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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
hey awesome character sketch😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: peehu24

i loved it..plz continue...will be waiting for the update


glad u liked it n i will upate soon😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: vampyrgirlricha

witches n wizards..m loving it...wooow


thanks for such a sweet comment dear n even i like witches n wizards 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sivaranjani

Loved the character sketch.. Please continue and PM me whenever u update!


glad u liked it n i will surely do that
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: piyali.1228

i loved it.

Do continue
n pm me wen u update 😊


thanks for commenting dear n i will pm u 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

hey awesome character sketch😳


glad u liked it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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a figure was standing near window . it seemed of a girl waiting for something. "pia beta what r u looking out there?" asked her mom sugandh. pia replied " nothing mom . but those dreams ...(she started recalling her dream ,her usual dreams where she met him . they both were so close to each other but again he used to disappear always . her last night dream was also like this . she was again in that burnt palace running n climbing up the stairs all smiling n humming the melody . he used to come there searching for her . he followed her . n finally they met . they were too close to each other that they could feel the breath of each other . he proceeded towards her . started kissing her neckline slowly . then slowly started kissing her cheeks then eyes then slowly approached to her lips . they were about to meet when he left . she never asked his name. so she used to call him my perfect admirer.) " hey pia beta i was asking something .where r u gone hun ?" pia came back to reality by hearing sugandh's voice . " oh nothing mom . i was just saying that again (she paused ) nothing . i need to go to the college . its getting late ." sugandh thought " my pia baby i wish i could do something for u both but i can't . forgive me pia thats happening coz its written in ur destiny " .

raichand mansion
a very royal house which was looking like a palace was setteled near the jungle of dehradun . inside it a handsome young man was climbing up the stairs said " mom dad save me from sid bhai " another young man trying to chase him said " what do u think that i will leave u abhay ? no ways . my name is siddharth raichand so don't even try to make me a fool . got it ?" they both were still running , abhay was trying to escape from his bro sid n sid was trying to him . suddenly a feminine voice said in scolding manner " u both stop fighting . siddharth u r 21 n abhay u r 19 u both r grown ups not kids " they both immediately stopped fighting as their mother's order coz they both respected her , luved her , n were a bit a scared as she was their mom afterall . that suddenly a middle aged man wid royal looks came n kept his on her shoulder n said in his attractive voice " c'mon haseena . leave them . "
"no way chand ! they need to understand that they r no more kids !"
abhay ( making puppy faces)- but mom it was not my fault . bro was
running behind me !
sid - no mom please don't cum in his cheesy sweet talks . the fault is his
they both start arguing . haseena was fumming wid anger for her sons immature behaviour n chand was trying to calm her down but he failed.
haseena shouting- stop it both of u or else i av to punish u both
they both stopped fighting coz it was better not to mess wid her when she was angry .
chand - what happend kids ? y r u both fighting like tom n jerry ?
sid - dad , abhay threw my book in fire .
abhay - that was just a mistake . that doesn't mean that bro will run aftr
me n by the way that was a book of witchcraft n mom has
said no to read such books . i did the right thing na mom .
haseena - what ? sid u r still having those stupid witchcraft books wid
u ?
sid - but mom dad is also having many
haseena - ur dad can read them but not u both !
chand- calm down haseena . he will not repeat this mistake .
haseena - fine ! but u both get ready . sid its time for ur interview for
the job n abhay its getting late for ur college . get ready fast ,
we r waiting for u both for the breakfast .
they both went to their rooms . sid came to abhay's room after getting ready . abhay was trying to go out of the room coz sid could kill him anytime for what he has done .
sid (giving dagger looks )- y did u tell to mom ?
abhay - m sorry bro but u could kill me that time only n then mom
would also scold me n i did not want her to punish me .
sid - u know that mom hates us reading anything realated to magic n i
like to know about it then why did u tell her ?
abhay - m sorry na bro .
sid - ok fine but don't do this next time . ok ? n ya what about ur dream
girl about whom u r dreaming from 2 years ?
abhay - nothing bro . i could never ask her name also . as usual mish's
call woke me up .
sid - poor u . u r dreaming of a girl n never asked her name n its ur
dream but then also couldn't keep a name ( he laughs )
abhay - yes yes make more fun of me just like mish . but u know bro
i dream always the same but everytime its a new feeling !
sid - ok fine now stop throwing filmy dialouges . hey u r good in
sketching na . then y don't u make her sketch ?
abhay - thats the problem bro ! i use to meet her from 2 years but
whenever m awaken i forget her face .
sid - ok fine now lets go downstairs mom n dad r waiting

