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Posted: 13 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: priya.1

lovely update...

different concept...

plz continue soon & plz add me to ur pm list😊

Hey Thanks a lot😊Ya...I will add you in my PM List and will update soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Akshi0019

nyc update dr!!!!! cont soon n add me 2 d pm list!!!!

Hey Thanks a lot😊I will add you in my PM List and will update soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Thanks a lot😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey friends, i am really sorry for late update. Actually i hurt my hand. But now i am back with long update😊.

Heres the next part-

Misha(breathing heavily)-Abhay...Abhay...Tumhare family par kisine attack kiya hai. We have to go to your home.
Abhay-What?
Pia-Oh my god...Kahin yeh siddharth to nahi?
Abhay-Lets go

Abhay's home-
Abhay ghar par aata hai, par tab tak bahut der ho chuki thi. Abhay ke family mein sabhi logo ki death ho chuki thi. Unki dead-bodies ko dekhkar woh bhul gaya ki use wehan investigation bhi karna hai
Abhay(crying)-Oh god my family. Usne sab ko maar diya.
Pia-Please calm down abhay. Please dont cry.
Abhay-Usne mere sabhi precious logo ko mujhse chin liya

Panchi-Abhay please dont cry. Guys in sabke sath bhi wehin hua jo baki victims mein hua tha.
Pia-Iska matlab yeh sab siddharth ne kiya hai?
Misha-Who's siddharth?
Pia sabhi ko siddharth ke barien mein batati hai. Sab log abhay ko hate karne ke liye guilty feel karte hai.
Danish-Pia ager aisi baat hai to killer ka next target tum ho. Because abhay ke life mein uske family ke baad sabse precious person tum ho
Misha-and then...Baad mein hum sab
Abhay-We have to stop him
Kabir-No abhay. Maine us din use dekha. Woh bahut dangerous aur powerful hai. Usmein zara se bhi emotions nahi hai.
Panchi-Aur yehan aakar to usne khudki puri team bana li hai.
Pia-Abhay, woh dead-bodies ko vampire banata hai. Hum tumhare family ko forensic lab mein hi rakhenge. Woh un tak kabhi nahi pahuch payega.
Panchi-Ya abhay. CIS forensic lab mein bahut tight security hai. Woh to kya koi bhi nahi pahuch sakta udhar.
Abhay-Ok. Par ab main use nahi chodunga. We have to find him. Lets go to office
Misha-Guys in sabki dead-bodies ko...
Pia-No misha. Guys abhay ke family ko forensic lab le chalo.
Panchi-I am proud of you pia. Yeh prove ho gaya ki you really love him.
Pia-Ya panchi. I really love him a lot.

Abhay's neighborhood house-
Sidharth wehan se unke team ki baatien sunta hai.
Sidharth-Tum mujhe kabhi nahi pakad sakte Abhay. But ab to tumhare precious family ko vampire banana hi padega.

At Forensic Lab-
Kabir-Panchi abhay ke family ko hum yehan sirf tumhare bharose chod rahe hai. Please yehan kisi stranger ko enter mat karne dena
Panchi-Dont worry kabir. I will take care of them.
Misha-Ok. Kabir ab humein chalkar aur evidence collect karne chahiye
Kabir-Ya lets go. Bye panchi
Panchi-Bye guys.

After 3 hour-
Panchi forensic lab mein baithe case ko study karti hai, tabhi use tracker ka call aata hai.
Panchi-Bolo tracker
Tracker-Hey panchi, kya kar rahi ho? Hey you know mujhe tumhara ek old friend mila hai
Panchi-Tracker abhi main lab mein hoon aur tumhe mera friend kaise mila?
Tracker-arey panchi, lab ko jaane do. Tumhara friend specially tumhe dhundne ke liye yehan aaya hai. Par aaj shaam ko use wapas jana padega isliye tumhe abhi usse milna hoga
Panchi-Tracker, please main abhi nahi aa sakti. Atleast us friend ka naam to bolo
Tracker-Panchi, usne mujhe naam batane ke liye mana kiya hai. But tum usse milne ke liye yehan Poison Ivy mein aa jao. We're waiting for you.
Panchi-Tracker listen...
Tracker-No, main kuch nahi sunoongi. Just come now. Bye
At Poison Ivy-
Tracker-Hey maine panchi ko bol diya yehan aane ke liye.
Siddharth-But tracker ab mujhe jana hoga. I am really sorry
Tracker-Hey tumhe mera nickname kaise pata chala?
Siddharth(thinking)-Mere sensitive ears ne tumhara pura conversation sun liya hai baby
Tracker-Hey bolo na
Siddharth-Panchi ne bataya tha ek baar, you know na hum friends hai. Now i have to go. But panchi ko mera naam ab pakka bata dena and mera ek message bhi dena-I'II come back to bite them
Tracker-Oye yeh kaisa message hai?
Siddharth-Don't worry tracker. Woh samajh jayegi. Bas use mera message de dena. Take care tracker and tell her to be very careful. Ok?
Tracker-ok. Bye
Siddharth-Bye.

Panchi-Oh god yeh tracker bhi na. Par kaunsa friend hoga. Ab main kaise jau. Danish ko bol deti hoon.
Panchi danish ko call karti hai-
Danish-Hey panchi, tum lab mein hi ho na?
Panchi-Ya danish. But tracker ne mujhe keha hai ki woh mujhe mere hi kisi old friend se milana chahti hai. So kya tum please tab tak lab mein rukoge?
Danish-Which friend panchi? Tumhe pata hoga na.
Panchi-Mujhe seriously nahi pata danish. Woh uska naam bhi nahi bata rahi hai.
Danish-ok baby. Main abhi crime scene par hoon. Main wehan 1 hour mein pahuchta hoon.
Panchi-Thanks danish.
Danish-Ya. You be careful.
Panchi-Yup bye.
Then panchi wehan se chali jati hai.

Hey friends, think aage kya hoga? Kya danish time par pahuch payega?

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Posted: 13 years ago
#75

Hey Thanks a lot yaar😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely update dear i like it . to ab sid abhay ke friends ke pachya hai interesting hope abhay save his friends waiting for next thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update..loved it..aww..abhay's family dead..hope piya remains safe..thanks for pm..

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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
nice update.
& tnx 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79

nice update...

hope sid dsnt harm pia...

thnx for the pm

plz continue soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
Your ff is really fast paced i really like it.Gr8 update again.thanx for the pm.

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