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Posted: 13 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: -Sonia-


Superb update
Awww.. 12 naughty raichands are so adorable.. They r already planning the comeback of their mother!
Hope to see abhay happy again !
Thanx 4 d pm
continue soon
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The comeback may take a few updates because i still have a back story on Pia to write up. She's not a normal human being. I have a little fascination for the supernatural world so Pia will be different. Not completely a damsel in distress coz this Pia is shall i say bada**.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: harinisriram39

Ayesha, You should send your FFs to Balaji Telefilms. If the petitions to bring back PKYEK season 2 won't work atleast your story should. I don't think if anyone can give a better story line to start season 2. I mean, they can start season 2 by showing that Piya dies giving birth to the hybrid kids and then the story moves on by Abhay also turning back into a supernatural.

U kidding me right? BALAJI won't bring the show back. I have given up hope now. Season 2 of PKYEK of mine are a little racy. This one depends on my mood really but i don't think people would read this at BALAJI headquartre. They have their hands full as it is. Besides i don't think my work is up to the standards anyway.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: mandy1024

I was so depressed after reading the last update of Book 2 but this is awesome 👏 I am in love with the hybrids 😳😊 They are super cute 😃 n sure are a handful 😆 I so loved this. No words at all 🤗 They touched my heart. So sweet n innocent 😊 What about SidLina? No vampy-werewolf hybrid? 😕 It would have been nice to have atleast one but I guess they are having a hard time with these 12 to even think of one 😉

Just one question, though. Are they still toddlers or are they all grown up as in they have reached their full growth? Pixie would've been born only after Pia died since she's her reincarnation. So can they be younger than her?
BTW the part about Pixie was too interesting. U gave a wonderful start to that story. All in all, u have a super duper hit in the form of this FF. I never thought I'll love any other hybrid more than Kari or Surya but these 12 are a miracle for sure 😊 Please dont wind this up soon, please 😊 Make it a nice lengthy FF. So much to be seen especially with the hybrids n Pixie. This is for u dear ⭐️🤗

I love them all. Abhay to his HYBRIDS. No Sidlina don't have any children of their own. ABHIYA babies have lept them on their toes not to mention Alina's fulfilling her promise to Pia of being there for them all. Maybe somewhere in the future but right now the kids are too demanding and time consuming.
The babies grow up at a rate double so in 5 years they'd be 10 but the rate slows down the older they get so in effect they are all 15 meaning they'd look around 18. They's cease to grow based on will. Pia is younger than her children which is weird but i have done what i've done but only by 8 months. They'd all be in the same year.

Pixie will develop her own MOJO soon wait and watch this time round she isn't a weak human.
The FF won't be as long as my other FF's which used to be about 4/5 pages long. They will be straight to the point no fillers only action and drama with a dose of Humour filled with HEART
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: matwamango

U kidding me right? BALAJI won't bring the show back. I have given up hope now. Season 2 of PKYEK of mine are a little racy. This one depends on my mood really but i don't think people would read this at BALAJI headquartre. They have their hands full as it is. Besides i don't think my work is up to the standards anyway.

Ur kidding me right? Do u wanna compete with Balaji standards? 🥱 They dont deserve a good writer like u bcoz however good their show is at the beginning, they turn out to be utter crap after a couple of episodes. Ur FFs are way too good dear 😃 Had the show been based on Twisted Love it would've been a super duper hit 👏 Also it wouldn have dragged.
Now please dont say I am praising u too much 😛 I am sure many other IF members would agree with me on this. PKYEK can never be anything like Twisted Love which was the best Abhiya story ever.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: hpoirotac

all the hybrids are so cute...though i think chahat and khushi are my personal favourites..!
pixie confuses me though...well all i can say is,please update soon ...btw when are you making piya (or whoever she is now) meet abhay ?

Chahat and Khushi are my favourite girls but i love Prem for obvious reasons.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: Rmuk

Great story. But I have not understand the last part of pixie. Pls update fast and if possible explain me the last part.

What don't U understand? Pixie is an ordinary girl at this point who is treated like c**p!!!!!! I can't explain if i don't know what i am explaining😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: Sheela123

U r really such a sweetheart..the update was really awesome..thnx for the pm n update soon:-):-)

U are sweet too in fact
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: Neytiri

Wndrful updte ayesha.congrats 4 d sequel. Poor abhay had 2 luk aftr 12 chldrn nd al r tough chics... Pixie(our real pia )is only 15 nw! Plz updte sun nd abhiya ko milwao...

Theres still a few more updates explaining certain aspects of the story and why Pixie aka Pia needs help!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: purple_shadoz

🤗hey aysha...dt ws smthng lovely...👍🏼m so glad u continued d ff...😃m loving d raichand hybrids yaar!!!!!!😉bt abhay's lonliness n despefatn s so evident...d moments u dscribd abhay d kids wx superb...😛so d kids r all set to gt dr mother bk into abhay's life...waitng 4 dt...😛tws gud to c abhau finally avng a lil bit fun...😳so pia s reborn as pixie...such a sad life c s leadng!!!!!😕hope d kids reach to hr asap n bring hr to abhay...😳cont soon n love u 4 ds 1...🤗

Trying to maintain it as a dark/yet innocently light FF at the same time.
Next update should shed light on how special Pia is!!!!!!!
I hope U like it though coz its the first time i am actually basing Pia as a ...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: krishnarock

Ammm... Sach kahu to... ITS AWESOME...I M REALLY REALLY SORRY DEAR But I dont like the concept:-( Abhay and 12 children:-(:-( and Pia only 15:-(... Sorry...,...,...,... ITS ONLY MY OPINION NOT OTHERS so do continue dear... I LOVE YOUR ALL FF AND SS AND OS:-) YOU ARE AN AMAGING AND LOVELY WRITER:-)...

Koi gal nahi dear sab ki apni apni pasand hoti hai aggar tumhe pasand nahi toh mujhe koi aitraaz nahi😆. I cater to all but i don't like repeating my stories in any of my FF.
I know i did the reincarnation track before but this time it really is different. It will pick up soon enough.

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