downstairs
chand n haseena were sitting on the sofa . she was restless
haseena - chand , i don't know how to save abhay n sid from the destiny
chand - calm down haseena ! they would be totally fine . they don't
even know who r they n us .
haseena - i know chand but m afraid of losing my sons . i know that
i have not given them birth but they r my kids n i luv them !
chand - don't worry haseena . everything would be fine .
haseena - but how chand ? sid is of 21 n after one year he will have to
face the bitter truth n abhay , as the prediction says started
dreaming about pia when he was 17 n after one year even he
will have to face him , he will have to fight wid him n he is
still like an innocent fragile human . he is not aware of his
powers chand.
chand - i know haseena n i know that they will have to learn the truth
that they r wizards. we will have to start preparing them for
the day . its after one year , all the new born witches n wizards
will enter in our world . i think misha will help them .
haseena - yes chand . even misha n stacy r of our world n they know
what the future holds for them n specially for sid .
chand - haseena i think today's food is going to be delicious , i can
smell that .
haseena was a bit confused n then she turned back n understood that their sons were coming . she smiled looking at them . they were coming quiely so that they don't get scolded by their mom .
haseena - food is ready my sons . lets have it .
abhay n sid exchanged looks wid each other n were relieved coz haseena was now normal . she used to get a bit angry whenever she heard anything about magic from her sons' mouths.
they had their breakfast . chand left for his office , sid left to give interview though he could join his dad's buisness but he wanted to do something on his own . abhay , the kid of the house n the heart of the college girls left for the college .

hope u guys liked the first chappy . please comment n hit the like button . sorry for the mistakes n please tell me whether i should continue it or not .
take care
luv u all n abhiya
( btw i like chand n sid also 😳 not abhay coz he is like my bro 😆)


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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
chapter 1 a figure was standing near window . it seemed of a girl waiting for something. "pia beta what r u looking out there?" asked her mom sugandh. pia replied " nothing mom . but those dreams ...(she started recalling her dream ,her usual dreams where she met him . they both were so close to each other but again he used to disappear always . her last night dream was also like this . she was again in that burnt palace running n climbing up the stairs all smiling n humming the melody . he used to come there searching for her . he followed her . n finally they met . they were too close to each other that they could feel the breath of each other . he proceeded towards her . started kissing her neckline slowly . then slowly started kissing her cheeks then eyes then slowly approached to her lips . they were about to meet when he left . she never asked his name. so she used to call him my perfect admirer.) " hey pia beta i was asking something .where r u gone hun ?" pia came back to reality by hearing sugandh's voice . " oh nothing mom . i was just saying that again (she paused ) nothing . i need to go to the college . its getting late ." sugandh thought " my pia baby i wish i could do something for u both but i can't . forgive me pia thats happening coz its written in ur destiny " .

