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Posted: 15 years ago
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Dear creatives....

It is not too late to correct the error of your ways and still have all the twisted, twists and turns you like. If the story keeps going this way neither Shank nor Prasha can save you. So please read my ideas, infact feel free to steal them, I insist. If they are not to your standard, the lovely people of this forums have even better ones. Anything to save the show and then Ekta Mai can truely say that 'she dares to do what no one else would do'. By uniting the couples (we are willing to acept some problems) and giving us the rest of the sibling story. 😊
May your TRP rise if you listen,
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Posted: 15 years ago
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For those who are new here, this thread is about the ideas I have for the Pyaar Ka Bandhan storyline. In the hope to give the craetives alternative twists, rather than the headches and heartbreaks they are giving us.

Page 1 - Twists....all the couples Prasha/Arnak/Azika/Mira.
Page 2 - Twists....Prasha& Azika are on the run, Arnak follow and Mira after marriage.
Twists recap....Shashank found out the truth about fake marriage, but couldn't be with Prats because of his Dad. Ariana plans to marry him, but Ronak swapped places with him at the mandap. Azika fell in love, then Prats and Miland got Devika out on the wedding day. Miland only agreed to let her go for his mother's sake, he is not happy because it was a big embarrassment for the minister. He married Rahda, but is angry about the whole fiasco. Ariana is after Azika and Prasha.
IDEA... The morning after the wedding and Azika will talk about what to do next. Devika will be worried that her Dad will looking for them. Aziz is will be concerned for his Ammi. They find Prasha,asleep near the camp fire. Devika will comments that they look very peaceful. Aziz will tell her they deserve to be happy, after what they have gone through. Prasha wake up and Azika tell them their problems.
IDEA... Shashank can joke that it's a bit late to worried about parents now since Laila and Mujnu have run away😆. Prats tells him not to joke and reminds him, that needs to phone home too. Shanks tells Aziz not to worry, Ammi will be safe with the Rai's and Devika's Dad will not risk harming Aziz or there will be trouble. They decide to get away as soon as they can. Azika goes to the car.
IDEA...Prats holds Shanks hand and he stays back. Prateeksha will ask him to tell her what he really thinks. He will ask how she knew he was lying ? She will say she can tell when he's worried, she always could. Shashank says her Dad will sent people out to get her, so we need to get them married A.S.A.P. Shank thinks they could cross to Rajestan since they came so far, Prats will ask aren't Devika's family from Rajestan. Shank will say exactly it's the last, place they will expect her to go. Prats isn't sure, Shashank will kiss her hand and asks if she trusts him? Prats will say more than herself and then we have a Prasha moment 😍The car horn is heard and Prasha break away. Shashank will joke that Aziz is very impatient to to get married, unlike his sister. Prats will tries to look angry but can't, because of the smile on his face....
IDEA....At the Rai house Vikram wil be asking Khaala (Ammi), how she could have let this happen. Aziz was like a son to him and now because of him the Minister thinks he is responsible for Devika running away. Khaala says she had no idea, Aziz never talked about love. Ariana will say Prasha are responsible. They couldn't be happy so they are spoiling Devika's life and Aziz should not think above his station.
IDEA...Enter Raunak/ flackback.... Since his wedding he has remained cool in front of the Rai family. He told them the Arnak truth on the wedding day and apologised for his behaviour. Vikram raged, but Sonia had seen reason, since Prasha loved eachother and so did Arnak. Finally Dadi said they were married and that was that. Ariana had given atitude and he is giving her time to come round. Sonia had suggested that he live with the Rai's. He didn't like the idea, but she said it will make thing easier with Vikram, so he agreed.
'Twist'....Flackforward...Ariana said she will find Prasha and Azika and bring Devika back. Raunak tells her she is right and he will help her, she is suprised. Vikram says the Minister's men can do that. Raunak tells him that will create too much media attention, if the story gets out it's bad for both families. He says he will take Ariana, because she can guess where they might want to go. Vikram will not trust Raunak. Raunak can say he stayed to face the music and didn't run away. Vikram calls the Minister with Raunaks idea and gets information on the where Prasha & Azika were seen last.....
IDEA....Rahda is in her room, Miland is not there, he was gone when she woke up. She had promised she would only marry him for their love, she asks herself why she had played into Milands hand? It was because she respected Prats and his Mum and she didn't want another girl going through what she had.
IDEA.... Fashback....She thinks about what he said last night, he only married her make himself look good. Well two can play that game. If he needed her then, that ment she had some power over him. She would make him see his errors and she knew that deep down he still loved her.
IDEA....Miland entres with his Biyoya and says the Minister is waiting for them. Biyoya forces him to compliment his wife and laughs at his reluctance. They go down and Miland is staring at Radha, when she notices he looks angry and she hides a smile...
