Ff*GuZaArIsH* part 1 on page 1

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Posted: 14 years ago
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*GuZaArIsH*


hi frenz..
As most of you know me, i am aparajita
and here i am with something which will make you feel happy, i wont claim that it will definitely make you feel happy but please do let me know if my efforts are appreciable

PrOlOgUe

wo kehte hai na..
God ji sab kuch duniya me jodiyo me bhejte hai..
Jaise
sukh hai to dukh bhi hai
achayi hai to burai bhi hai
sach hai to jhuth bhi hai
pyar hai to nafrat bhi Hai
khushi hai to gum bhi hai
aur farishtey hain to shaitan bhi hai..
Ye sab ek sikke ke do pehalu hai..ek dusre se juda juda par jis tarah se "there is no importance of white without black" usi tarah se ye ek dusre se alag meaningless ho jate hai..


Me aap sab ke samne "guzarish" layi hu..
Ye ek dua hai..
ek bayan hai..
ek wajah hai aur ek disha hai..

Har janam me, har zamane me agar heer-ranjha, romeo-juliet, sheni-farahd, laila-majnu... Jaise sacha pyar karne wale huye hai..usi tarah unhe juda karne wale aur pyar ki in kahaniyo ko khatam karne ki koshishe bhi hui hai...

Par last me jeet achai ki hi hui hai.. At last love has won and ruled the world and hatred has never survived in front of strong wall built with love..


is janam me pyar ki ye jung ladenge do sacha pyar karne wale AbHaY aur PiA
kya adhuri reh jayegi pyar ki ye ek kahani?
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Posted: 14 years ago
#2
*Character sketch*



Abhay raichand
a lover who goes against destiny to claim his love infront of this world
he will not sacrifice his pia whether he has to fight his brother or the vampire inside him who turns him to a barbarous animal
his heart may be heartless
but for sure love will find a way
***

Pia
abhay's angel..the girl whose mere presence sets abhay's soul on fire of love and the girl who is so innocent and naive that her innocence can convert a beast to an angel..but she is unknown that she has been trapped by destiny to go through horrifying war against all that is evil and all that which will mould her soul to a stronger one
***

Siddharth
when thousand demons were killed then sid was born..
Though he had a softer side but it was killed long back..now his softer side has surrendered to his inner demons so they are on same side now..
His cassanova image is same as that in the show..
He claims revenge from abhay and pia..pia has been included in this war as she is the only tool which can be used to harm abhay

mr. And mrs. Raichand -same as that in the show
***


panchi dobriyal
she is same as that in the show.. She is madly in love with sid who is fooling arround with her..

Over all wahi kiredar wahi manch but kahani zara hat ke hai..
Edited by SimplyAparajita - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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theme of the story


basic theme song "guzaarish"


Chill_Out
Tu Meri Adhuri Pyaas Pyaas
Tu Aa Gayee Mann Ko Raas Raas
Ab To Tu Aa Ja Paas Paas
Hai Guzarish

Hai Haal To Dil Ka
Tang Tang
Tu Rang Ja Mere
Rang Rang
Bas Chalna Mere
Sang Sang
Hai Guzarish

Kehe De Tu Haan To Zindagi
Jharno Si Chhoot Ke Hansegi
Moti Hongi Moti Rahon Mein
Yai' Yai' Yai
Tu Meri Adhuri Pyaas Pyaas
Tu Aa Gayee Mann Ko Raas Raas
Ab To Tu Aa Ja Paas Paas
Hai Guzarish

Sheeshe Ke Khwaab Leke
Raaton Mein Chal Raha Hoon
Takraa Na Jaoon Kahin
Aasha Ki Lau Hai Roshan
Phir Bhi Toofa Ka Dar Hai
Lau Bhujh Na Jaaye Kahin
Bas Ek Haan Ki Guzarish
Phir Hogi Khushiyon Ki Baarish

Tu Meri Adhuri Pyaas Pyaas
Tu Aa Gayee Mann Ko Raas Raas
Ab To Tu Aa Ja Paas Paas
Hai Guzarish

Hmmm''.hmmm'..hmmm
Hmmm'hmmm'hmmm
Ooo'ooo'

Chanda Hai Aasman Hai
Aur Baadal Bhi Ghaney Hain
Yeh Chanda Chhup Jaaye Na
Tanhayee Das Rahi Hai
Aur Dhadhkan Badh Rahi Hai
Ek Pal Bhi Chaein Aaye Na
Kaisi Ajab Daastan Hai
Bechainiyaan Bas Yahan Hain

