AarYa SS, 'Naughty At...' Chapter- 10, Page- 49

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saf24

@saf24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#201

Loved the update. Onone hand I like the way Yash could read Aarti enough to know that she hasn't had a peaceful sleep and on the other hand I love the way the couples handled their issues. Fantastic job as always and will definitely be looking forward to what is in store next.

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Zetter

@Zetter

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Posted: 10 years ago

#202

Ooh I loved the update, dear 😊

Aww AarYa are too cute ❤️ ❤️

Wow Naina's insecurities are all because of what her mother did to her when she was pregnant the first time and Aarti has always been her pillar so she's scared to lose her safe haven...Nicely done!

Palak and Viren were great also and I love that her first reaction was to go apologize to Aarti and Ansh when she realized how wrong she was...Can't wait for the two future sister-in-laws to meet.

hehehe everyone is having the same reason about my spitfire Kajal, looking forward to them all meeting and for Aayu to meet his future wife as well 😉 😆

Have a great vacation and stay safe sweetie...sending loads of LOVE and HUGS 🤗 ❤️

The next chapter is gonna be a juicy one and I can't wait!!!

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Fandu

@Fandu

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#203

Nikki what a wonderful update. I loved how you worked through each person's reason and emotions for them finally to agree to Arya's wedding. I love the tender scenes of Yash and Arti. Thank for the lovely update. I am looking forward to lots of Ayu an Kajal's scenes please. Take care Thank you. Mandy.

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#204

Wow Update was just Fabulous
Teasers are Interesting

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annirogc

@annirogc

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#205

beautiful update.. finally viren can able to convince palak about aarya relation, now palak was planning something.. here yash was lisening maansi about aarti past life.. aarya romance in telephone so lovely.. naina also changed her insecurity because of ansh..eager to know what they are planning for aarya .. waiting for next

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Folla

@Folla

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Posted: 10 years ago

#206

thanks for the PM it was ana amzing update finally palak anad naina accept aarya relation so excited to see aarya romance and to know palak plan

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ns1970

@ns1970

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#207

Wow Nikki another awesome update glad to see the children (palak and naina accept the relationship and Aarya moments together always perfect

Thanks for the PM looking forward to the next update

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Kesha_H.

@Kesha_H.

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

OMG Kesha, is that really you?

Welcome back to the forum 🤗

I'm so sorry for replying on your comment so late.
Even i love this story. Kesha I have written an one part OS that also on a near middle aged couple. Many readers liked it. It's concept is totally different. Both stories portrays on the maturity and understanding between a couple, irrespective of their age.
I wanted to show that Palak is not perfect, but she's a good hearted girl. That's why I kept her reasons simple.

You are Bang on Right about Naina 👏. I'll post the next chapter soon. You will learn more about her fear.
And thanks so much for giving perfect faces to my characters. I loved Virens the most 😳

ahahah yay did I tell you I decided to follow my dreams and pursue my degree in psychology and this is one of the reasons why I can read people very well. Yea I get that whole Palak thing and I can also relate to her on the stepmothers I'm lucky i got a "goodish" Palak is damn lucky she'll have a banging one... damn I can't wait for Aayu Kajal's meeting they are definitely my fav couple and they haven't even met yet like I said Kajal is as crazy as me that's why I like her so much... its dissapointing that you won't write after a long while tho but I'll wait

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ksen

@ksen

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#209

Superb update
Everyone's feelings and insecurities were penned down beautifully
Love each and every character in the story
Arya moments were beautiful
Excited for the next part
Thanks the pm