IDEA....The minister knows about Miland and Radha. His is a typical, male, chovernist and doen't care if Miland was seeing Radha. He can't hide Devika's truth forever, but Mira's wedding stopped it being public on the wedding day. Miland is told about Raunak wanting to help and Miland has doubts. Everyone knows how Arnak got married. The minister says they can use Raunak and he might just be using them, to get information. When Azika are found they can send their people in....
IDEA...Meanwhile Arnak are setting off. Ariana tells Raunak that she knows he is up to something and says he is helping Prasha isn't he? He replies in his usual way that she shouldn't ask if she is so sure. She is about to insult him, but he gets in first by saying, I'm your husband now, so insulting me, will make you look bad 😆. As she fumes Ishita comes and anounces she is coming. She says everyone is in love and on the road, maybe she will have some luck going with them😆. Looking at Ariana attitute towards Raunak, she says she will take Raunak if Ariana doesn't want him.😉 Both she and Raunak irritate her all through the journey
IDEA...They head to the highway and follow the information from the ministers spys. They stop and at places and ask for directions and work out where Prasha and Azika are heading. Ariana will try to call home, but Raunak has got her mobile. The cold war between them continues. Ishita is having the time of her life......
'Twist'.... To delay the bad news the minister sends Mira to his home in Rajestan and Miland decides to take Biyoya too...
IDEA....Aziz is tells Devika about his family and Kolkata as he drives. She will ask him if he ever wants to find the rest of them. He says if it's in destiny it will happen. Devika will compare it to a girl getting married, that you have to love a new family and now Aziz ,Ammi and Kaajol Didi ( Prateeksha) will be her family. Then maybe one day her family will accept them. Azika are happy that they have such a good understanding.😊
IDEA...Shashank is listening(eyes closed) and wonders if Azika will ever have a fight.😆( probubly thinking about all his clashes with Prats)😆 He is sleeping in the back and Prateeksha is watching him and smiling. He opens his eyes and asks what she is thinking. She says, if someone told her a year ago, what she would be doing today, she would not believe them. He will tell her it's destiny and ask her to think about their furture😍 The car suddenly breaks at that moment. Aziz will say he saw smoke, coming from the bonnet of the car and get out to look. As Shashank gets out too, Prats will say road problems are also in our kismat (destiny).😉 Shashank will be happy that she can joke and of his good influence on her😍....
......In Part 3....Prasha & Azika meet Arnak & Ishaita
Please post your comments.😊
Edited by The_May_Rose - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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👏👏👏 Your imagination ROCKS!⭐️!! I sooo wish the CVs would actually read this stuff to see wat the fans want!!! Keep it up!!!👏👏👏 I love your work!!!😃😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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these are all awsome ideas i really loved reading them i hope the cv listen to us and correct there mistake do post more ideas love to read them
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Posted: 15 years ago
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For Part 2 the pace is a bit slower, because I found it hard to balance all the stories. Plus I was trying not to put to much detail, but just give a genaral idea. But in some places where I can imagine the scene I can't help putting the detail in. I tried to keep it equally balanced, but this was affected by how much of the charactor, we have seen on screen.
Would like to know your views, please comment !😊
Edited by The_May_Rose - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow, u should be the creative of this show instead of all those useless creatives
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Just read the updated version!!👏
It still ROCKS!👏😎👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wonderful ideas!👏 Only if the PKB creative team was reading this.... and decided to use some of them😍 Do add the 3rd part asap!
Edited by *angel94* - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thank, will do it as soon as I have spare time.😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
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For those who are new here, this thread is about the ideas I have for the Pyaar Ka Bandhan storyline. In the hope to give the craetives alternative twists, rather than the headches and heartbreaks they are giving us.
Stories already started by me in the Creative Twists.....
Page 1 - Twists....all the couples PraSha/Arnak/AziKa /MiRa .
Page 2 - Twists....PraSha& AziKa are on the run, Arnak follow and MiRa after marriage.
Page 3 - Twists....PraSha& AziKa are found by ArNak. MiRa arrive in Rajasthan, followed by trouble.
Twists So Far....Prasha re-union and fake marriage truth is out.
Ariana tries to revenge marry Shashank, but Raunak marries her instead. Arnak are not on good terms.
Miland and Devika are going to get married and Azika fall in love.
Shashank helping Aziz to get Devika, Prateeksha cuatious.
Miland argues with Aziz about loving Rahda and spoiling Devika's life.
Miland goes to Kolkata and finds Mother.
Devika wedding day Prasha help Aziz and Devika run away.
Miland marries Radha for Mothers sake and to make the minister greatful to him.
