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#121

em like dead...after the last part...i dun bellive u r sooo goooddd

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#122

i was waiting for da update of dis ff and finally u update it was very very nyc😊

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Rehanna aka Parri

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#123

heeeyyy wht is this song???rehana and whoo????? 😕...! and jaldi jaldi update i cant wait for ur beautifull thoughts to read ...!

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Posted: 14 years ago

#124

Update this sooon yar it's v nice story nd M witing to read more.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#125

syria pleeez update the 3rd chapter
Pleeez syria
Pleeez
Pleeez
Pleeez
Pleeez
Pm me ok
Pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: renuka1997
syria pleeez update the 3rd chapter
Pleeez syria
Pleeez
Pleeez
Pleeez
Pleeez
Pm me ok
Pm me
Pm me

i will as soon i update it. my sweetpie. i can't today. i am on my way to d.c. right now stuck on traffic going through if. i will upload on wed. bec today it's memorial day, and i am spending time with my family

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Chapter 5(Anguish, Jealousy, and Confused emotions)

What do you feel when somebody you considered your family, and your whole earthly possessions betrays you? Anger, injustice, resentment, guilt, unfaithfulness, pain, agony, depression, melancholy and suffering. This simples words are easy to describe the betrayal, but enough to experience to be on somebody shoes. People should step in my shoes, and know. Piya thinking of her song long lost foster family shut the water from the shower up. She quickly dried her hair, and changed in t-shirt, and aqua green blouse. She finished it with light touch up of makeup, and pearl earing. And, the her good lock charm bracelet. This only the possession she had left of her mother , and the only memory. Yeah, they were photographs , but this charm bracelet had been with her through thick, and thin.

When Piya came out of the bathroom, Abhay was leaning against her bed. Piya thought it was a damn sexy pose. She mentally slapped herself for staring further. She turned away.

Abhay (teasing her)- Like you what you see. Don't turn away babe. You know you want this.

Piya threw the towels at him.

Abhay (smelling the towels)- Peach, and Vanilla. Nice Smell!

Piya - Ewww! You f**king creepy asshole

Abhay(smirking)- You mean you hate your own smell.

Piya grabbed the towel, and threw in to the laundry pile.

Abhay got up, and left . Before leaving , he informed that they were going out. And, to come to his room.

Piya (thoughts)- That ass is sexy as hell. Piya! Shut your self . Remember you were not supposed to think good of him. He is a shameless character, and your enemy. He is your enemy, and enemy (snapping out of her thoughts, she left the room.)

When she walked in Abhay's room. She did not knock . Abhay was shirtless with only paints on.

Piya (blushed, and her cheeks were flushed with heat)- I am sorry! I am gonna leave

Abhay (smiling ) moving forward. Piya backed away slowly. Abhay quickly shut the door, and grabbed her.

Abhay pinned her against the wall.

Abhay - I will show you that you can give in to my temptations.

Piya breathed heavily. And, closed her eyes. Abhay yearned for Piya in every way possible. He slowly traced her forehead, cheeks, lips, and her collar bone. He threw kissed down her neck, her collar bones, and kissed every part of the face. Piya unable to control to urge rubbed her self against the jeans, and hugged him tightly. Abhay slowly pulled her from the hug, and kissed her with all the mighty force he had. Abhay traced his finger through her bras to untighten it. But, Piya realizing she could not go further threw him with all force and ran away. As soon as Piya left, Abhay's wh**e Michelle came knocking in. And, Piya realizing she need to mark a spot between her and Abhay went to confront him. When she opened the door, Michelle was all over Abhay. As soon as he saw Piya, he kissed Michelle back to make rise jealousy. Piya seeing this stumped her foot ,and left. As soon as Piya left, Abhay kicked Michelle out of her Mansion. Abhay put his t- shirt, and left to find Piya. Piya felt hurt, and betrayed. Why did she envy him seeing with other girls? And, Abhay was she only toy for him. As soon she saw Abhay, she wiped her tears and straightened herself.

Abhay- Shall we leave (hissing)

Piya- Let's go ass. Finally , I can go somewhere from this prison. Piya sat in the front seat. Through out the ride, Abhay, and Piya remain quite. Abhay turned the fm to 99.5 to bring some light in the awkward situation. But, Piya turned it off. Abhay turned it off,. Piya turned it off. Abhay did not want to deal with a feisty Piya right now. So, he ignored her, and left. They arrived in a small beach. It was evening , and crowd of people had gathered for the small fair the town had hosted.

