AarYa SS 'Shadows Of The Past'. - Chapter - 5, Page- 18 - Page 8

Amazing update. Finally ansh was out of danger aarti was very happy to see her son alright. Yash was attracted to her. They easily sharing their past without any concise

Superbly written! It is a very 'touching' update and if it had been a scene in a film , WOW ! I love the lovely sentences: The Rain separates some loved ones and reunites others , that is Destiny !!! It was also the same separation which unites one to their 'Destined' love ! Beautiful! Thanks. BTW , those who have reserved their comments were most probably 'lost for words' to describe their feelings, so take it as a compliment for your update! Thanks.

A short after my heart, this one I love the most after a drenched girl...it is so beautifully crafted and more attention to detail, yash and aarti are two people who lost their loved ones on the same day in the same accident, and because their respective partners loved them a lot they are bringing them closer so that they can heal each others hearts...I just hope ansh get well soon so that we can read more about how their love will develop, thank you nikki for this master class...waiting for an update soon

Thought I had commented on this update...but looks like I did not...

Please do update this 'unforgettable' story ! I have reread it as its so full of 'realistic' feelings of a mum's fear of losing her son and her 'reuniting' with her Pankaj bhaiya ! Please do spare some time to update . Thanks

Originally posted by: premap

Please do update this 'unforgettable' story ! I have reread it as its so full of 'realistic' feelings of a mum's fear of losing her son and her 'reuniting' with her Pankaj bhaiya ! Please do spare some time to update . Thanks

Originally posted by: Tessaloni

Edited!

So here are my two cents worth Alien ji 😛

firstly I really love the Gayatris in your stories. They are the embodiment of maternal love. They are warm, caring, wise, open-minded, and loving! Even this Gayatri is no less; when others see the bleakness, she makes them focus on the light. She speaks positivity into them which helps them handle their pain just a little better... She showed Pankaj that the tragedy of his hitting Ansh united him with his long lost sister... She showed Aarti that as much as the rain took from her, it also gave to her. This is just destiny's hand to her; she of course has not realized it yet but destiny has given her her soulmate on the same date, and under the same rain that it took her first love.

Poor Yash is so confused by his reactions to this damsel; especially because his dead wife's spirit let him know that she is his soulmate. As much as he wants to deny that and cling to the past, his attraction to Aarti is pulling him into his present and future.

I loved their moments in Ansh's room, and with Ansh. Their hearts are still in the past but this one incident connected them so strongly that conversation flows easily between them. They recognize kindred spirits in each other and just how similar their past experiences were. Also realizing their strong love for their spouses lessens the "soulmate" aspect their spirits told them. In this way they can bond as friends, help each other come to terms with the loss, and finally move on and accept their new love.

And Ansh, poor baby is still in so much pain, but having his mother near comforts him. Being a parent, Yash recognizes their need for contact and comes up with a solution. He knows Ansh's significance for Aarti because Palak holds the same for him. They are at ones symbols of their past loves and the ones who give them the strength to keep putting one foot in front of the other.

Loving this story all the more Didu. And I also miss you so much, even your whining but trust you're having a great time! 🤗 oh and of course, enjoying your bear hugs! 😆

Originally posted by: bongalisoo

Lovely update its was nice to see how aarya could openly talk to each other about they lives and spouses with understanding cause they've gone through the same thing, its also great that aarti gained more people in her life on a rainy day in the same way like she lost her loved ones ,palak is such a cutie pie ansh too so cute continue soon

Originally posted by: ksen

beautiful part

brilliantly written

loved it

liked aarya talk

all the characters are so genuine

looking forward for the next part

thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: alekhika20

Lovely update,cont soon.
Waiting 4 nxt part.