FF-Hum Tum:) chapter 23 on pg 96...NEW UPDATE***** - Page 34

Superb update
loved it
especially Abhay Piya bedroom scene it was beautifully written and picture perfect too good. couldn't have been written better. it was too cute n i could imagining the scene dreamy issh!😍
❤️ piya was in so much pain but she was worried for Abhay so much that she even took the risk @ midnight but he was nice for once. i was shocked😲😲😲😲😲 too that he was nice. he asked her to sit with him and asked her if she was scared and wondered why someone would care for him.
But he was rude to her in the morning.

She wanted to stay away and ignore Abhay too. She was in so much pain and afraid to go in front of Abhay

They both have feelings for one another. but piya cares n worries for everyone.
i hope Abhay realises his feelings for piya and piya realises she also has feelings for him.

you are a brilliant writer and wrote it so beautifully and perfect. 👏👏
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Thanks for the pm n thanks for writing it everyday for us i really appreciate it. 😊
continue soon.

"AWESTRUCK"

wht an update!!!!!!
i m stil in dreamland yaar
a phenomenal effort..."K"
d story is SUPERB!!!! & well crafted
it keeps me glued 2 my seat til d end
truly a landmrk!!!!!!!
night scene ws beautifulllyyy written*****FAINT*****
pia's nervousness, hesitation everythng ws simply perfect
"breathtaking"
he confessed his feeling 2wards her
d way he holds her wrist...ooo...
dat ws really painkillers effect
@mrg... omg!!!! sadu abhay bck...
i think 4 2days update 1 lik button is nt enough... toh ye lo
like like like like like like...like like like like
u r superb writer dear...

i cnt wait nw..."k"...plz update soon...

brilliant grt awesome...abhay medicines k effect me hi zyada sai lagta hai 😆 😆
dat part was so awesome abhay's true feeling were seen dat tym...haye!!
at d end of chap pia's last line was so gud 🤣 both luvs to irritate each other 😆
continue soon yar nd thanx for d pm😊

loved the update!!

wonderful update.it vas simply awsum.jus lvd d entire pia-abhay convo..it vas sweet.first tym abhay showed his vulnerable side. Lvd pia's response 2 abhay in d end:)

Oh blame th epain killers to hide your true feelings nice stratgey I would say. So how long is this going to go on. And poor Pia seems to be the most confused soul here.First she is scared of him then she doesn't know what to say and do that will not make him run away from there.

Nice part abhay is too much when will he confess his feelings for pia

wow great story plz update soon
I'm really loving this story of your

nice update...
loved abhiya night scene
when will abhay really accept piyas love yar...even a friendship...
waiting 4 it...
cont soon