Abhiya reunion OS : piya's memory back

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Abhay Piya after Piya regains her memory.

Piya goes to abhay and says why you do this to yourself, why did you take away my memory, why are you being a matchmaker for me; you want me to move on alright, I will listen to you because I love you.
What do you think abhay I will be happy? If you think this is right and I'll be happy then alright, I will do it. But abhay answer me for the last time this question: how can I marry someone when I do not love him and in fact can never love him, I can get married to him but my soul has already surrendered to you. Isn't this ruining someone's life? I love you only and always loved you. Whether you love me back or not whether you are human or not, whether you talk to me nicely or not whether you are having good or bad mood swings whether you take decisions of your life or my life or our life alone without my permission. All I know is I will love you always and loved you always whether you are nice or mean whether you create problems for me understand Mr. Abhay Raichand. You want to leave me then leave me. And please do not return to help me even if I am in a huge problem whether it is about my life or any problem please. I have never asked you to give me anything even your love just give me one thing a promise of never helping me or saving me ever again. I know one year time span has passed and you have moved on to someone else. I hope you and her all the best. I also know you do not love her and this is just an act to show me and others. Please abhay do not play with yourself and your feelings. I know you want me to live a happy normal human life. Please abhay don't torcher yourself and don't lie to yourself. That is all I will say and bye forever. Never to meet again says piya crying. Abhay in his mind: I know piya this is difficult but it is good for you. I can never get a normal life or give you a normal life. You had come into my dark world and I released you from it. In the vampire world love between human and vampire is detest just like marriage is not acceptable between human and vampire. Piya I love you and always will love you forever but this blood sucking animal must let you go no matter how much it hurts. Our love can put you in danger again with vampire superiors, Maithili, siddharth and even werewolves for loving me and being love of my life. I wish I was human like you, I wish I had a normal life like you, wish there were less problems in our life, my love for you can put your life in danger. I must let you go. This Pyaar kii yeh ek kahani must be ended, this love story of mine kabhi nah kisi ne suni yeh kahi. This love story better if left alone to never be breathed again says with tear filled eyes. This monster must let you go.


P.S. this the other OS i wrote. please tell me your views about it n i am sorry for my mistakes.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice OS shivani. though I wish abhay had stopped her
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Beautiful OS
Loved it
abhiya's feelings were beautifully expressed
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow

awesome

though i wanted abhay to stop pia

now will abhay and pia never ever meet again

abhay s true feeling were expressed here

does pia know that jeh is a werewolf here

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Beautiful Shivani..That touched my soul..You know I am so apprehensive about how will they shoot that moment when Piya's memory will be back,...& what she will talk to Abhay ..or what she will do to ABHAY..GOD..it shivers me..to think & you have said everything what I want PIYA to SAY to ABhay..Awesome girl & Thank you so much.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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beautiful OS...pia and abhay's feelings are expressed so fantabulously...loved it...👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhayfan_dishu

nice OS shivani. though I wish abhay had stopped her




okay i will try to make a part 2 n for sure abhay will stop her but might take awhile. 😊
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Originally posted by: CleviveDsouza

wow

awesome

though i wanted abhay to stop pia

now will abhay and pia never ever meet again

abhay s true feeling were expressed here

does pia know that jeh is a werewolf here





i will make a part 2 of this OS but it might take a while.
yup they sure will. n jeh is not in here, it is just werewolves in general. they will not show up unless i change mind.
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Originally posted by: TOTAL-ROMANTIC

Beautiful Shivani..That touched my soul..You know I am so apprehensive about how will they shoot that moment when Piya's memory will be back,...& what she will talk to Abhay ..or what she will do to ABHAY..GOD..it shivers me..to think & you have said everything what I want PIYA to SAY to ABhay..Awesome girl & Thank you so much.



i am glad u like it. this is how i want abhiya's meeting to be like after piya's memory comesback. n it sounds cool how i wrote something that u wanted piya to say .
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thank you guys for liking it . it means alot. i was scared to post it cuz i have read too many good OS and FF that i thought this was really bad. but thanks alot. n her is a hug from me 🤗 and you all can give me ideas to write the next part cuz i did not think i would be thinking about writing a part 2 or more. n feel free to write next part on your own.

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