Arnak are looking for The Runaways and Ishita has joined them for the trip.
Prasha and Azika are heading to Rajasthan.
Mira and Biyoya(Mother) have been sent to Rajasthan too.
Twists Recap....PraSha and AziKa are driving to Rajasthan when car starts to smoke and Aziz has to stop the car. ArNak are following them with the Information they got from the Minister Chauhan (Devika's Dad). MiRa have been sent to Rajasthan, to avoid questions about Devika's marriage.
IDEA.... Biyoya and MiRa arrive at the Minister Chauhan's house in Rajasthan. Looking at the welcome they get, Biyoya will thanks God, for he son's luck. Miland will say it was his hard work and God has still not given them the rest of their family. Biyoya will advise him to not spoil his present happiness, because of that pain. Biyoya still has faith.
IDEA....Shashank and Aziz try to get the car going, nothing works. In the end they decide to walk to the next garage to get help. Here we can see PraSha and AziKa walking together on the road. Shashank will try to romance, but Prats will say not infront of her brother.😊 To which Shashank will say, Aziz is too lost in Devika to worry about his sister. As PraSha watch, Aziz will be asking Devika if she is alright to walk, as she can't be used to it. She will say that for the first time in her life she feels free. She is willing to do a little walking. He is fussing over her and she insists she can manage. He is starts to say, if she feels tied they will rest for a bit, when.....
IDEA....Shashank will shout across that if Devika gets tied then Aziz can carry her😆. Prateeksha will tell him to stop teasing and ask him if he called home. Shashank will make excuses, but Prats will say his Mum will be worried. His Dad will pick up the phone and blast him about being irresponsible. Shashank will not anwer his questions and ask to speak to his Mum. She tries to question, but gives in when Shashank asks her to understand. She speaks to Prateeksha, saying she doesn't know if PraSha's love is bad for Shashank, but she knows they love each other. She gives them her blessing and asks Prats to take care of Shashank. Prateeksha gets emotional and Shashank will joke, even before marriage Prats is crying over what her mother in- law said.😆
IDEA....After few hours they will come to a Dahbha. There they will ask about a machanic to fix the car. The machanic agrees to check the car for them. PraSha and AziKa take a little rest and eat....
IDEA....Ariana will ask to use Raunak's phone and he will lie that the battery is dead. (he has hidden her phone) She accuses him of diliberately stopping her from giving their location home. He will say (seriously/chilled), he with wants to be left alone with his wife. Ariana will say they are not alone, Ishita is with them and she doesn't care about spending time together. Both will be lost in memories for a while. Then Raunak will, say he wants to find AziKa as much as she does, she will not believe him. Ishita will interupt them with her filming. She has decided to record her adveture with ArNak....
IDEA....Next we will see Ishita lightening the mood by saying she wants to be the next reality TV Star. She will say she will call her show 'Ye Raaste Pyar Ke'. As she is filming she will give funny comentery on her friends' love lives, with a sad moment when Sumo is mentioned.
'Twist'....While filming the road Ishita suddenly points to Shashanks car, with the machanic working on it. Raunak questions him and Ariana is happy that they are close to catching PraSha and AziKa. They follow the machanic, who is returning Shashank's car....
'Twist....PraSha and Azika are refreshed and ready to go. PraSha wait at the roadside on the look-out for their car, AziKa are in the Dahbha . Prats wonders what is taking the machanic so long, Shashank will be optimistic that the car will come soon. As he is speaking they see the car.....
'Twist'.....Aziz decides to by extra food for the journey and gets information about the local area from the Dahbha owner. The man is nosey and Aziz tries to avoid his questions. Suddenly Devika comes rushing and tells Aziz they have to leave. She will tell Aziz her brothers are at the Dahbha. They're drunk and will not notice AziKa getting away....
'Twist....As Shashank is given the car keys he will see, Raunak's car is not far behind. PraSha decide to have it out with Ariana since she will not let it go. She will see them facing her, hand-in- hand and get angry. She will say PraSha are not going to ruin Devika's life and Aziz is not suitible for her. Ishita will try to calm her and point out love isn't about class, look at herself and Raunak. Ariana will be say, that happened because of PraSha. Shashank will say he wanted Ariana to marry the man she loves. He will point out, sadly he and Prats haven't got that happiness yet....
'Twist'....Raunak will say that if AziKa love each other then they should face the world, not run away. Ariana will then accuse him of being two-faced, to which he will say he is being fair. Prateeksha will say they had to get Azika away, it was the only option. Raunak will tell Ariana to speak to Devika, it's her life. If she still wants to tell Devika's Dad afterwards, he agrees to let her call home. Ariana doesn't want to listen to him but agrees, just as Azika come rushing to the the group. The whole group are told by Azika that they have to go. Ariana doesn't get a chance to speak to Devika. Both cars drive all night to get to Rajasthan through the night....
