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Posted: 12 years ago

#381

Originally posted by: nidu_dsena
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sorry i was actually busy wid xamz..
ok coming to update can i giv u sum sugfestions dont take me wrng..
vl u plz make it look interesting by wrtng in colors or atleast bold d way how u used to wrte during starting.. it looks as of u lost interest in ur own wrting..
rahi baat update ki as usual good.. romantic update waow
but cuming to romance i prefer tjoda decent wala romamce nt so wild mention blouse n etc...
again im saying u dnt take me wrng its jus my POV abt ur wrting
sorry if im hurting u

Oh no no nt at all I'm nt hurt...I cnt write wid colors because I update from phone soo it becomes diff wid so mny complication of color n bold..
N well now romance will b less cuz villian is in d plot nw...n right now it was need of d plot, u'll feel so soon...thnx for suggestions..criticism always welcome...

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temptations

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Posted: 12 years ago

#382

N I still love this ff cuz its my first..n wenevr I read my starting posts the love becomes more n more

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Posted: 12 years ago

#383

Originally posted by: temptations
N I still love this ff cuz its my first..n wenevr I read my starting posts the love becomes more n more

oh nice to here
omg u write thru mobile i dint know dat.. i appreciate ur effortz..
i thought u update frm computr/lappy..
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temptations

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Posted: 12 years ago

#384

Its okay...bt wen I edit it from pc..I'll make it better for sure.
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Anjali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#385

Hoping for Next episode published this weekend...

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temptations

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Posted: 12 years ago

#386

Originally posted by: anjalidani
Hoping for Next episode published this weekend...

Okay will try to post this Sunday...or may b Monday

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temptations

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Posted: 12 years ago

#387

Originally posted by: vmpy
plz update soon.do pm me

Okay will post soon ,very soon n will pm u too... :)

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temptations

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Posted: 12 years ago

#388

Sorry for late post..u will enjoy this one..do read and comment..

The narrative is abhya

Chapter 38

I was having short deep breathes..making lot of noise

"Abhya..." ranbir stared at me with wide eyes

"I feel uncomfortable..my body is vibrating within..kya hora h yeh?" I asked

"Calm down ..abhya.." I suddenly felt my surroundings becoming bright..more clear..like any HD video..
I clutched my jeans..I was feeling sudden wierdness all over my body..I felt something related to wat rahul bhaiya told me that day when he was about to phase..kya ..kya mai ek wolf mai toh phase nhi ho jaongi ..oh no..I hv to get out if the car..
I opened the door .

"Abhya .u need nt go out..kaha jari ho?"

"I need to ..I am feeling highly..up beated..it has nvr happened before.."
He faced mini and karan..and then back to me..
Moving his hand past me he closed the door..our face was inches away..he began kissing me..holding my face very tight..tighter than usual that too with wide open eyes..bt what is this for the first time ever I was not interested in kissing him back.i too didnt closed my eyes with disinterest
There was something which was not allowing me to want to kiss him..my mind wanted to ..but body wasn't following...is it because of mini n karan at our back..no I dnt think its that..
My body was relaxed a bit..and it was a second of a moment. .like something clicked back in my head ,in my body..n I started kissing him back..n i didnt realised i torned the sleeves of hia shirt...after a minute he parted from d kiss
N my head came to senses..I was breathing fine .n feeling normal too..
N it was the time I realised the car was moving..I checked d mechanism of car..it was off. How d hell was d car moving..dat too at a height?
"How is the car moving?"I asked

"Abhya..tum theek ho.." he looked worried

"Don't know..abhi theek lag ra h.." I turned back..back seat was empty
"Karan mini kaha h?"
He smiled.. pointing at the bonut of car ..a hand came out from ahead of the car
"Karan" I was bewildered knowing he is making the car move holding it.. n then he pointed at back of the car n mini's hand raised..

