionist, she felt happy.
Piya-:( in his own mind) god what is wrong with me? What is happening to me? Why am I behaving so different? Why am I feeling sad when I saw him smiling and talking to someone else?
Abhay-:(while reading her thought and smiling) what happened? Why are u staring at me like that? Don't u know that it's rude to stare at somebody?
Piya-:(embarrased) nothing. I was just thinking something.
Abhay-: about me(teasing).
Piya-: (not able to meet his eyes)what? No,no I think we are getting late. We must go.
She hurriedly went towards the lift leaving a smiling abhay behind. Abhay also followed her. Piya was about to step inside the lift while her foot slipped and was about to fall but a pair of strong masculine hands caught her in the mid-way.Piya has closed her eyes out of fear.
Abhay-: u are safe. U can open ur eyes.
Piya-: slowly opened her eyes and found herself in abhay's arms. She looked away shyly and got up. She was about to say thanks but
abhay-: No need of saying thanks. Next time see and walk properly. Piya and Abhay both got inside the lift. Both were quite. After the, the lift opened both went towards the respected room. They were about to open the door when someone called from behind 'hey! Wait!'
Ps I have written the next part. It is small but still pls read and enjoy as I have less time today so, can't write big. Sorry, for mistakes. Pls read and do comment and if u like it hit the like button.
Edited by Rmuk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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he hs collection of old songs?
nice part... i think pia liks him...
thx 4 pm romi😊
Edited by luckdiya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow great story plz update soon

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