IDEA....Just as the sun is rising they will reach an old stone house looking across the desert. The house is deserted and the group decide to rest there. Ruanak will asks Ariana not to say anything yet, as everyone has had a long night. AraNak, Azika and Ishita will go explore the old house.
IDEA....PraSha will be keep behind. Prats will move towards a small hill by the house, Shashank follows her, wanting to know where she going. They stand on he hill and Shashank will understand, they both watch the sunrise. Prats will say they should go, Shank will reply 'Kyun. I mean.....'😊. Prats will say thay need rest and things need to be sorted out. They will discuss Azika and decide not to let ArNak know, about Aziz being Sujoy. It would just complicate things more....
IDEA....Aziz will show PraSha the house, and it even has running water and supplies. Shashank will joke that, they only wanted shelter and Aziz has planned our perminant stay in this ' Bhoot Bangla'. Aziz will get serious and say he has heard that empty houses have such things and it's a good thing they will not be staying long. Devika will get nervous and Ishita will loose her cool. Ariana says she doen't believe in ghosts and Shank will reply ' Moti Bhootni ke saamne, ek normal bhoot ka kya muqaabla'😆. We can see the beginning of their friendship line as Ariana says 'I don't like....' but she will stop herself midway and walk off.....
IDEA....Araiana speaks Devika, who tells her friend to understand her love. Devika will say she always followed orders in her life, but if she listened to her family today, she would be failing her love. She also needed to prove to her father, he was wrong about religous devides. She will say she doen't know what tommorrow holds, but she has no regrets.
IDEA....After their sleep, the group will all be sittng by the fire. Ishaita decides to interview everyone for on her camera. Raunak will say after marriage he has learnt to be patient and accepting. If you love someone then, try to understand them. Ariana will sacastically say you should know who you are marrying. Devika will say love lets you be who you are and you are not afraid to speak your mind. Aziz will say he has found his other half and friend....
IDEA....Shashank will say love is not thinking about your own happiness. It not just about being together. When you fall in love everything changes, it takes over your life and you wonder how you existed wtihout that love. You can't discribe how it happens, you just find the missing part of you. Ishita will think for a while and asks Prats to give advice for lost love. Prateeksha will say no matter what you should never loose hope. Never put yourself in danger,because that will hurt your loved ones. It might look like the end, but you don't know what destiny has written for you....
'Twist'.... Araiana will get angry thinking Prats is hinting to Somu. Prats denys this and will say she was talking about the time she had to leave Delhi. Ariana will walk away angry at PraSha. Raunak will follow and try to calm her, to which she will accuse him of taking Prats side. She will get upset and tell him to leave her alone. She will cry alone and ask why Sumo didn't think about her sister. Why did she love Shashank so much, that she put her life in danger, without a thought to her family. As she cries Raunak comes, this time she lets him hold her❤️.....
IDEA....Prats finds out the reasons behind Sumo/Shank engagement. She will realise that he had no choice and what he had to go through. Shashanks asks if things would have been different, if she had known before. Prats will tell him whats done is done. She realises could have died in Kolkata, but she was saved. Sumo's accident killed her. She will tell him he was right and it's part of destiny and from this point she will follow her's with Shashank❤️.....
IDEA....Ariana will come back and say she is leaving, but for Devika's sake she will not tell her father where they are. Devika asks Ariana to stay for her wedding, all three friends get emotional and Ariana gives in. Ariana is thanked by Aziz and she says she is doing this for her friend....
IDEA.... Miland will try to avoid Rahdha, but as newly weds they are forced to go everywhere together. Miland will struggle with his feelings and Radha will become cofident that, he can't stay angry for too long. She is getting support from Biyoya. Just as we will see Miland relaxing, the Minister Chauhan's Sons arrive at the house....
'Twist'....Miland will be angry, the Ministers Son's are trouble where ever they go. He warns them not to get into trouble, they will think Miland will save them. The Chauhan Son's will get up to know good and Miland will be called to help. Radha will tell him, this was the life he wanted to avoid, the sons need to be taught a lesson. She will say he has been like a son to the minister and taken all his responsibilities. She will tell Miland he derserves respect for his hard work....
'Twist'.....Radha' words make Miland realise that he is not the Ministers goon anymore and he lets the Chauhans stay in jail for the night. The next day they insult Miland by saying, his position is due to their Dad. Miland dares them to do his job and tells them, even their own father thinks they are useless.....
......Part 4 - MiRa face the Chauhans....Azika wedding plan.....
Edited by The_May_Rose - 15 years ago

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