My First Abhiya O.S - Page 4

Originally posted by: mijanur

awsome os dishu.i wish the cv of pkyek will also do the same.excelent writining.you describe abhiya's emotion beautifuly

Originally posted by: heena_mehta

dat was fabtabulous o.s dear
ur o.s is showing a ray of hope to me...
nw i despirately want dat watever u av written turns into reality..
beautifully written...
keep d gud work on
thanx for d pm

Originally posted by: TOTAL-ROMANTIC

Dishu I swear🤗..I am not saying this because you are a dearest friend of mine..BUT you have left me in shock with yourwrite up yaar..YOU ARE STUPENDOUS ..MARVELLOUS & OUTSTANDING.👏👏.👏 👏👏mean those dialouges also were sooo perfect yaar GOD..I am simply unable to express you how awesoem it was & how touched & happy I am with you imagination..& how I wish ki AISA HI KUCH HO..yaar GOD you all should join Balaji yaar ..she pays super well hun pay cheque.why not go there ..DIshu..please apply at least we will get some awesome moments yaar..🤗

Originally posted by: CIDMaaneetNaksh

wow dishu...mazaa aa gaya!! lovely OS... the way you described Abhay's care for her was fantastic and then Panchi turning cupid was like tg...ise akal to aayi... and then change in Arnab's thoughts... and then pia understanding Abhay and his feelings and the way she made Abhay confess his love... Abhay still reluctant on stay away😆 but other wise...awesome OS... if you make up ur mind to write a sequel...do PM me!

sorry for being late

Originally posted by: abhayfan_dishu

😆 no. no sequel please