raichand mansion
a very royal house which was looking like a palace was setteled near the jungle of dehradun . inside it a handsome young man was climbing up the stairs said " mom dad save me from sid bhai " another young man trying to chase him said " what do u think that i will leave u abhay ? no ways . my name is siddharth raichand so don't even try to make me a fool . got it ?" they both were still running , abhay was trying to escape from his bro sid n sid was trying to him . suddenly a feminine voice said in scolding manner " u both stop fighting . siddharth u r 21 n abhay u r 19 u both r grown ups not kids " they both immediately stopped fighting as their mother's order coz they both respected her , luved her , n were a bit a scared as she was their mom afterall . that suddenly a middle aged man wid royal looks came n kept his on her shoulder n said in his attractive voice " c'mon haseena . leave them . "
"no way chand ! they need to understand that they r no more kids !"
abhay ( making puppy faces)- but mom it was not my fault . bro was
running behind me !
sid - no mom please don't cum in his cheesy sweet talks . the fault is his
they both start arguing . haseena was fumming wid anger for her sons immature behaviour n chand was trying to calm her down but he failed.
haseena shouting- stop it both of u or else i av to punish u both
they both stopped fighting coz it was better not to mess wid her when she was angry .
chand - what happend kids ? y r u both fighting like tom n jerry ?
sid - dad , abhay threw my book in fire .
abhay - that was just a mistake . that doesn't mean that bro will run aftr
me n by the way that was a book of witchcraft n mom has
said no to read such books . i did the right thing na mom .
haseena - what ? sid u r still having those stupid witchcraft books wid
u ?
sid - but mom dad is also having many
haseena - ur dad can read them but not u both !
chand- calm down haseena . he will not repeat this mistake .
haseena - fine ! but u both get ready . sid its time for ur interview for
the job n abhay its getting late for ur college . get ready fast ,
we r waiting for u both for the breakfast .
they both went to their rooms . sid came to abhay's room after getting ready . abhay was trying to go out of the room coz sid could kill him anytime for what he has done .
sid (giving dagger looks )- y did u tell to mom ?
abhay - m sorry bro but u could kill me that time only n then mom
would also scold me n i did not want her to punish me .
sid - u know that mom hates us reading anything realated to magic n i
like to know about it then why did u tell her ?
abhay - m sorry na bro .
sid - ok fine but don't do this next time . ok ? n ya what about ur dream
girl about whom u r dreaming from 2 years ?
abhay - nothing bro . i could never ask her name also . as usual mish's
call woke me up .
sid - poor u . u r dreaming of a girl n never asked her name n its ur
dream but then also couldn't keep a name ( he laughs )
abhay - yes yes make more fun of me just like mish . but u know bro
i dream always the same but everytime its a new feeling !
sid - ok fine now stop throwing filmy dialouges . hey u r good in
sketching na . then y don't u make her sketch ?
abhay - thats the problem bro ! i use to meet her from 2 years but
whenever m awaken i forget her face .
sid - ok fine now lets go downstairs mom n dad r waiting

downstairs
chand n haseena were sitting on the sofa . she was restless
haseena - chand , i don't know how to save abhay n sid from the destiny
chand - calm down haseena ! they would be totally fine . they don't
even know who r they n us .
haseena - i know chand but m afraid of losing my sons . i know that
i have not given them birth but they r my kids n i luv them !
chand - don't worry haseena . everything would be fine .
haseena - but how chand ? sid is of 21 n after one year he will have to
face the bitter truth n abhay , as the prediction says started
dreaming about pia when he was 17 n after one year even he
will have to face him , he will have to fight wid him n he is
still like an innocent fragile human . he is not aware of his
powers chand.
chand - i know haseena n i know that they will have to learn the truth
that they r wizards. we will have to start preparing them for
the day . its after one year , all the new born witches n wizards
will enter in our world . i think misha will help them .
haseena - yes chand . even misha n stacy r of our world n they know
what the future holds for them n specially for sid .
chand - haseena i think today's food is going to be delicious , i can
smell that .
haseena was a bit confused n then she turned back n understood that their sons were coming . she smiled looking at them . they were coming quiely so that they don't get scolded by their mom .
haseena - food is ready my sons . lets have it .
abhay n sid exchanged looks wid each other n were relieved coz haseena was now normal . she used to get a bit angry whenever she heard anything about magic from her sons' mouths.
they had their breakfast . chand left for his office , sid left to give interview though he could join his dad's buisness but he wanted to do something on his own . abhay , the kid of the house n the heart of the college girls left for the college .

hope u guys liked the first chappy . please comment n hit the like button . sorry for the mistakes n please tell me whether i should continue it or not .
take care
luv u all n abhiya
( btw i like chand n sid also 😳 not abhay coz he is like my bro 😆)


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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
Wow dear awsm.so piya knows abhay's face bt abhay cant recall hers.sounds interesting
abhay n sid fights was cute.
Whats the prediction.eager to know what happens when abhiya meet.continue soon.gud luck.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
hey..i loved it..both dream of each other..thats cute...eager to know ho they will meet and what will happen when they will come face to face...and sid-abhay fights were so cute...loved it..update soon..thanks for pm...

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