ABHAY TAKES MY BREATH AWAY - Pia's POV

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deepali

@-Deepali-

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+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Very Beautiful and Romantic dose Carisma..you showen Piya's Feeling very well..
Awesome written❤️🤗

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A.hemalatha.kini

@TOTAL-ROMANTIC

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Oh MY GOD..carisma..😲can you please take over my duty of writing posts on ABHIYA everyday.😉.woha😛..kya descrieb kiya hai..maybe I should retire now I feel after reading your post..😆😆seriously I mean it..👏

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Pratiksha

@Don_theEvil

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

amazing post, pia's feeling beutifully written yaar, good job 👏

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snitchseeker

@snitchseeker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Pia & U are both so romantic. 😍Let me drool first. Will write a lamba sa comment later.

Ajeh baad main likhna.

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

This is outstanding Cari 👏 👏

I always portray Abhay's emotions so perfectly and you have done full justice to Piya's emotion as well. This young woman always leave me pondering about her power of love and determination to have Abhay...😍

I would like to quote my fav ones 😊

As Abhay draws close my senses are captivated under his spell, I have surrendered, all I can see or feel is Abhay. A whirlwind of of ecstatic emotions limit me to a world in which everyone else is thrown far away, out of vision and mind.

👏 👏

" I am not sufforcating - I know because I have the most sweetest pain in the very pit of my stomach which has become a garden to fluttering butterflies. "

Loved it 😳

🤗

Waiting to read next one ...luv u 🤗

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chandrima

@Viviliciousgirl

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

That was breath-taking!!! The way you have described Piya's feelings..its so real and rightly said. Thank you for making such an awesome post! It is beautiful just like Abhiya's love is.

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The Witch

@carisma2

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Thanks guys.. I will reply to all of you - when I am back on the laptop - when I get home.

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purple_shadoz

@purple_shadoz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

superb wrk dear...👏breathtakingly beautiful...⭐️i jst lvd it...❤️

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.Reshama.

@.Reshama.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

hmm nice post ... i want to see more of ur work...😍

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Resh

@SheDevil

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Posted: 14 years ago

#20

haha Ajeh kiss toh evn I describe very well 😉😆😆cari but Abhiya ka kiss gosh.U can do tht better.I loved ur lil OS.Agree Pia is an epitome of desire & Passion & she need Abhay in whtever form she get😳

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