OS Runaway Bride part 5 1 August pag 36 - Page 23

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Posted: 14 years ago
Omg m desperately wating 4 ur update of dis OS u knw i feel so gud reading it n u knw i was non-reader but dis OS!ah
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Posted: 14 years ago
it was so emotional😭 lovely,update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing .. gorgeous .. wonderful !!!!!!
plz ... update soon !!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
she changed for her love and abhay even hating himself he had given everything for her
wow what love can do people
do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi sweety😊

Lovely update👍🏼. It was so emotional😭.

Abhiya's conversation was so beautiful n touching. So much of love. I hated seeing

Them so weak. It was so heartbreaking 😭

I felt bad for jeh too. U could feel the guilt was eating him

And it was really touching when pia made them promise to take care n look out for each other.

Am glad chand n Haseena encouraged Abhay to bite pia.

Thanks for the pm hun. I guess the next part is the last 1.

this mini ff was really awesome👏

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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 5:::End Game:::


Abhay took the lifeless body of Pia away from the cold night along with his parents and he felt he owed Jeh something for Pia's sake after all he was her best friend.
Abhay to Jeh-U coming? I'm not asking again. Pia has asked me to be there for U and i always complete her wish's if its in my power to do so.
Jeh to Abhay in a low voice filled with shock-You'd do this.
Abhay smiled wryly unable to pull it off-For Pia i'd do anything. Come over to my place. Don't worry we won't bite. I have left my fangs on hold for bigger threats. I know U won't hurt me for the same reasons i won't hurt U. Pia.
jEH TOOK THE LIFELESS DEAD BODIES OF HIS mOTHER AND BROTHER AND BURNED THEM SWIFTLY WITH ABHAY'S help.
Arnab Dobrial arrived with Panchi and Misha to see Abhay with Pia along with both Jeh and the Raichands calling out to them but he only got a simple answer from Abhay.
Abhay bellows his voice echoing-Pi'as no longer your concern Dobrials. Pia is mine now. Mine alone. I'll take care of her and make sure she's safe.
Arnab a little angry and confused-U can't take Pia. She's my daughter.
Abhay yelled out-Pia's my life. Beat that! I let U take her once but U failed as a father. Pushing her. All of U pushed her. I am just as guilty but now its time to correct my mistakes.
Misha interjected-U can't do this Abhay. Pia's our sister. She bel...
Abhay finished-With me! If we can we'll see U around if not then this is a goodbye. Nice knowing U.
With this last sentence Abhay had taken off with his beloved in tow. At the Raichand mansion Abhay placed Pia down laying on a elongated table. Abhay had used his own blood to revive Pia out of the brink of death. She'd lost too much blood and with Vampire venom running through her system and in her veins this was a plausible way of bringing her back as they waited the wee hours till sunlight for answers.
Jeh paced around Pia hating the thought that she would eventually become the very creature he hated but it was his fault for causing this to all happen. While Abhay only stared back at Pia's beautiful pale blood drained face longingly willing her to come back for him.
Chnad and Haseena prepared the blood bags for Pia having full faith in Pia's love for Abhay. Fate couldn't be so cruel to Abhay and Pia only for it to break the strings that bound them together. Chand with a goblet of blood in his hands whished around the place searching for an alternate way to bring Pia back through his numerous books on reviving the fatally wounded. Unfortunately Pia was attacked by a werewolf so there was no saying if Abhay's blood would save Pia. His venom would do the trick but Abhay had left it too late.
Haseena strokes Pia' cheek-She's a beauty Abhay! Pia's a fighter. She's fought all her life. Look at the lines on her forehead. As a vampire we can see the smallest of details. She's been through hell and back for U Abhay. So have U aas a matter of fact. I just wish you'd seen the bigger picture. Pia was born for U Abhay. Only U alone. This is the reason she's always been drawn to U. And U to her. Abhay my son She will egt out of this alive.So she can be an immortal. (To Pia huskily giving Pia encouragement and a purpose) Pia fight throught the darkness and come back for Abhay. Come back for your love my child. We are all in awe of the unbreakable LOVE u both share. Abhay is waiting for U. Don't leave him. Fight back with everything U have.
Abhay gently kissed Pia's forehead and then whispered in her eays reminding Pia of every sacred moment they ever shared together like a bedtime story. Abhay then grabbed hold of Pia's hands giving it a squeeze.
Pia could hear the desperation in Abhay's voice and the footsteps of Jeh to Chand's musty old books. Haseena's sweet voice. It was Abhay who'd kept her awake in her dark filled slumber. His soothing voice was like an ointment to her inflicted wounds. Pia made a lunge out of the pit of nothingness and into the light to find Abhay. She squeezed his hand back and opened her eyes gently.
Abhay rushed to her side sweeping her in his arms and kissing her frantically watching Pia giggle feeling alive again. She hugged him back so he'd remain locked in her arms. So nothing could take him away from her not even death itself. She whispers in his eras lovingly.
Pia blushing away-I heard every word Abhay. U really are a romantic. U kept all of our memories together and never shared them with me. Someones been a bad boy!! I love U Abhay. More than humanly possible. More than you'll ever know.I've never felt this good before. (Eyes Abhay flickering her eyes at him with a new outlook) God Your so gorgeous. Now i know what i've been missing out on Abhay. You've been holding back on me. You'll have to pay me in kisses.
ABHAY KISSED PIA'S LIPS ONCE LIGHTLY WHILE pIA TOOK HER CHANCE AND PLANTED HIM WITH A REAL PASSIONATE ONE LASTING WHAT SEEMED LIKE A LIFETIME.
Pia smiled-Now that is a real kiss Abhay not those butterfly kisses. (Pulled back a little still holding Abhay watching Jeh. Pia's features changed looking apologetic) Jeh i didn't know! I i am sorry.I.
Jeh though hurt was happy to see Pia back-Thank gOD u ARE ALRIGHT? R You a vampire?
Abhay stated-Not yet? She is turning. Pia this is all your decision. I'd rather U remain human.
Pia let out a sigh and gave Abhay oh no U don't look-Nuh uh! I don't care what U want Raichand U are not maing the decisions or making me have second thoughts. This time i get to be in the drivers seat. I want U in any way i can have U. As a human i've tried and failed but as a vampire Abhay i wouldn't have to worry about U saving my neck all the time. Nor will U have the power to pawn me over to any old person. No offence Jeh but Abhay is reknowned for having his way all the time. These are my rules. U bite me another time remember on the full moon. I remember Abhay.
Abhay relented knowing full well he was having no effect on Pia-U got it.
Pia to Jeh-I can't believe U both did this for me. U were willing to be there for the other.
Jeh smiled-For U naything Pia.
Pia smiled back-I pray U find a special girl just made for U.
Abhay wished the same so Jeh would stay away from Pia-Ditto.
Pia laughed-Abhay and his stay away missions are too much. Now i won't be staying away from U Abhay ever again. Jeh will be staying with us.
Haseena hugged Pia-Good to see U back Pia. Now we can have a little normalcy back and Abhay can go back to being his usual self.
Pia beamed-I can't wait to uncover my nerw journey with my new family.
The End
Ps- Jeh does find a lucky girl 7 years later. Guess who it is?
Edited by matwamango - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update dear. wonderful, so tht girl will be abhiya's daughter 😉
Edited by abhayfan_dishu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
it is now
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nyc Ayesha !!!!!!!

wonderful end !!!!!!
n i guess itz misha !
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Posted: 14 years ago
I just luved it awesome i wud sa y thanx 4 d pm and by d way who s d ms perfect of jay i really luv reading ur ffs and os it makes me feel closely related 2 Abhiya

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