AarYa FF:'Together Yet Apart' Part9 updtd;pg37 23/8 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
The character sketch is fantastic dear 😳
Love it 😳
Rhis is the 1st time u reading urs
There s s very special idea in urs 😆
I'm ready to follow 😆
Gonna see the great story 😆
It's interesting

Promo 😳
It was shocking 😭
Heart disease for my small lion 😳
It's interesting too 😳
Waiting for the update 😡
Pls update soon 😡 😆 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Guruvishva

The character sketch is fantastic dear 😳
Love it 😳
This is the 1st time u reading urs
There s s very special idea in urs 😆
I'm ready to follow 😆
Gonna see the great story 😆
It's interesting

Promo 😳
It was shocking 😭
Heart disease for my small lion 😳
It's interesting too 😳
Waiting for the update 😡
Pls update soon 😡 😆 😆



Thank you so much..😊
U r angry with me..😆
I am updating now..
😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Thank you so much for your amazing response..



Part1

Jharkheda,Bhopal

Teacher calling students names to take thier attendance.

Teacher: Ansh..Ansh..He didnt come yet?

Students: No..

Teacher: This boy always come late and if i ask reason,he'l say same story dialy..

Ansh: May i come in sir..

Teacher: so,why you came late today?

Ansh: sir,we all know about karthik,he took more time than us to walk..why you always ask same question? As a friend,I helped him while walking.

Teacher: ok..ok..sit down..

At evening..

Ansh waiting for aarti..she came from her workplace and they both started chitchat..

Aman started to go to aarti's house..

Aman: maa,I am going to aarti's house.will come at dinner time.

Aman's mother: Dont know what she did..you always move around her..listen,dont forget about pari..she loving you from so many years.

Aman: How can you talk like this maa..we both are friends..thats it.

At aarti's house

Aman: hey aarti,ansh..

Aarti: hi..

Ansh started talking with aman and aarti went inside to do kitchenwork..

Next Morning..

Ansh not feeling well,but he dnt want to say this to his sister..he got ready and took bag asusual..aarti went to her work and ansh went to some park to take rest.
He is feeling restless and he dont know exactly about that pain..Feeling tough to breath..

Aarti came back to home at evening..ansh didnt come yet..she thought he is playing with her..
Aarti searched surroudings of house and went to ansh's friend's house.

Karthik:Didi,come inside..
Aarti: where is ansh? still he is in school?
Karthik: no di,ansh didnt come to school today..
Aarti: what? but where he went?

Tears started falling from her eyes..

She called aman and they both searched at school,playground.

In house

Aman: dont cry aarti..he dont go anywhere..will come soon..
Aarti: but aman..I jst didnt expected this from ansh..he dont go anywhere without saying me

Just then,ansh came to house and called aarti..

Aarti slapped hardly and ansh fell down..aman holded ansh tightly..

Aman: what you did aarti? we dont know why he did this..without asking that..how can you punish him?

Ansh started crying and having more pain..

Aarti: dont support him aman..only me knw how scared i was..i have ansh only..

She started crying and ansh said sorry to her..

Aman told him to play outside..

aman consoled aarti..
aman: we have to know why he did this and where he went?

He gave her glass of water and aarti become normal..

They both watching at ansh..he silently playing with ball at outside..

Suddenly he felldown while playing..

"Ansh..Ansh kya hua?" Aarti Screamed.

Aman and aarti took him to Hospital.

Aarti crying hardly and aman failed to control her..

Doctor came from room..

"He is suffering with heart problem.even it is minor now,it will create problems in future."Doctor said

Aarti: what are you saying doctor? ansh have heart problem? no..

Aman: so,it is necessary to operate now..right doctor?

Doctor:" yes..arrange all things as soon as possible.It is not much expensive but you will need minimum 10-12 lakhs."

Aarti become shocked..

Aman's ST: Aarti..i know its tough for you..I can ask maa but you know about her,she wont agree to this at all..but i'l try my level best

Aarti's ST: 10 to 12 lakhs? how? who will help me? how i can save my ansh?I understood your situation aman..you want to help us..but your mother wont agree for that and its not genuine to ask you much amount.

"please show me some way" aarti prayed to God.

They came to home and aarti trying to be normal in ansh's presence..
She dont wana tell about this problem to ansh..

Ansh: sorry didi,I Didnt felt well at morning..I didnt wanted to scare you..so i didnt said about my pain..

Aarti hugged ansh..

Aman called at night..

