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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: me_shreeya

of course rani..i miss
u all really cum less these days😭
nd our talks abt vah is still nt finished..lolz..but dont want 2 ruin my mood talkin abt her 2...



Miss you too 🤗
Oh please don't spoil my mood I'll be going to bed soon 😆 I want to have sweet dreams 😍 not nightmares 🤢

Too busy with work and Banu has school and work and there other stuff in our life that needs attention.
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg...the new promo...😲
the cvs r nt dragging this track well gud enuf...but should i be happy or sad...😕..i dont want pkyek 2 end...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shewascool90210


well we can fix that na, we can pick a title for next AT, don't worry abhiya AT will look amazing.



I hope so Banu cause am starting to hate the word Enigmatic 🤢 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
SUSAN (cont'd)
(after a moment)
Are you cold?

JOE
...No.

SUSAN
Maybe it's the draft through the
door.

She gets up, closes the door, sits back down again next to
Joe. A warm, awkward silence, they move closer to each
other, now they fall into a foreplay which Susan recognizes
as such, Joe, on the other hand, participates hungrily but
has no knowledge where it is leading. His movements are
instinctive, the smell of her hair, the shape of her fin-
gers, odd things about her seem to interest him. This
excites her because she senses his untutoredness and the
very sense of that stirs her, their reactions to each other
are intuitive and spontaneous; even though Joe has no know-
ledge of how to make love to a woman, ironically his actions
are such that they never beg the question -- has he done it
before.

wsow hot hot😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pyar-ishk



I hope so Banu cause am starting to hate the word Enigmatic 🤢 🤣


we will make sure of it that it's fix😃and why hate it?
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Posted: 13 years ago
some hot stuff coming up for sure🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pyar-ishk



Miss you too 🤗
Oh please don't spoil my mood I'll be going to bed soon 😆 I want to have sweet dreams 😍 not nightmares 🤢

Too busy with work and Banu has school and work and there other stuff in our life that needs attention.



😔🤗
of course we r nt talkin abt them..i dont want 2 start my mornin like this...😆
hope all will be free soon...nd when this WW track cums 2 an end...we need 2 party here...😃😳


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Posted: 13 years ago
Banu you don't have a early class tomorrow cause you're still here
Edited by pyar-ishk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Strange territory for Joe, not to be 'in control' and exert-
ing his power, but his inventions and responses in lovemak-
ing are so real that an emotional exchange between he and
Susan builds. Joe has found himself in an unexplored land
of feeling and passion, he loves what is happening and yet
at the same time, is terrified by it. He feels himself being
lured by some power he has not only never been aware of, but
is deeply dangerous to partake of; he knows what he is doing
is putting who he is at great risk, yet he goes right on.
The powerful contradiction is transmitted to Susan, and in
the end there is the knowledge they have together made a
journey, they both have been swept away in a stream of events
they have created; and they don't care about the consequences.

Spent, they lie in silence. Finally Susan speaks:

SUSAN
It's so wonderful to make love to
you. It's like making love to some-
one who has never made love before.

Joe senses an opportunity not only to admit to what she has
said, but to tell her more, even the truth about himself.
He weighs, then resists, the impulse.

JOE
Thank you.

Her head nestles underneath his arm, she has a sense of his
comforting her without knowing that he is doing so.

SUSAN
Did you like making love to me?

JOE
I loved it.

SUSAN
More than you love peanut butter?

JOE
Yes!

She laughs at the earnestness with which he answers.

Joe seems to drift away now, they lie together as one but for
the first time, she feels separate from him, sensing him gone
to some distant, distant land.

SUSAN
Where are you going?

JOE
Nowhere? I'm...here.

SUSAN
For how long?

JOE
Oh, I hope a long, long time.

A moment.

SUSAN
Me, too.

Another moment.

JOE
What do we do now?

She smiles.

SUSAN
It will come to us.
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Joe and Susan are at the front door, he has helped her
on with her coat, she turns around, they kiss. The kiss
lingers, Susan breaks away, reaches for the door, looks back
longingly at Joe and then she is gone, Joe closing the door
softly after her.

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