Abhay has ruined Piya for life and everyone else.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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" Perhaps this is what they call love. Giving away all your heart."

That's what Piya told Abhay as she nestled in his arms. And that strikes you, doesn't it? Piya has given everything that she had ' every ounce of emotion that she is capable of ' to Abhay. She has parents , she has sisters , she has friends , suddenly , her life is great but none of them can reach the Abhay pinnacle in her life . Abhay was the first ray of light in her life . He was the first one and the only one to shield her against the winter winds . He was the first one to make her fall in love with herself and give her that feeling of 'being loved ' and 'being wanted'. He filled her with so much emotion that even if the whole world falls in love with her today , its secondary. She has long stopped yearning for love because Abhay filled her to the brim.

And today , he is with her and gives her so much love , so much assurance , so many promises , so many fairytales and so many dreams that Piya just glows like a firefly and hops around the whole world like a happy bunny. Hasn't Abhay made this girl-next-door the most beautiful girl in the world ? Hasn't he made this orphan the most loved girl in the world? Hasn't he filled her world with so much happiness that she is going delirious with all the joy in her heart? Hasn't he given her the life she always dreamt of? Its like he has just picked all the stars in the sky and put them in her palms.

Then?

One fine day , he is going to walk away''..taking Piya with him and leaving just a shattered shadow behind in the name of a girl called Piya.

Abhay doesn't realize , or maybe he does , but he has ruined Piya totally ' for a life that he thinks she can live without him. He has ruined her too much for her to be able to even look at a man again with heart eyes. He has given her so much that when he takes away everything in one single snap , its tough to figure out what will be left of Piya behind. Infact , will there be any Piya at all?

I am not saying that Piya is going to die or anything if Abhay leaves her. But then, death is not always physical. Sometimes, life doesn't go out of you but light does.

You have ruined Piya , Abhay. Ruined her for anyone and everyone , forever. Its either you or else its someone else with a Piya whom you won't know, Piya herself wouldn't know and the audience doesn't want to know.

All these romantic scenes of the two birds , send more alarm bells ringing than putting fairydust on your eyelashes. How can Abhay even THINK that he can leave the girl after imprinting her with himself LIKE THIS?

And no, I am not bashing Abhay . It is just the shocking rudeness and tragedy of the situation that am talking about.

Love and luck always,❤️

GOD bless everyone. 🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago
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It was Lovely reading the first two paragraphs 😳 n then I read the below lines... 🥺

"One fine day , he is going to walk away''..taking Piya with him and leaving just a shattered shadow behind in the name of a girl called Piya."

very harsh reality but Piya is gonna face this really soon !!!!
I really dunno/cant understand how can Abhay even think of doing this to Piya? 😲 Especially after being in that situation as in Maithli left him, he knows how difficult is it to live without ur love He was like a dead man living n Today, he wants to put Piya in the same situation
She was the one who brought life into his dead life n he wants to take away life from her life after giving her soo many promises really not done Abhay... 😳
*fingers crossed* I hope he doesn't do that to himself or her !!! 😳
Poca, very well written/expressed 😳⭐️
Edited by SnowWhite1618 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I totally agree with you.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Poco, I think it's a very valid question and I am not sure if Abhay even realises the emotions that he is filling in Pia. I mean, he understands love more than Vampires, infact more than even humans but does he really really understand what he is doing to Pia emotionally. I always get confused about this.

He is always worried about physical security of Pia. His promises for loving her always are real, his promises for being always there for her are real, but those promises are from Abhay's side to protect her physically. I don't think he even understands how they are going to shatter Pia emotionally. (I remember once I had a discussion about this with Chillz and we were wondering if CVs even realise the depth of these answers from Abhay)

I totally understand you are not bashing Abhay as these questions come to my mind also whenever I see those scenes. I can't help it but I try to think how will it feel to fall in love with your food (veg or non-veg doesn't matter). And I am not joking when I do that comparison.

And you say it so beautifully 😍

Edited by Ritzie - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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So BEAUTIFUL!!
Sigh. Im feeling even more low after reading the post. But its good, the power of your words is really affective.

I am not saying that Piya is going to die or anything if Abhay leaves her. But then, death is not always physical. Sometimes, life doesn't go out of you but light does.

^Loved these lines. True and moving.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oh...even though it does nt sound nice really...but i completely agree with you. This is the harsh reality, when u leave behind a girl who had loved you with all her love, emotions, body, every which way she could, and everything she could give..and then one day suddenly you shatter her dream world...thats like forcefully bringing her into harsh reality...n u r really not ready for it! the lovey dovey moments take my breath away...n in a relation these serve to bond you stronger..atleast for a girl..she is all d more connected to her man...and as u said...Abhay is imprinting himself more n more into Piya and her life..not only his blood flows in her veins...but he too flows in her. Its like fantasy which they both are living...with Abhay knowing it will have a break one day...and Piya...knowingly closing her eyes...with love Abhay is showering on her.

When Abhay leaves her...she will have Abhay all into her...but not with her...and such a contradiction is enough to kill her...when she is still living! its like dying a thousand deaths. 😊
Edited by chahat4u - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Such a beautiful post Pocu!!! very emotional and true thing about AbhiYa... 😭
I really liked your post and all beautiful lines...👏 specially

"One fine day , he is going to walk away''..taking Piya with him and leaving just a shattered shadow behind in the name of a girl called Piya."

I agree with with 100%. Currently for Piya, Abhay is her whole world, even though she has now father, mother, sisters but without Abhay it wont mean anything to her. Since Abhay is her soul and without soul no life... If Abhay will leave her, she will be ruined... does not matter she lives on this earth after Abhay or not,.. but there wont be a soul..😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i totally agree ...if he leaves piya is dead anyway 😭 n then it will be all sad sad 😭 n story will go boring 😡
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I am not saying that Piya is going to die or anything if Abhay leaves her. But then, death is not always physical. Sometimes, life doesn't go out of you but light does.

Oh pocz..I am already drained in energy after watching that ABHIYA scene ..which was so mind blowing that my hyper excitedness is just not getting over & above this I get to read your GEM of A Writing as always..and the above sentence what you have mentioned..is sooo perfect ..and It goes with me also..because I will also be soulfully dead if the ABHIYA seperation extends ..you know Yes Abhay is very wrong & he has ruined my life also along with PIYA now I cannot Imagine anything without both of them together you see..!!😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sometimes, life doesn't go out of you but light does. My Pocahontas is divine!

Uh, I was too busy making faces and shrugging when I could just bloody flick through other channels, they would have been equally useless, but um, you know, the works. Sheesh! But okay, I like what you wrote and it startled me, this was the freaking highlight of the episode but I was noticing other stuff. Pia's gonna be Bella for sometime. Love is most definitely the most lethal thing I have ever witnessed, like okay screw love. Bella becomes breakable, when her metal is kind of strengthened, she in turn transforms the cause that is my Jacob Black breakable, through the cracks - his light makes its way out. Sigh. Abhay, my man is actually getting carried away. But it's not one of his mistakes now, really. Let them be and the girls around enjoy.

P.S. Once more they play that song anywhere, I'd trash, somebody. I dunno, it's sickening and filthy, the guy singing his science of proximity out! 🥱

-K
Edited by -Kanky- - 14 years ago

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