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Posted: 13 years ago
Chapter 4

Piya: "wow, that was something I never saw in my life, thanks to you, I feel like I am in a movie"

Abhay: "I feel the same way about you...no matter where we are and what we do"

Abhay: (holding her hand) "Now, I have a surprise for you"

Piya: "more?"

Abhay: "yes, more...now close your eyes" (he closes her eyes and blindfolds her. He drives and stops somewhere, her eyes still closed. He takes her out of the car and takes her inside.)

Abhay: "Now, open your eyes" (opens the blindfolds)

(Piya opens her eyes and they are standing in a basketball court. And in the middle of the court, her name is written.)

Piya: (surprised) "omg, what is this?"

Abhay: "This whole court is yours, you can come here any time and play"

Piya: "really?" (smiles)

Abhay: "really!" (Piya hugs him tight)

Piya: (pulling back suddenly) "But I don't know how to play it. I have never played it in my life"

Abhay: "what am I here for? It's not that hard. I'll show you"

(They wear basketball jerseys and play basketball. He teaches her how to play and when she can't make a basket, he holds her up and she puts the ball in the basket. They laugh and play and enjoy their time there. After it gets a little dark, they come out of the court.)

Piya: "I am pretty good at it, right?"

Abhay: "right" (makes fun)

Piya: "Ok, I stink! But I will get better"

Abhay: "I will make sure of that"

(Later, they come to another place. Panchi follows his car.)

Abhay: "Sorry Baby, but you have to close your eyes again"

Piya: "again? omg your crazy" (smiles as he closes her eyes)

Abhay: "Now I know what people mean when they say love is crazy. Look what you have done to me" (they start laughing)

(he brings her to a waterfall...it is a special place made for lovers.)

Abhay: (opening her eyes) "now, this is our special place!"

Piya: "Oh my God! This place is beatiful" (looking around)

(There are trees there, a beatiful waterfall. Next to them, he put a blanket there with food.)

Piya: "I have heard of this place, but I never thought it was this beatiful"

Abhay: "what makes it more beatiful, is you next to me"

Piya: "awww!! baby, that line has been used many times, it didn't work this time" (she jokes)

Abhay: "but it's true"

Piya: "yes! whatever you say" (she jokes and they start laughing)

Piya: "I love you" (suddenly stopping)

Abhay: "now that's much better...I love you more than you love me"

(they hug...they sit on the blanket and she puts her head on his knees. They watch the sunset)

Piya: "I hope this moment never ends"

Abhay: "It won't! every minute will be like this when we are together"

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(Later that night, he brings her home. He walks her to the door.)

Piya: "I had the best time in my life today"

Abhay: "You are worth it and even more"

Piya: "thanks, good night"

Abhay: "good night and dream of me" (he kisses her and leaves)

(Piya enters her house and Abhay drives. Panchi, still hiding, stops the recording and takes out the video tape)

Panchi: (to herself) "Enjoy it while you can..." (laughs and leaves)

(Piya, as she closes the door...smells the rose.)

Piya: (to herself) "Oh Abhay,I hope my dad accepts you. I don't know what I'll do without you" (worried)

(The next morning, she wakes up. Her parents came home. Piya gets up and goes to her dad)

Piya: "Dad, how's grandma?" (worried)

Mr. Dobriyal: "she's much better"

Piya: "thank God"

Mr. Dobriyal: "so what did you do yesterday?"

Piya: (looks at him scared) "nothing important"

Mr. Dobriyal: its getting late i need to go to the office

Piya: ok dad take care bye

Mrs. Dobriyal: "bye" ( he opens the door and sees an envolope lying outside with his name written on it. He finds a cd which he decides to watch later.)

Mrs. Dobriyal: "so, what did you really do yesterday?"

Piya: (smiles) "I will tell you, but promis me that you won't tell dad anything"

Mrs. Dobriyal: "So there is a guy"

Piya: "promise me mom"

Mrs. Dobriyal: "Ok, I promise you"

Piya: "His name is Abhay. He is a sweetheart, and I love him to death. I was with him yesterday, and I had the best time of my life"

Mrs. Dobriyal: "I am really happy for you, I just want you to be safe"

Piya: "I am mom. He keeps me so safe! He is the best"

Piya: (stops suddenly) "Do you think dad will accept him?" (worried)

Mrs. Dobriyal: "I hope so, I really do" (worried as well)

(At the same time, Mr. Dobriyal is sitting in his office. He takes out the the cd.)

Mr. Dobriyal: "what could be in this?" (surprised)

(He takes the cd and puts in the CD player. He sees the whole thing. He stops, shocked and gets mad).

(At home, Piya and her mom are talking, and Abhay knocks on the door.)

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Piya: (opening the door) "Abhay, come in"

Abhay: "did you tell them?" (coming in)

Piya: "I told my mom, come, meet her"

(they come in the living room and see Mrs. Dobriyal.)

Piya: "mom, this is Abhay. and Abhay this is my mom"

Mrs. Dobriyal: "hello. she has told me wonderful things about you."

Abhay: "has she really? Well, I am a lucky guy to have your daughter"

Mrs. Dobriyal: "I wish you guys all the best in life. I hope you will be happy"

(at the same time, Mr. Dobriyal is driving home mad).

(back at home, they are drinking tea)

Abhay: "I should get going, thank you for the tea"

Mrs. Dobriyal: "your welcome, come again soon"

Abhay: "It's a promise"

(Abhay gets up to leave. Piya walks him to the door. They both come out of the house, and before she can say goodbye to him, Mr. Dobriyal drives fast towards them and comes out of the car).

(Abhay and Piya look at each other surprised, and Piya is very scared. Mr. Dobriyal walks towards them with anger in his eyes.)

Mr. Dobriyal: "Get your hands off my daughter" (Abhay lets go of Piya's hand)



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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome...i hate panchi😡cow!oh i hope uske sath kuch bohot bura ho...and mr dobriyal ko akal aye😡
Edited by hpoirotac - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it
So Mr. Dobriyal wont accept Abhay
I hope Abhiya will be together no matter what
Continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update:-):-) Mr. Dobriyal is to much:-( hope he will Accept Abhay...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh My! Now her father knows the truth..!
He's definitely not gonna accept him..!

Nice update dear and thanks for the PM😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
i really luv d way abhay cares 4 pia... its amazinggg😍
panchi... i vil kil u 4 dat...u b****😈
her mom also likd him...she is 222 cute... 👏
wht vil happen nxt...omg!!!! his dad is vry angry...
thanks 4 pm dear

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Posted: 13 years ago
Wonderful!cute! sweet!lovely!and i hv no more words to praise ur update.really,it was superb.i knew it mr.dobrail will not accept abhay!but plz i want my abhiya.plz!plz!plz!plz!plz!
CONTINUE SOON...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oops tammy u stoppd at such a crucial point! WTH is wrng wid panchi? I hpe pia's dad accpts abhay 4 pia's happiness...cntnue sun.
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE DEAR.really superb. i love suprises good job dear. abhiya so cute together. hope arnab not over react as he usually done.i guess he will create problem. panchi .i feel i will kill her. i wish she became basketball and pia used her for play. lovely update .update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsum update dr!!!!
i loved it!!!!
abhay pia movement was amazing!!!!
so mr dobriyal wont accept abhay!!!! i hate dat panchi its all becaise of her!!!
hope everything gets well soon!!!
cont soon n thanks 4 d pm

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