"Normal humans don't pick cars ..kisi ne dekh liya hua toh"

"Nhi dekha ..we were out of reach d time u broke this stearing.."
I was scared and angry again..thinkng of dat virat
"Relax abhya..I regret wat happened yesterday..I shudnt have done that..now look at u..I guess ..its all because of that" I was sad he regretted being that ways.. "abhya..ur eyes ..they were..nt normal"

"Nt normal..??"

"Hum ghar pahunch gye..let's go inside"

We went inside..aunty was hugging me the next moment...

"Abhya...dear..r u fine?"

"Do I look that bad..ki aapko pata chal gaya"

"I read mini's mind beta"
I was feeling bad..ranbir told me dat aunty's dream was to have a happy living family n I was spoiling dat..sab bikhar gaya cuz of me..I cnt let dat happen..
"Ranbir take her to rest" ranbir nodded

"Abhya u r most safe here..so I wud b talkingbto mr. Raichand for ur stay here for me n mini being alone" aunty said

"Bt I cnt afford to leave mom dad there"

"Karan and raj wud b there..don't worry"I nodded

I cn't risk so much..I hv do something..

We reached ranbir's room..mini came with ua
"I'm sorry for the shirt"

"U look assaulted ranbir" mini spoke "an assaulted vampire.."
Ranbir glared angrily..

"Don't make fun of evrything mini" I said

"Come on guys...itna serious kyu ho..hum milkar uss virat ko mar denge..sab theek ho jaega fir..weren't u a sport ranbir..ab kya hogya"

"Mini abhi tak mere paas abhya nhi thi..it becomes complicated here.."

"Kuch nhi hoga usse.."

"I know dat..but ..but issi poori duniya mai use raichand family hi kyu mili..the old enemies are dead already.." I nodded..
Suddenly a thought click..oh no kahi..yeh siddarth ya maithli se related to nhi.. I thot for a moment .koi aur connection dikh nhi ra..shyd vo marne se pehle virat ko dad ko marne ko keh gye ho ..thn we left for mumbai..par I dnt think aisa kyu hoga..no this is illogical..

Mini asked me " wat do u say?"

" for wat?"

"U weren't listening??"

"Did I missed something?"

"Ah.well..abhya..we were discussing why ur eyes turning red. "

"Whatt..?? Red?? .." I kept my hand on my eye

"Not now...back in car" ranbir said

"I hv no idea..red??..I still can't believe it"

"Abhya c ..if this is one of ur effect which has speedened cuz of yesterday..then it shud be blue..bt red..I still can't get it" I saw him becoming sad on the word yesterday..

"Wait a minute ..now blue..what is this color change abt?"

Mini spoke now "Abhya when vampire come in their actual form..our eyes turn blue..it has shadesbas well..the more powerfull u r more blue ur eyes will b"

"Hmm..is dat d reason u didn't wanted me to c ur form?" I asked ranbir

"Its not just that...I think its time...mini..u can control right.." they both nodded..

N in a minute of making weird faces, mini stood infront of me looking dangerous.my eyes didn't shut aftr dat..I could see her blue eyes as they mentioned..n omg..her fangs..2 sharp white fangs..
Then after a min she was getting back to normal ..

"Got it..y I didny wanted to" he asked
I am sure he guessed I was scared..badly.. aftr dat..I could see her blue eyes as they mentioned..n omg..her fangs..2 sharp white fangs..
Then after a min she was getting back to normal ..

"Got it..y I didny wanted to" he asked
I am sure he guessed I was scared..badly.. aftr dat..I could see her blue eyes as they mentioned..n omg..her fangs..2 sharp white fangs..
Then after a min she was getting back to normal ..

"Got it..y I didn't wanted to" he asked
I am sure he guessed I was scared..badly..

" if it is a symptom of speeding my vampire side. Then y not blue..?"

Hope u liked it..pls give ur comments...next epi will show facing of virat and ranbir...
Do comment...

Edited by temptations - 12 years ago