Tu Meri Adhuri Pyaas Pyaas
Tu Aa Gayee Mann Ko Raas Raas
Ab To Tu Aa Ja Paas Paas
Hai Guzarish

Hai Haal To Dil Ka
Tang Tang Tu Rang Ja Mere
Rang Rang Bas Chalna Mere
Sang Sang Hai Guzarish

Keh De Tu Haan To Zindagi
Jharno Si Chhoot Ke Hansegi
Moti Honge Moti Rahon Mein
Yai'yai'yai'

Tu Meri Adhuri Pyaas Hai
Hmmm'hmmm'hmmm'
Hmmm'hmmm'hmmm'
O'ho'O'ho'
O'ho'O'ho'Tu Meri Adhuri Pyaas Pyaas
Tu Aa Gayee Mann Ko Raas Raas
Ab To Tu Aa Ja Paas Paas
Hai Guzarish

Hai Haal To Dil Ka
Tang Tang
Tu Rang Ja Mere
Rang Rang
Bas Chalna Mere
Sang Sang
Hai Guzarish

Kehe De Tu Haan To Zindagi
Jharno Si Chhoot Ke Hansegi
Moti Hongi Moti Rahon Mein
Yai' Yai' Yai
Tu Meri Adhuri Pyaas Pyaas
Tu Aa Gayee Mann Ko Raas Raas
Ab To Tu Aa Ja Paas Paas
Hai Guzarish

Sheeshe Ke Khwaab Leke
Raaton Mein Chal Raha Hoon
Takraa Na Jaoon Kahin
Aasha Ki Lau Hai Roshan
Phir Bhi Toofa Ka Dar Hai
Lau Bhujh Na Jaaye Kahin
Bas Ek Haan Ki Guzarish
Phir Hogi Khushiyon Ki Baarish

Tu Meri Adhuri Pyaas Pyaas
Tu Aa Gayee Mann Ko Raas Raas
Ab To Tu Aa Ja Paas Paas
Hai Guzarish

Hmmm''.hmmm'..hmmm
Hmmm'hmmm'hmmm
Ooo'ooo'

Chanda Hai Aasman Hai
Aur Baadal Bhi Ghaney Hain
Yeh Chanda Chhup Jaaye Na
Tanhayee Das Rahi Hai
Aur Dhadhkan Badh Rahi Hai
Ek Pal Bhi Chaein Aaye Na
Kaisi Ajab Daastan Hai
Bechainiyaan Bas Yahan Hain

Tu Meri Adhuri Pyaas Pyaas
Tu Aa Gayee Mann Ko Raas Raas
Ab To Tu Aa Ja Paas Paas
Hai Guzarish

Hai Haal To Dil Ka
Tang Tang Tu Rang Ja Mere
Rang Rang Bas Chalna Mere
Sang Sang Hai Guzarish

Keh De Tu Haan To Zindagi
Jharno Si Chhoot Ke Hansegi
Moti Honge Moti Rahon Mein
Yai'yai'yai'

Tu Meri Adhuri Pyaas Hai
Hmmm'hmmm'hmmm'
Hmmm'hmmm'hmmm'
O'ho'O'ho'
O'ho'O'ho'

author's note
dear frenz
i have started the story differently from the contemporary ones where first tey meet then they fall in love and all...
abhiya in my ff are deeply in love with each other and can die for love too...abhay's develish brother wants pia at any cost just like he wanted metz..but this time abhay is going to fight all the evil and demon and prove that despite of being categorized as demon by nature he will be pia's angel...
let the story unfold..i promise you ll love it..and yeah abhiya and sid in my story are a bit different from that in show..the example of abhiya love is shown in the first part..lol i decided to keep this "stay away from me pia" dialogue a bit away while penning it down..
to be breif its a third world war between love[angel] and hatred[demon]

YOURS
APARAJITA
Edited by SimplyAparajita - 14 years ago
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PaRt~ 1

