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Posted: 14 years ago
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ch 4
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angat:dude this new boy abhy is taking so much intrest in pia..
kabir:ya i know (said carelessly)
angat:ok lets go to the class room
scene( in vampire hostel)
pia:is anybody here?
shaury:damn i m so hot.. u cant resist me ..that's y u came here to meet me...oh! these girls.. r all so desperate for me...
pia:do not consider ur self that important (laugh)
shaury:oh! baby dont lie to me i know every thing
u r mesmerized with my charms.. u cant even w8 for tomorrow morning to see me..
pia:be serious.where's abhy? i need to talk to him
shaury;to tm bewafa sanum nikla
pia:wht?? aww..did i hurt u??
shaury:ya a little..bt u can fix it with a hug
pia:noo...
shaury hugs her
she felt wave of coldness running in her body
pia:u r so cold leave me
shaury:u r equally hot..now it's balanced...
abhy appears from upstairs
abhy:shaury go into ur room..
shaury left
abhy:pia cm with me
scene(abhay took pia to his room)
pia walked into room
red curtains covering windows
the room was dark
n was illuminated by candles
classic paintings were hanging on wall
some books were lying on table
probably he must be reading them
everything of room represent royality
pia was admiring his classic and peculiar taste in heart
abhay closed the door
he approached her
he was now standing towards back of pia
pia felt a hand on her neck
abhay was removing her hair gently from neck
pia felt scared
"is he gonna suck my blood"
her heart beat increases
her hands were shivering
she closed her eyes tightly
then
she felt something on her neck
when she looked at her neck
it was her mom's necklace
she felt relived n happiness
she wants to thank abhay
before she could speak
abhay's finger was on her lips
abhay:u thought i m gonna hurt u.i would never do this till end of my life.
miles of silence
abhay's fingers were running in her hair
they both were lost in each other
abhay came close
to her face
n was about to kiss her
door knocked
abhay:come in
shankar entered
shankar:sir,your dad is here,he wants to see u.
abhay:i will be there in 5 mins
pia realized she should leave now
pia:i should go now
n she left
scene(abhay father chand was sitting on a sofa)
abhay:dad,how r u?
chand:abhay,i m fine.come here n sit in front of me.
(abhay sits on front sofa)
chand:abhay you are handling your group very well n ur idea of collabration was very clever of u
abhy:well that's a first step.i hope 1 day human will not afraid of vampires n will be able to live together n they'll be able to reveal their identities
chand:well we can hope that will be our future.still, evil vampires r not giving up to hunt humans
abhy:we can deal with them
chand:i should leave now.there r important matters to deal with.i came here to see my son
Edited by punjabijuliet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
nice update. continue soon please.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
Wao awsm nd fantastic dear.
luvly.
plz cnt wid nxt part soon.
luv u
vritika
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
Nice update and continue soon. Can you add me to ur PM list please please
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
wao great update i really like it:)awesome work:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26

nice part👏👏

ohh abhay was so sweet😳

oh that knock on the door😡

thanks for the pm😉

update soon😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Dear Nice Story.. Just went through d first part.. Carry on.. Add me 2 ur pm list.. 'll b waiting for d next part..lol.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
Continue soon
Add me 2 ur PM list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
ch:5
scene ( misha n kabir r sitting on a ground)
kabir:i m getting bour.lets hv sm fun.
misha:like wht?
kabir:u have to say angat i love u n i owe u a dinner
misha: cool... bt angat!!!
(with pitty expressions)
kabir:yup...
misha:i'll do it
scene(pia n shurya in coridoor)
shaurya: hy
pia;oh! p/z not again...y dont u jst leave me alone.
shurya:leave this all... will u go out with me???
(with a cute puppy dog face)
pia:do i look dork???
shurya:i'll take it as yes
pia:f9 bt after this u'll never ask me again
shurya hugged her
surya: i knew it! i always do... that u had a crush on me bt u r not ready to accept ur feelings for me(he bend on his knees n hold pia's hand n say in dramatic style)
"oh!.. my princess.. let ur doors of heart open for me... my love!)
every1 passing through thier ,
now looking at them
pia felt embarrassed
pia: this drama is enough for a today,text me details
panchi was listening all that
scene( kabir is hiding behind the trees lookn at mesha n angat)
mesha:angat i hv to tell u something...a...a..m...i...i lv u (blurted)
( after listening this from mesha... he got faint... n fell on ground..like a log..the luv confession by girl for the very first time...was hard to digest)
mesha:oppsss...
kabir;shit!!!
both ran away
scene(kabir enters in pia's room)
pia was wearing red cocktail dress open hairs...
she was looking into a mirror
kabir:y r u wearing fancy dress?
r u going somewhere?
pia:ys! i m going out with shurya
kabir: on a date???
pia:ys
kabir: how many times i have to tell u to stay away from them... (angrily)
pia:whts wrong with u?
jst shut up!!
dont give me lectures. i m not a kid (angrily)
(she realized that she was being rude to him
she slow down her tone)
look, i know u care for me,alot... bt p/z i need some space.i hope u understand)
pia picked up her purse n went away
(kabir was still standing their n was thinking)
pia u r so innocent bt i wont leave u alone.. u r everything to me
scene(shaury outside pia's house in his car)
shaury:u seems to be in a bad mood
pia:i m in a bad mood( a bit angrily)
shurya:i know how to make my princess smile
pia:where r v going?
shaurya:get in car...
scene(all r sitting around a table)
shankar:so.. he's on a date with pia
panchi:yup! i heard them talking... if abhy comes to know he's gona sue him...he knows that how much he cares for her
T:hahaha! it would be nice...if v go there n spoil their date...
shankar:ok... it sound's so much fun
abhy appears from behind
every1 stunned for a while
abhy smiled: count me in...
every1 surprised
abhy:y? wht happened?? i also deserve a little fun
Edited by punjabijuliet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
LOL i wnt 2 read more abt Abhiya.Gud part

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