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Posted: 13 years ago


awe-some nice one
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Posted: 13 years ago
at last ,i've read all the updated chapters😊...just completed reading now.😃..awesome updates👏.👏..they were truly marvelous⭐️...i have to say u r a fabulous writer...n they way u describe it...its amazing...i really admire the way u write😊...piya is gorgeous...the way she behaved from d starting n her feelings as a mother...its outstanding👏...i so love her...n abhay with all the pain n love n betrayal...u portrayed him perfectly⭐️...n maithali is doing gr8 with her evilness...kabir n jamie r perfect...haseena is really caring...but the character i luv most is angel😃...she is so pretty...n father-daughter convo was hilarious.👏..i'm luvin it...abhiya's romance was lovely...wish abhay says all the truth to piya.😊..thnx 4 the pm.😊..continue soon waiting eagerly 4 ur next chapter..😊.
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Posted: 13 years ago

maithali is so evil...😈

abhay -pia r the best...their romance is so cute and extraordinary...

love them...🤗

but what ring is this which maithali has???😕

great update...

continue soon...


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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update..heena
it was just WOW ... abhay n pia convo was nice...piya understands him sooo well !! I hope, abhay tells her everything..
Oho...yeh ladka kabhi nai sudhrega..bari se bari tension mei bhi apna romance nai bhoolta...hehe
loved the room scene but ye knock kisne kia..arrgghhh !!
Pia n misha's meeting was wonderful.. It was superb..misha is very understanding !!!
Uff..metz..har jaga tapak parti hai..Nagin kayee ki..lol
plz..iska kuch karo..
I hope, abhay doesnt fall for her trap...
Thanx for the pm
continue sooon
tc
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Posted: 13 years ago
thnks fr da pm
gr8 jobb
well written
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu

Me 1st K u dont know my name i guess its rashmi u can call me rashu fab update loved it abhiya were cute thankuuu so much rashu n glad u loved it but why is abhay hiding truth from piya he is basically nt hiding d truth frm her, first n d most imporatant thing, he himself is nt sure abt mathali's condition n abt jay's thing, he knw's pia very well, dat d day she wl come to knw abt y he has choosen jay, she wl simply refuse to b around him!! loved the sister convo😊😊😊😊 and maithili she is so irritating always troubling abhiya hope to see her end soon t so soon dear😉 piya was so worried by the thought that abhay was leaving her and going for 1 hour i almost cried for that part.oh!! dear,she was worried d way abhay is behaving around her nw these days!!thanks for pm ma pleasure

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abhayfan_dishu

tense update. hope maithali realises her errors and end up with jay.thanx dishu for reading n commenting n ending up wid jay, dat won't b happening here dear😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awesome update👏 dear...can u plsss pm me when u update???😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: princess_xeelan

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Superbbb update... 👏 thanx hun😊
I will start with Maithli today..i knew u wl start frm her only😉😉.OMG the way you described about her she looks just like my Katherine 😃 You know how much I love Katherine i knw, ur siggies tell everything😆😆shows ur unconditional love for katherine Metz dialogues were very good Heena 👏 👏
Love..hatred...obsessions and revenge...very closely related if you think about them deeply. i don't knw why, whenever i write abt her, everything comes automatically😆😆 n abt love, hatred n obsession, they all fall in one line, basically stages of a whole process!!She is hell bent on destroying Abhiya... deep down she loves Abhay or I sud say obsessed with Abhay...she is obsessed wid him, she hates, coz she loves him
Poor Abhay...in so much trouble because of the mess which is partially created by him 😕 yup, u cn say dat I hope he could stay atleast to take care of Piya..he wl till d mathali wants😉😉. I suppose Metz wont hurt Piya now because she wants the baby...i aven't planned nything like this till nw!!😉
the ring seems to be the key to everything which cant be conquered unless and until Abhay surrender himself to Metz...i guess he will even do that to save Piya he wl😉😉
Misha and Piya reunion was very cute 😳 thanx hunEmbarrassed
Abhiya scenes were cute but heart breaking... Piya knows abhay too well so no wonder she could sense his worry and Abhay poor Abhay...he's in such mess ,this is just a starting tanz!!😉
waiting for Jeh's entry and to know what part he would play in the story...he wl b there in d nxt part
update soon 🤗 sure wl try hun😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: peehu24

heena..that was a fab and awesome update...i just loved it...thankuuu so much peehu n glad u loved it!!😊😊😊😊


abhiya were as usual cute...but i wish pia knew the truth what abhay is doing.soon she wl come to knw abt d truth..and misha-pia scene was so cute.thanx once again..finally they made up...glad to know...and that metz...always ready to create troubles.hehehehe, mathali is another name for trouble..i hope piya remains safe and abhay takes care of her.he wl ,don't worry.rather kill her...

btw...plz update soon.wl try..thanks for pm..m.a pleasure

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