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vampire123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#421

awesome this is superb yaaar

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 13 years ago

#422

Originally posted by: princess_xeelan
Superb update Ayesha... 👏 😃
I thought we wont get love making scenes in this FF but it was a very nice surprise 😉 Abhiya were amazing and beautiful...nice way of abhay to be thankful 😉 Gosh I miss them

Stefan acted really clever... because he is less impulsive then Damon... have u seen the last episode of tvd? my heart broke seeing stefan as a revenge taking machine with no feelings u portrayed Stef perfectly 👏 and I have a feeling ur planning to make Jeh as Klaus's hybrid 😉 since there's no taylor 😆 superbb...👏

I got bored of all the Kiss therapies it was getting a little old and TVD and Buffy series are so hot I couldn't keep the heat of those show go in vain just because of my own morals. Besides it shocked U all didn't it. I forgot to give warnings to my readers about this UPDATE Hopefully i haven't made anyone uncomfortable😕

I know i miss ABHIYA as well.

In here i am showing STEFAN as a calculating VAMPIRE. He can be impulsive at times but he is being clever in his approach. I was so hurt when i saw a BROKEN STEFAN on the SHOW.

On Jeh U are on the right track😆

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 13 years ago

#423

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti
Awesome update
I so loved it so stefan is using his brain but klaus came 2 know abt stefan betrayal
And abhiya were oozing hot
Plz cont...

KLAUS will take his revenge very soon😉

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Aysha

@matwamango

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#424

Originally posted by: -Sonia-

Awesome update
loved it
finally, abhay got his mother back !
Aww.. Stefan wants to cum back.. Elena shudnt giv up on him !
But wat will klaus do now ? After knowing d truth ? Who will he turn into a hybrid .. I hope , its not abhay!
Abhiya's passionate moment was Hawt!
Continue soon
thanx 4 d pm
tc

KLAUS'S moves are very close to his chest he is so unpredictable but one thing is he never forgives a betrayal. He will avenge his revenge soon😉

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Aysha

@matwamango

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#425

Originally posted by: anjali.K

if abhay and piya really do have a fight without piya playing it dirty😉, then I wonder who will win!
I am liking bonnie and damon's pair a lot. I wish I get that in the show. She is the perfect antidote to damon's sheenanigans😆

Now this is the million dollar question would Pia win or ABHAY🤣 I love Bonnie and Damon so much more than Damon wiith Elena😉

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Aqeelah

@xxAqeelahxx

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#426

wow this came as a suprise...
pia and Abhay r just ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

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Aysha

@matwamango

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#427

Originally posted by: hpoirotac
very hot update ayesha...i think you still have eternally waiting for you hangover...but i'm hardly one to complain ;-)

feeling very worried about stefan though...what is klaus going to do?

Actually there is only so much kiss therapy i can use in this FF i mean Pia is a slayer and ILU ILU on the show had me bored so might as well throw my rule book out of the window so i can show my readers in this FF Abhiya can sizzle but not be so desperate for each other like ETERNALLY WAITING 4 U. BTW this is the only hot scene you'll get because i will only mention Abhiya making love but not refer into detail here as it wastes loads of plot lines.

I have 4 stories/couples here and i only mentioned Stefan's sex scene with Rebecca in passing to save on other aspects of the story.😆

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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#428

Originally posted by: mandy1024
Ayshu ur gonna spoil us yaar 😆🤣 I thought nothing could get hotter than Eternally Waiting for U but looks like this FF will beat that for sure 😃 Man need I say how much I was ☺️ while reading this. Abhiya were completely junglee in this one 😳😉 When will Haseena be back to her normal state? I so want Abhay to get his mom back 😊 Anyways mission hybrid chalu hain kya? 😉 I know u gave us 12 in Eternally... n 2 adorable twins in twisted love but never seem to get enough of them.😃 This is something I sorely missed in the show 😭

No this FF won't beat ETERNALLY WAITING 4 U because this is strictly based on a fast paced action drama FF however most of ABHIYA'S lovemaking will be referred in passing. I may if i am in the mood write one moment depending on if there is a need for it. Only FF where ABHIYA are so despo are ETERNALLY ones so ETERNALLY YOURS will be in the template of ETERNALLY WAITING 4 U. After all ABHIYA R unable to FUNCTION wwithout the other in that FF. PLUS Pia never had a role to play either being a HUMAN or being a WITCH!

Abhiya here are a little practical due to Pia being aware of her responsibilities to protect the innocents. U didn't see BUFFY Making LOVE to either Spike or ANGEL 24/7 now did U? They had a time and place. So will ABHIYA. I know ABHIYA R JUNGLI coz of their NATURE. Abhay a VAMPIRE and PIA a SLAYER intensify everything ten folds. So if i were to write another UPDATE it WOULD be Pia and Abhay fighting each other leading to a SEXUAL scenario. It depends on the situation i guess.

More HYBRIDS. I can't get enough of them either but A SLAYER HYBRID i will have to make a poll on this and see how many people want this yaar. I can't keep producing hybrids in all of my FF.s

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Aysha

@matwamango

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#429

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu
Thank u ayshu for that abhiya part...healing kisses se jyada mila loved it...aww loved abhays care for haseena...

Healing kisses bore me now I have to try and challenge myself. I wrote this UPDATE 4 U by the way in case U were wondering why i even bothered to add a HOT ABHIYA scene to make up for not replying to U.