"have you ever wondered where you're going to end up in future? how your life is going to be?"
these lines were harassing pia's ears and continuously echoing in them
she yelled among the forest trees man i do this all the time.its something from which i can never run away.
pia with her swelled up eyes was trying to trace her path out of woods
the coldness of night surrounded the not-so-cold pia in its cold embrace,though winters were one of her favourite seasons.
it was a new year night and the cold breezes which pia facinated were taking away the wet tears from her cheeks
tired of running away from those woods and herself..pia sat under the love tree which had a heart made on it and abhiya embedded on it..she carassed it lovingly
she looked up at the stars and admired the full moon night
there was something else too which was keeping her from admiring th night completely,the thoughts kept bothering her all the way .she felt that emotions piling up inside would explode any moment
she sighed closing her eyes as she dint want to ruin that moment,but it was cut out short..when 2 cold hands embraced her from back making her feel ticklish
pia-abhay chhodo mujhe
abhay-i am sorry
pia-why do you alwez do this?
abhay-i am not afraid to love you pia..i am afraid of losing you..what if i lose you..i will die
pia- abhay i dont have strength to stay away from you any more..stop pushing me to the edge..when you already know that more you push the more closer i come
abhay-how can you love a lifeless dead body
pia-how can you avoid someone's love who is ready to be the same for you..
abhay-talk some logic pia..if you live forever then what do you have to live for
pia-for you abhay
i love you

abhay-you know very well..you are my life
abhay cupped her face and cleaned her tears
abhay restd his back on the tree where they wrote abhiya and pia occupied the empty space in betwwen the legs..
abhay hugged her from back and encircled her neck by his arms and teasingly nibbled her ear lobe
pia-abhay kya kar rahe ho its ticklish
abhay,who was still kissing her neck and nibbling with her ear lobe-aren't you scared being with a vampire on foolmoon night that too at midnight
pia-why to be scared?my trust in my love is stronger than any fear
abhay teasingly added-you smell yummy jaana
pia lovingly smiled,flaunting her dimples-okay sir so dinner is ready and its raw pia..
both giggled at this so routine question with so routine answer
pia placed her head on abhay's lap who already knew what was next
he carassed her sweet cheeks and uttered softly tum and misha dono ek jaise ho lullabye lovers..
abhay patted her head and unentangled her curls lovingly and kissed her forehead
pia-]abhay plish meko wo abhay piya wali love story sunao na..
abhay-roz sunti ho fir bhi man nahi bharta and he started telling the same old story..
pia slept
but her mind was awake..
abhay's mind-why pia why are you being with a guy who is mad for you but he can even harm you when he is out of control
pia's mind-meri sanso ko tere dil me panah mil jaye
to meri jaan tere ishq me fanah ho jaye
their sweet chat was interrupted by the disturbance with sidharth cause by calling for abhay
abhay took'out the world's most poweful ring and made pia wear it..
he made the sleeping pia were it and pia in her sleep mumbled-abhay danger aa gaya kya..jo fir se pehana rahe ho..abki baar tum dekhna me tumhe return hi nahi karungi ye ring
abhay smiled at her and dashed towards sid
sid- *sniff sniff* little brother i can smell her..
she smells yummy
i want dinner ..i want dinner..i want dinner

abhay who was least bothered by this act of sid,went near his ear and whispered"she is mine..just like maithli was..and you being a demon can never win love..wana try..go ahead"
abhay had purposely stepped at sid's paining nerve
sid like a hurt lion roared" maithli is mine..pia too will be
sid mind was evil and he started singing the song"do pyar karne wale is jungle me mil rahe hai"
he went at the back of abhay and yelled "boommmmmmmmmmmmmmm!!!!" and he disappeared smiling wickedly leaving a baffeled and worried abhay
precap-one abhay with unconcious pia and infinite werewolves*aparajita wonders why does pia never listens to abhay or is it sid's plan? what do ya all think????
Edited by SimplyAparajita - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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apri good goin bache cotinue
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Posted: 14 years ago
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plz continue

nd jab bhi update karo mujhe pm karo
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Posted: 14 years ago
#7
update soon...i like it :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice Intro of the story, Apri 🤗 really liked it *not fakin it*

n loved the characters desp.. especialy sid's character 😆
lookin fwd to the FF 😳 do continue...
Edited by ritu1618 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#9
oh wow sid had a softer side ....pls yaar tumhari ff mein toh jaldi sid abhay ka story bata do na i want to know how it goes in your ff but really your ff looks interesting

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow.. Nice Intro Dear.. Loved it.. Carry on.. Add me 2 ur pm list plz.. Waiting for d 1st part..
lol.,
Galvina.

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