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Posted: 13 years ago
WOW
DEEPA u updated
this is short, but i know u are busy in studies but i can wait for ur ff update
so sweet bechara abhay phone call hmm so sweet.
i really like ritu letter part so touching feeling bad for her. hey is ritu is really dead?
like mishka proposal scene
update when u get time but pls make it soon
THANKS FOR THE PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
thts too emotional yar poor ritu...but hope so everythg go smooth to abhiya...thts nice misha accpt kabie but waiting 4 next part abhiya as usual...thanks 4 pm yar...cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh god abhay misses his chance ok better luck next time. thanks for the pm and its really a very cute update
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey Deepa, sorry for replying late. Awesome update😊
the letter was really touching. I am happy for kabir and misha but I want lots of abhiya in the next update and I want the next update soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update deepa .
too emotional
felt bad for ritu .
continue soon .
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Posted: 13 years ago
chapter 12
tashi - hey veer ?
veer - yeah ?
tashi - who do u think is denser ? misha - kabir or bro - pia ?
veer chuckled at the statement . she was so cute when she asked so casually that who was denser for their feelings . little did they know that they themselves were same too !!
veer - i guess pia - abhay . i mean its totally clear !! but i think kabir and
misha are no less .
tashi laughed at it . he was fun to be with . she so loved him , wait , what ? love ? no no , she just liked him . yeah , thats right , she just liked him as a friend . and wanted to be more than it , wait , urrgghhh ,,,.. its nothing like that . veer is just a FRIEND !! u got ? just a FRIEND !!
finally after so much thinking she calmed herself down .

veer stopped the car n they entered the home . tashi was surely one shopoholic person man !! they were carrying 8 bags !! n she was saying that coz they weren't having proper tie , it wasn't that much !!

tashi switched on the lights n startled for a moment . she couldn't coprehense it . everyone shouted "HAPPY BIRTH DAY " n this only meant one thing , she again forgot her birthday !! tears of joy welled up in her eyes . she felt so lucky to have them as her friends n family .

pia came running n hugged her .
pia - happy birthday
tashi - thanks pia . m so glad . thanks to everyone .
n the rest came as well . abhay came n hugged his dear sister .
abhay - oye happy birthday .
tashi - thanks bro . i love u .
abhay - love u too .
everyone wished her then . misha , kabir , zenia , zee , haseena , chand , arnab , sugandh n blah blah blah . n the last but not the least , veer .
he handed her a gift .
veer - a special present for someone very special .
tashi - aww thanks a lot veer . its all just so awesome blossom .
he smiled . then they noticed that kabir n misha were lost in each other .
tashi - pia , what happened to them ?
she asked signalling towards the love birds .
pia - oh , they both are together .
tashi n veer - what ??
their jaws dropped . literally !!
they exchanged glances n spoke together .
"definitely pia n abhay are denser then !!"
pia who wasn't paying much attention asked again "yeah ? sorry i didn't hear u ?" "nothing " was their reply .

misha dragged pia to the bar n insisted her to drink .
pia - but mish u know i can't handle alchohol .
misha - just try yaar . kabhi toh nerd se enjoying ban .
then pia took a drink . misha suddenly went out wid kabir . n here the trouble had already started .
pia put down her 11 th glass on the table .
pia - one more plz ?
bartender - but mam i don't think that u'll be able to handle anymore .
pia - just one ? she asked making puppy faces which melted him . he gave her one last drink . suddenly abhay came there n saw what condition she was in . he got worried . pia could get sick .
abhay - hey pia i think u r drinking too much .
pia - aww abhay . u care so much for me .
she put her arms around his neck n smiles .
"guess need to take her to guestroom then " he thought . abhay carried her bridal style . she protested first but the alcohol was starting to show its effect .
finally they reached the room n he kept her on the bed .
abhay turned aroung but pia held his wrist .
pia - wait ...
abhay turned - what ?
pia pulled him towards her . 'maybe she gets stronger when drunk' he thought . now they were close . correction , VERY CLOSE !! their chests were touching n lips were inches apart . for the first time someone would have seen abhay blushing furiously . but pia had to ruin the moment .
pia - i want softy
she said out of blue .
abhay - softy? u want ice cream now ?
pia - no idiot . he is my stuff toy n i can't sleep alone . i need either him
to sleep wid me or else ...
abhay - or else what ?
he could see evilness in her eyes . correction again CUTE evilness .
pia - sleep with me ..
she said so casually , so innocently . but at the same time making abhay curse those hormones .
abhay - what do u mean ?
he asked nervously . she smiled .
pia - idiot , sleep beside me . m afraid of being alone .
abhay was disappointed . he had almost planned everything which was going to happen in few seconds n pia burst his bubble of sweet dreams .
abhay - fine ...
he laid beside her . abhay thought that when she will fall asleep he will go but mister I-M-SO-SMART forgot that the girl was none other than pia jaiswal . she hugged him n cuddled more . they were so close that he almost could feel everything of her . her face , her arms , her legs , her breast , her ches- lets not move further !!
n that night they both spent with each other .
hey guys really sorry for the delay . n m sorry if it wasn't good enough but i continously typed n as some of u know , m way too lazy to write more . so plz leave ur precious reviews . n yeah sorry i couldn't reply . actually i don't get much time . hope u understand . 😳 n sorry m not able to pm u guys this time . 😳
Edited by cuteteddy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey deepa really nice update. Poor Abhay 😆 Piya ne kiya uska bura haal 😆
Edited by bookworm-ALS-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Hey deepa really nice update. Poor Abhay 😆 Piya ne kiya uska bura haal 😆

thanks yaar 😳 glad u liked . girls rule . i love it when abhay is always cool but only not when it cums to pia😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum...poor abhay..loved it
Edited by abhiya_pkyek - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update..bechara abhay..kya socha aur kya ho gaya 😆

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