AN ANGEL OF MINE chapter 5 updtd page30 - Page 12

Originally posted by: CIDMaaneetNaksh

Awesome shivani...never knew you were such a brilliant writer...! thanks for completent yaar but i m not that good and sorry If I interrupted with the Update flow..its completely ok . but couldn't resist from commenting... i m glad u commented

I read your entire FF right now and woah...it was brilliant...thanks first part...Piya's dream and then her reaction to Jai were perfect and that moron deserves it badly...😡 ya i also think so thats why i added it and then next Part... Abhiya romance... lekin usse pehle there pain... you described so vividly...specially that of Piya..i m glad that u. like it and then this part... the new girl... and the concert...moreover the way Abhay felt bad for Alina was nice...ya afterall he is our good vampire but this Jai...he seriously needs to get a life dude...soon he will aww Kabir falling for Mish... i really adore them i hope hope i m not boring u with their love story and Piya suspicious is cool...!! she will help him

yay!! I am first... anyways... PM me the next part whenever you Update! i have already pmed u

Originally posted by: prernasinghking

sorry dear,for the late comment.i am busy in some urgent work .thanks for the pm.superb ,amazing,fantastic ...piya is pleading to abhay ...good

Originally posted by: abhayfan_dishu

awesome dear.

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu

Awsum part just loved i so wanted that last part to happen yesterday same here yaar but they r showing some real crap these days this ff is just the reflection of what i want for abhiya gosh abhiya u wrote so well the romance was fab i am blushing right now thanks for liking mishka i loved them i also love them yaar i want there love story to proceed in a logical way also i want jai heart to be broken now fully he is already heart broken soon many things of him are about to break 😉 thanx for pm my pleasure and such a long update*hugs* 🤗

Originally posted by: prerna26

Awesome Update!👏 thanks for appreciation

Who is this exchange student? u will surely know in the next update And will she play an important role in your FF? yes she is a very important part of my ff So now Pia will play the role of cupid for Kabir & Misha.may be😉 Oh no! Jai will be revengeful now! he has always been revengeful just some intensity has increased this time Aww...what a romantic idea to celebrate the most precious day of their lives... i thought pkyek is completing its 1 year so basically abhiya must be completing 2 year so why not celebrate it also abhay has to make it up to pia after his fake show off with alina Show mein toh aisa kuch nahi hoga. i also lost hope from them Well done Shivani!!! thanks Thanks a lot for Pm. entirely my pleasure Continue soon.😃 sure will try

Originally posted by: Akshi0019

fab dr!!!!! it was too gud yr!!!! abhays surpeise was outstanding mindblowing etc etc... n his memory was gr8!!! he remember each date cool yr!!!! awsum yr... cont soon!!!!! n thanks 4 d pm!!!