FF - Falling in love with the enemy. updated P.51

rashida

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

Wowww awsomeee update!! 😊

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Dikshita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#152

Gud update cari.. I'm liking the story. 😊 Btw what happend to piya? Did abhay manhandled her? I mean who wrote what about him??

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Sharpay.Evans

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Posted: 13 years ago

#153

lovely upd8!!
Vahbbiz murdered and Protima DI?!
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!

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The Witch

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Posted: 13 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: Dikshi92
Gud update cari.. I'm liking the story. 😊 Btw what happend to piya? Did abhay manhandled her? I mean who wrote what about him??

she is married to him. She writes in black about her past and in blue her current story.

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Binita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#155

Loved it Cari di.. You are just too good.. eagerly waiting for the next part..😛

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Ritzie Ring'gghania

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Posted: 13 years ago

#156

Cari - hats off to you. You are the best Vahbiz fan 🤣 FF bhi Vahbiz ke accident ke bina complete nahi ki🤣

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The Witch

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Posted: 13 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: bellaaa
great update...piya still love abhay but yyy abhay doesnt love her?

Abhay's treatment towards Piya is a mystery. Her love/Hate for him is a mystery too.

In the black writing she is disclosing her past and in the blue her present time. But all her story so far is dipicted thru her diary. In the present time she is married to him. So I am running Abhiya through a parallel time, past and present. Then oneday - when she catches up telling us about the past and why they are where they are in the present - the story would move forward in real time only.

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The Witch

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Posted: 13 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti
I love how u expressed pia's feelings 4 abhay & y abhay is rude wid pia after marriage & is pia still unaware abt abhay being vampy
Haha me as bechari if some1 break my trust I break their bones (my talent 😉 )
But I m so glad ki lady VD ki death ki news tumne mujhse reveal karayi
Chanu library mai bhi romance kar rhe thai
Nishi was cool
Cont.. & nxt time let me bajao others

At the begining of the FF - Pia mentions she is captivated, Now the rest is a mystery for now.. once she reaches her current position from her past story telling - the mystery will be revealed.

Abhay's treatment towards Piya is a mystery. Her love/Hate for him is a mystery too.

In the black writing she is disclosing her past and in the blue her present time. But all her story so far is dipicted thru her diary. In the present time she is married to him. So I am running Abhiya through a parallel time, past and present. Then oneday - when she catches up telling us about the past and why they are where they are in the present - the story would move forward in real time only.

Aha U and Anmol..

I chose for you on purpose to deliver the news.

Don't wory you will do enuff BBB - even on me. Today you get to BBB Vahbizz. Haha.

Abanu romance is cute.

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The Witch

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: snitchseeker
Lady Vd dead yay. I am loving it. Personally I am loving Anu and Chaku more than Abhiya. Anmol and Sanchi🤣 and pinky wears yellow lol

Hehe, Pinky ko mila Protima ka role..

Chanu romance is sweet. See how quiet Chakku is...😛

Abhay's treatment towards Piya is a mystery. Her love/Hate for him is a mystery too.

In the black writing she is disclosing her past and in the blue her present time. But all her story so far is dipicted thru her diary. In the present time she is married to him. So I am running Abhiya through a parallel time, past and present. Then oneday - when she catches up telling us about the past and why they are where they are in the present - the story would move forward in real time only.

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The Witch

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Posted: 13 years ago

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