Piya (excited like a little child)- You brought me to a fair. Am I dreaming? Abhay Raichand , Acting like a normal person. Brought me to a fair (popping her eyes out)

Abhay (growling)- Shut up.! If you don't wanna don't go, we can head back. Don't need to shut what I am in my face.

Piya (feeling guilty)- That it was nice of you. Can we go now?

Abhay,and Piya went to the fair. Upon guys sighting Piya, they came to introduce theirself. Abhay was irritated, and jealous. Piya seeing reaction flirted with the guys back. He had to pay for the damages he had done in the morning she thought.

A guy name Matt came to introduce himself.

Matt- I hope the guy standing next to you is not you boyfriend. I would hate to loose a young lady like you. Abhay recognized the guy instantly. He was the evil vampire working for Kabir. He stopped Piya for leaving with him.

Abhay- No thanks! I think it would better if you leave. And, she is my fianc. (Abhay blocking Piya, and holding her possessively)

Piya- Shut the f**k up! He is not my fiance. He is a mother f**ker stalker who followed me here. Let's go.

Abhay - Fine You wanna go ! If your f**king ass gets raped. Don't come crying to me. (hissing)

Piya (scowling)- Shut up! You f**king bas***d. You don't have the authority over my life. Let's go Matt. I don't wanna go stay with this flith of dirt anymore.

Piya, and Matt left.

Abhay was frustrated. Damn That girl! Had not brain. He would have to follow them. She would completely screw trusting him.

Matt, and Piya.

Piya - Thanks Dude! For rescuing me from the monster. Now, I am gonna leave ok.

Matt (grabbing Piya tightly) - Babe! You are not leaving. You were a fool trusting me.

Piya (trying to free for him)- Leave me the f**k alone

Matt- No deary! You are coming with me. With that, he grabbed Piya, and without any one noticing it. He flew with her, and landed jungle.

Piya was scared. She flet guilty for not trusting Abhay. He was right.

Piya - Who are you? (Matt still holding tightly to her)

Matt- I am a Vampire work for Kabir

Piya (inquiring curiously)- You mean the Kabir (the lord of Vampire)'s Abhay enemy

Matt - Yes Malibu Barbie!. Took you long to figure out. Humans so stupid. I am gonna turn you to my boss. But, why should all that beauty go to waste. You can give me pleasure (tracing her neck).

Abhay(coming from behind)- Or It can be the last day you will ever be alive

Piya gulped a her saliva.

Matt- You are here to rescue your lady love. Poor baby, won't be able to.

Matt snarled his fangs, and attacked Abhay. Abhay blocked his attack. Matt jumped trying to attack Abhay. Abhay flew , and kicked him hard. Piya horrified just rested near a tree. Matt came running, but Abhay grabbed him. Snarling his fangs, he bit the tissue of Matt. Matt losing his blood weakened, and but before he could launch another attack. Abhay grabbed crack his neck, and stabbed with a knife through this heart. He picked Piya her up, and threw her on the car. Piya scared said nothing. Abhay speeded the car 180 miles, irked with Piya.

Before Piya could utter a word, he pulled to lonely spot.

Abhay- Get the f**k out.

Piya (scared followed his order)

Abhay pinned her against the car. Piya was sweating, and afraid.

Abhay- W*F where you thinking? Why did you go with a freaking random stranger? Do you know you could have been raped? Your little innocent virginity you are saving that stupid person could have been take away? Why the f**k don't you get it? Your blood, and the entire of you are dangerous ,and magnet for danger. (hitting the car)

Piya closed her eyes.

Abhay- You know what forget it. It's f**king useless taking to you. You ned to be tuck somewhere. You think you are some Miss. Damn Precious, hurt , and betrayed ? Not your are not! You are snooty Malibu Barbie? Do you have even some brains, or you have concealed some thing as called come sense somewhere? Forget, I am done with u. I am gonna do my duty of protecting you. (scowling at her)

Piya- Yes! I f**king perfectly , I screwed up trusting some random stranger. But wbu? You bring some wh**e every night. And, you were only jealous.(retorting back)

Abhay grabbed her hands tightly.

Abhay- I don't f**king envy you if you go with other guy. I only rescued because of my selfish reason. Fine ! You wanna know. Ever since you have come to my life. You are the only girl who has ever effect on me in such a longtime. Yes! I can't stand any mother f**king asshole touching you. Yes ! I freaking envy seeing you with other guys. Yes ! I am saying this one. The player, and ass Abhay Raichand.What do you feel when somebody you considered your family, and your whole earthly possessions betrays you? Anger, injustice, resentment, guilt, unfaithfulness, pain, agony, depression, melancholy and suffering. This simples words are easy to describe the betrayal, but enough to experience to be on somebody shoes. People should step in my shoes, and know. Piya thinking of her song long lost foster family shut the water from the shower up. She quickly dried her hair, and changed in t-shirt, and aqua green blouse. She finished it with light touch up of makeup, and pearl earing. And, the her good lock charm bracelet. This only the possession she had left of her mother , and the only memory. Yeah, they were photographs , but this charm bracelet had been with her through thick, and thin.

