Destiny Chapter 16 Page 32 - Page 9

Originally posted by: Tessaloni

I am a bit let down Didi, thought Aarti would learn the truth now but I love the suspense too! poor girl is naturally befuddled by the behavior of her employers! I wonder if her evil grandparents will plot something... this time her parents are ready to protect her. in a way they are showing those monsters that they have their daughter back and they know it, just with the treatment they are giving her. I hope Yash will use this opportunity to let his feelings known to Aarti...

Originally posted by: annirogc

superb part..loved it

Originally posted by: zuby87

Mind blowing, can't wait to see how the story will unfold, finally aarti will reunite with her biological parents... update soon sharlene, don't keep us waiting for long

Originally posted by: Tessaloni

oh no Didi!! I can't take the suspense!!! you best update soonest! 😔

I am sure you have something planned with the three DNA test! can't wait to find out what? 😃

I am glad the Savitri learned the true nature of her in-laws and that her eyes are opened! now she will protect her daughter better!

now really Didi please update soonest!

Originally posted by: ksen

brilliant part

finally savitri and veer came to know the truth

DNA test result also came

hope aarti gets happiness

excited for the next part

thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: Tessaloni

Didi please update soonest! am very anxious!

Originally posted by: B-onesie

The grandparents are old and still evil. What was still the need for plotting When they were trying for years and failed.

I love the relationship between Savitri and Vheer. Their devotion to each other is endearing. Every scheme that was planned to separated them, brought them closer. Their hearts were big enough to accept children that were not their own and love them unconditionally. I can imagine the hurt and disappointment that Savitri felt, realising that the enemy was in their own home. That their own was plotting against them. She had much love, she didn't even want to see them punished but karma is a ...

And Yash and Aarti are already dreaming of a future together, sweet

I hope Aarti accepts the opportunity to complete her studies. It will help her self esteem, she feel more secure that it possible for her to became Mrs. S.

Great chapter. Story has so many facets. I love the way it is unfolding 👏

Originally posted by: lassekool

Nice the tests are positive. Also like that the guilty are actually reflecting about their evil actions, hopefully we get a confession. I am so waiting for her parents reaction , and how her life will transform. Of course and her suitor.

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Hey Sharlene. 🤗

How are you?

Read last three parts in one sitting and I'm loving how you are taking this story forward.

Sharlene what I'm loving the most about this story is that you are focusing on side characters more than AarYa. I personally believe that side characters help in shaping and the development of main characters. They are equally important in any story as the main leads.

You have shown AarYa surrounded by so much evil. Since the day they were born, all they have faced is deceit and backstabbing. They are surrounded by so much evil that one can only wonder how can anyone survive under such circumstances. They are not aware of it yet that's why it's not affecting them. Once they become aware, they'll be completely shattered. I know they will be there to support one another but still this blow will be huge for both of them.

I'm looking forward as how you'll unfold this whole story. But sadly now I won't be able to read it till before mid June as next whole month I'll be traveling and won't come to the forum. That's I'm not reading any new fictions. All I'm trying to do is read OS's or ongoing fictions.

Sorry in advance about that.

And thanks for another beautiful creation 🤗