Haseena-Pia OS:Entering the Dark World(ImpNotePg8)

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Alicia thelwell

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

I really like this story too

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Woww Dishu...awesomee one... 👏 👏

I really liked this one...Haseena and Piya always share a different kind of bond and inspite of being a vampire, Haseena showed her motherly side to Piya and she is always prompted in helping them. I really wish Chand could understand Piya is not a burden to them and she's important in Abhay's life in many ways.

Par CVs ke pass itni akal kaha 🥱 akal hoti to half episode panda per thodi hi waste hoti... aisa show me hota to bohut accha hota... great one and keep writing 😳

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sneaky-aj

@sneaky-aj

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

OMG it was just awesummm😊 i wish it happens this way in the show😉

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Disha

@FantasyFan_8

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: shivanirajput
that was an awesome os
hey why don't u continue it and show how will pia and abhay deal with this situation
continue writing

No I cant continue this one. I have already explained reasons on Pg 8

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Disha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: Deepi20
Nice OS! I really liked how Haseena went after Piya to protect her and protected Piya from Deepanita! And of course, Piya saved Haseena at the end by killing Deepanita just shows the special bond Haseena and Piya share! Good job with the OS 👏

Thank You. This is what I wanted to highlight: the bond between Haseena and Pia 😊

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Disha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: princess_xeelan
Woww Dishu...awesomee one... 👏 👏
I really liked this one...Haseena and Piya always share a different kind of bond and inspite of being a vampire, Haseena showed her motherly side to Piya and she is always prompted in helping them. I really wish Chand could understand Piya is not a burden to them and she's important in Abhay's life in many ways.
Par CVs ke pass itni akal kaha 🥱 akal hoti to half episode panda per thodi hi waste hoti... aisa show me hota to bohut accha hota... great one and keep writing 😳

U r right Tanzie, CVs ke paas Panda ke beyond sochne ka time nahin hai