When Piya came out of the bathroom, Abhay was leaning against her bed. Piya thought it was a damn sexy pose. She mentally slapped herself for staring further. She turned away.

Abhay (teasing her)- Like you what you see. Don't turn away babe. You know you want this.

Piya threw the towels at him.

Abhay (smelling the towels)- Peach, and Vanilla. Nice Smell!

Piya - Ewww! You f**king creepy asshole

Abhay(smirking)- You mean you hate your own smell.

Piya grabbed the towel, and threw in to the laundry pile.

Abhay got up, and left . Before leaving , he informed that they were going out. And, to come to his room.

Piya (thoughts)- That ass is sexy as hell. Piya! Shut your self . Remember you were not supposed to think good of him. He is a shameless character, and your enemy. He is your enemy, and enemy (snapping out of her thoughts, she left the room.)

When she walked in Abhay's room. She did not knock . Abhay was shirtless with only paints on.

Piya (blushed, and her cheeks were flushed with heat)- I am sorry! I am gonna leave

Abhay (smiling ) moving forward. Piya backed away slowly. Abhay quickly shut the door, and grabbed her.

Abhay pinned her against the wall.

Abhay - I will show you that you can give in to my temptations.

Piya breathed heavily. And, closed her eyes. Abhay yearned for Piya in every way possible. He slowly traced her forehead, cheeks, lips, and her collar bone. He threw kissed down her neck, her collar bones, and kissed every part of the face. Piya unable to control to urge rubbed her self against the jeans, and hugged him tightly. Abhay slowly pulled her from the hug, and kissed her with all the mighty force he had. Abhay traced his finger through her bras to untighten it. But, Piya realizing she could not go further threw him with all force and ran away. As soon as Piya left, Abhay's wh**e Michelle came knocking in. And, Piya realizing she need to mark a spot between her and Abhay went to confront him. When she opened the door, Michelle was all over Abhay. As soon as he saw Piya, he kissed Michelle back to make rise jealousy. Piya seeing this stumped her foot ,and left. As soon as Piya left, Abhay kicked Michelle out of her Mansion. Abhay put his t- shirt, and left to find Piya. Piya felt hurt, and betrayed. Why did she envy him seeing with other girls? And, Abhay was she only toy for him. As soon she saw Abhay, she wiped her tears and straightened herself.

Abhay- Shall we leave (hissing)

Piya- Let's go ass. Finally , I can go somewhere from this prison. Piya sat in the front seat. Through out the ride, Abhay, and Piya remain quite. Abhay turned the fm to 99.5 to bring some light in the awkward situation. But, Piya turned it off. Abhay turned it off,. Piya turned it off. Abhay did not want to deal with a feisty Piya right now. So, he ignored her, and left. They arrived in a small beach. It was evening , and crowd of people had gathered for the small fair the town had hosted.

Piya (excited like a little child)- You brought me to a fair. Am I dreaming? Abhay Raichand , Acting like a normal person. Brought me to a fair (popping her eyes out)

Abhay (growling)- Shut up.! If you don't wanna don't go, we can head back. Don't need to shut what I am in my face.

Piya (feeling guilty)- That it was nice of you. Can we go now?

Abhay,and Piya went to the fair. Upon guys sighting Piya, they came to introduce theirself. Abhay was irritated, and jealous. Piya seeing reaction flirted with the guys back. He had to pay for the damages he had done in the morning she thought.

A guy name Matt came to introduce himself.

Matt- I hope the guy standing next to you is not you boyfriend. I would hate to loose a young lady like you. Abhay recognized the guy instantly. He was the evil vampire working for Kabir. He stopped Piya for leaving with him.

Abhay- No thanks! I think it would better if you leave. And, she is my fianc. (Abhay blocking Piya, and holding her possessively)

Piya- Shut the f**k up! He is not fiance. He is a mother f**ker stalker who followed me here. Let's go.

Abhay - Fine You wanna go ! If your f**king ass gets raped. Don't come crying to me. (hissing)

Piya (scowling)- Shut up! You f**king bas***d. You don't have the authority over my life. Let's go Matt. I don't wanna go stay with this flith of dirt anymore.

Piya, and Matt left.

