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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update
thanks for the pm and update soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow cute update :) continue soon :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Read your ff so far Iqra...
Enjoyed it very much...
Abhay gave a from the heart definition of love...
I guess he is falling for Pia...
Pia is evidently smitten by him...
Good work so far...
Hoping to read more😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

hello every one am bak...

here is a update plz read it i have a g8 plan for this FF... do comment on it...i will read all u r ff...

recap on p14...

another day of collage ended...pia was happy dhe didnt know why bt she was ... she n her friend were goin out today for a chill they normal to every weekend b today was thursday bt still they went...pia was very very very very happy today for two thing one was her sis was coming bak from abroad.pia had a sis her name was panchi she was in usa she went for studying n her study was finished n nw she was coming bak after 15 year..n pia was happy for something she don't even know. why...soo she want to celebrate with her best mates..all of them met after collage and then went for a party at the disco.. misha was very exciting tooo coz panchi was her really really closet friend she was more then a sister to her...both of them very together since childhood... at the disco..pia's friends entered first then misha and pia.. entered..both of them got changed for the party ...they entered...

pian misha:less party...less gooo ...whaooo...

when they entered every one stared at them...welll most people were lookin at pai rather then misha...misha was wearing normal clothes as always...short with a top ..she had no make-up on ..bt still she looked nice.on the other hand pai was like awesome dashing pretty...awww

she was wearing a purple short dress with a light blue bow on it... her hair was opened she had a light blue headband...she wore purple hight heels.. ..imagine... everyone looked at her...

some girls talking about her...

girl 1: isn't she pretty?

girl 2:she is ...isn't she just

girl 3: babes she look gorgeous n pretty ... look there all the boys just staring at her ...wish i was like ... dont uu...

g1: yh same i wish too... she looks totally amazing...

at one corner of the hall was standing some group of boys...when they saw pai all of them were in a shock...

b1: isnt she f***** hot???

b2:yhhh...welll hot ..awww...

b3:am goin die man OOFFFTTT!!!!! yaar...

all of them boys were talkin about her ... and they were poinng at her n givin her dirty looks...pai did not care wat they said about she was here to have fun...pia misha and all her friends went to a table n sat down..they ordered some drink n some food...after eatin some food ... they were jus talkin...

pai:misha wat shall we do nw ??

misha i dont know..

pai:am bored..

misha: i know we can know do some dance...

pai: yh less gooo

misha n pai n two of there friends went to the floor dance ...

pai n misha were dancing with the music ...misha was dancing like mad... then suddenly a boy walked over to pai n said ...plz can i dance with u??

pai:yh sure...

pai n the boy were dancing ...

boy:u look very pretty..

pai thank uu ..

boy:u are very hot sexy ******* am OFFTT...

pai:ok that enough nw ... i dont want to dance with uu...

the boy graped her tightly..n wont let her go..he put his hand around her back ...

pai:let me goo nw...she said loudly... every one stop dancng the music stop every one stared at the pai n the boy ... the boy was still holdin tightly .. then pai push him way her...the boy moved closed to her...then pia slapped him really hard across his face....miaha n her went to pia ...

misha:wat happened pai ?? tell mee...

pia:misha misha...the guy was trying to touch mee in the wrong places..*********as she told misha wat happened she has tears in her eye..she was crying really badly ...

misha:ok pai ...the she went up to the boy... how dare you touch my friend...she slapped him one too...misha started hating him...the guards came n took the boy out side ...then pai n her friends left the party too... ..pai had very bad day ...she was very upset for had happened...when she got home her mum n dad was not at home.. she didn't even eat any thing...all she did was go to her bedroom..pai was very sad ... bt then she tough of something that mad her smile ...

note:

  • the boy only said dirty thing to her... he did not do any bad thing...
  • new character will be coming in soon...so wait for it...

wat is pai thinking about that made her smile?

wat is abby feeling for her??

wat will happened next ???

sorry for any mistakes...

If U Want To Be PMed Send A BUddy Reques
Thnx For The Luv And Support So Far
Iqra xx

INTRO- pg1
part 1-pg 3
part 2-pg 5
part 3-pg 6
part 4-pg 8
part 5-pg 9

part 6-pg 12

part 7-pg 14

plz comment ...love read themm 😊
thank uu xxx

iqra xx

Edited by luv_vivian_luv - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
. hey that was a really short and sweet update
pia is happy because of abhay right
thanks for pm and update soon and this time longer

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shivanirajput

. hey that was a really short and sweet update
pia is happy because of abhay right
thanks for pm and update soon and this time longer

ho...ho... thank xx... sort one coz am let all my mates catch upp...coz it been a time since i wrote my FF ..

i will write soon ok it juz that i have exams... that why .. will write long one soon.

n yh pia is happy happy coz of abbay...


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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome iqra.
I just read ur ff in one go.
Its amazing
i think abhay is falling 4 pia n pia smiled thinking abt him.
Poor piya her party was ruined.
Continue soon n thanks 4 the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update! That boy that said that stuff to Piya was such a loser! 🤢 I'm guessing Piya thought of Abhay that is why her mood changed when she got home and she smiled! And I'm curious to know whether the new character you will introduce will be positive or negative! Looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊
Edited by Deepi20 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey!!!!😊i just read ur ff.. n its awesome👍🏼...i luved it...would luv 2 read more..well it was abhay right whom piya was thinking about...pls do add me in ur pm list..can't wait ...do continue soon😊...
Edited by madhuri16 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update...
I read the ff for the first time ...
Loved it...

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