Abhay was frustrated. Damn That girl! Had not brain. He would have to follow them. She would completely screw trusting him.

Matt, and Piya.

Piya - Thanks Dude! For rescuing me from the monster. Now, I am gonna leave ok.

Matt (grabbing Piya tightly) - Babe! You are not leaving. You were a fool trusting me.

Piya (trying to free for him)- Leave me the f**k alone

Matt- No deary! You are coming with me. With that, he grabbed Piya, and without any one noticing it. He flew with her, and landed jungle.

Piya was scared. She flet guilty for not trusting Abhay. He was right.

Piya - Who are you? (Matt still holding tightly to her)

Matt- I am a Vampire work for Kabir

Piya (inquiring curiously)- You mean the Kabir (the lord of Vampire)'s Abhay enemy

Matt - Yes Malibu Barbie!. Took you long to figure out. Humans so stupid. I am gonna turn you to my boss. But, why should all that beauty go to waste. You can give me pleasure (tracing her neck).

Abhay(coming from behind)- Or It can be the last day you will ever be alive

Piya gulped a her saliva.

Matt- You are here to rescue your lady love. Poor baby, won't be able to.

Matt snarled his fangs, and attacked Abhay. Abhay blocked his attack. Matt jumped trying to attack Abhay. Abhay flew , and kicked him hard. Piya horrified just rested near a tree. Matt came running, but Abhay grabbed him. Snarling his fangs, he bit the tissue of Matt. Matt losing his blood weakened, and but before he could launch another attack. Abhay grabbed crack his neck, and stabbed with a knife through this heart. He picked Piya her up, and threw her on the car. Piya scared said nothing. Abhay speeded the car 180 miles, irked with Piya.

Before Piya could utter a word, he pulled to lonely spot.

Abhay- Get the f**k out.

Piya (scared followed his order)

Abhay pinned her against the car. Piya was sweating, and afraid.

Abhay- W*F where you thinking? Why did you go with a freaking random stranger? Do you know you could have been raped? Your little innocent virginity you are saving that stupid person could have been take away? Why the f**k don't you get it? Your blood, and the entire of you are dangerous ,and magnet for danger. (hitting the car)

Piya closed her eyes.

Abhay- You know what forget it. It's f**king useless taking to you. You ned to be tuck somewhere. You think you are some Miss. Damn Precious, hurt , and betrayed ? Not your are not! You are snooty Malibu Barbie? Do you have even some brains, or you have concealed some thing as called come sense somewhere? Forget, I am done with u. I am gonna do my duty of protecting you. (scowling at her)

Piya(scowling)- Yes! I f**king perfectly understand , I screwed up trusting some random stranger. But wbu? You bring some wh**e every night. And, you were only jealous.(retorting back)

Abhay grabbed her hands tightly.

Abhay-Yes! I f**king envy at thought of other man touching you. You are mine. Yes! From the day you have stepped in my life. You have put me through hell, but still I f**king have to care about you . Yes! The only reason I pick a fight with you is to see your priceless reaction , and you look so darn cute with you reaction. You are f**king taking over a mind every day. And, you know what happened in the morning was to make you ass jealous. I don't give a shit about any other wh**e. Yes! I think there is a hope for us. Yes! I have begun stirred up some feeling for you. But, not now . From today , I am keeping my distance myself from a girl like you. A girl like you can never love. And from today on we both are strangers. I am only trying to save ur f**king ass. Remember! You hate me, and I hate you. And, if you wanna ride in car back with me. Yes! The asshole Abhay Raichand confessed.. Get your f**king Ass in the car , I am leaving . If you don't wanna come, I will send a driver for you later.

Piya got back in the car with a smile on her face from the confession Abhay had just confronted her. But, she dare not to talk or make any conversation. A part of her felt guilty. And , the car ride to mansion was filled with silience.

Precap
Abhay wills start dating some other girl And, Piya will try to deny her feeling for Abhay. Both will. And, Abhay he said Piya the other day was a mistake

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CPEBN2dVNUY[/YOUTUBE]

Edited by syria2014 - 14 years ago

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Rehanna aka Parri

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Posted: 14 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: syria2014
Chapter 5(Anguish, Jealousy, and Confused emotions)

What do you feel when somebody you considered your family, and your whole earthly possessions betrays you? until i finish updating it on ms word, and editing enjoy this song

we feel betryed 😛

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Petal_Pose

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Posted: 14 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: rehanasadique
we feel betryed 😛

why?😉

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598470

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Posted: 14 years ago

#130

hey all ur ffs are amazing! this one is amazing :D and the answer ur question we feel betrayed because you never expected that person to hurt you so much...

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