Aman: is everything ok aarti? did you said this to him?
Aarti: i didnt said aman..u called me to say anything?
Aman: yeah..got one idea..we'l get some help if we give advertisement in newspaper..
Aarti: yes..but aman..they'l charge high amount..
Aman: No problem aarti..i can help you in this..I asked maa to give some amount but she didnt agreed..
Aarti: its ok aman..leave it.
Aman: i cant give lakhs of rupees, but as a friend i'l help you in this atleast..
Aarti: Thank you..we'l go to thier office tomorrow..

Bhopal

yash and his friends waiting outside a house..

Prateek: so,we have to wait here..
Yash: yes..lets wait..

A couple came outside and they went somewhere..

Yash: lets start..her parents wnt come within shorttime..we have to do hungama infront of her..so she will reject me to marry..
All friends came outside and they arranged fire at middle of road..they took beer bottles and screaming loudly..

A girl came outside and saw all this..she came near that fire and asking them to stop..
But they are not listening..she went near to yash and said that she'l call police.

Yash: police..call them dear..i dont have any prob..do you have number or i'l give..😆

she thought its not good to be there for longtime..

Nextday

They gave this advertisement in newspapers..
Some people send little amounts to thier address..
But those are not enough for ansh surgery..

Aarti got some call and she went to that house..
Aarti: sir,anyone there?
Man: yes..who are you?
Aarti: sir,i think you called me and said to come to your house to talk about my brother's surgery..
Man: yes..i m prasanth..
Aarti: I m aarti..

prasanth: so,you want 10 lakhs for your brother's surgery..
Aarti: yes..
prasanth:will you be my wife?
Aarti: excuse me..what are you saying?😡

prasanth: you heard right..my wife died somedays ago and i have 2 kids..I'l give you that amount you want..
Aarti: sorry sir,i cant do this.
prasanth: ohh..so your marraige life is important to you more than your brother.

Aarti get up from chair and going out from house..
prasanth: not only me,you'l get so many calls like this..who will give 10 lakhs without expecting anything..
Aarti reached home and prasanth's words ringing in her ears..

As he said,she got some calls and faced same situation..
Aarti sat near god's idol..

Aarti's st: so I have to leave all my dreams about marraige to get help? ofcourse,ansh is important to me..and marraige is the most beautiful thing which happened once in life..what i have to do?
Its totally not about marraige..but about selfrespect..
How can he ask to be his wife for doing help..

she cant share all this with anyone,even with aman..
she thought all this men expect something from her..

Bhopal

Yash and radha reached that girl's house..yash remembered all that nonsense they created at previous night..

When that girl saw yash in bridegroom's place..she kept her face irritated and called her dad to say all this about yash..

yash laughed innocently and he knew she will reject him..😉
Her dad came and said they'l say decision tomorrow..


Next day:

Its yash's Birthday..
servants decorating house with lights,baloons,flowers and candles..

Yash woke up and saw his dadi in his room..
She wished and blessed him..

yash always do help to others,especially on his birthday he go to schools or orphanage to help poor..

Asusual,he took newspaper and the first thing he saw..advertisement about ansh's surgery..

He called manager and gave cheque of 10 lakhs to send for them..
He enjoyed his Birthday with his friends..

Next day

Aarti counting all the cheques..they got 2 and lakhs almost..but more money needed..

Then she got the cheque..she felt verryy happy..
At first,she didnt believed that and counted zeroes in that..
"Thank you so much" she kissed that cheque..

Saw signature to know the name..
Its yashu..

As she faced some bad situations at previous days..her mind didnt think may be its from some boy..

Aarti : women can understand other's pain..
may be that girl name is
yashashwi
or
yashmita
or
yashiKa..
Dont know the name,but so many thanks to you dear..😊
she poured lots of kisses on cheque..😳

she called aman and shared this happy news..
Edited by SweetyAaryan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
YIPEEE 😆
I'm the 1st 😆
Fantastic update dear 😳
The story had a great flow 😳
It was like watching. Movie dear 😳
The story went so smoothly 😳
Aarthiji the responsible girl 😳
Aman a great friend 😳
Anchu the cute soft lovey boy 😳
Anchises was really a goodie bit who always thought ABT get sister 😳
The school matter was really cool 😆
When Aarthi found Anch missing the true live if Aarthiji was shown 😳
When it came to know abt the disease the threesome were awesome 😳
Coming to that fool Prashanth 😡
He's so cheap 😆
Loved my uppps Yash & his friends Masti a lot 😆
Great acting and planning Yashu 😆
Great work by Yash on his birthdays 😆
Next I hopeniw cheque was filled with hugs kisses later to Yash 😆
Great updTe dear 😳
Edited by Guruvishva - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Lovely wonderful super update...
Yashu could be a girl...that was the best...could go on to be her friend...


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Posted: 11 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Guruvishva

YIPEEE 😆
I'm the 1st 😆
Fantastic update dear 😳
The story had a great flow 😳
It was like watching. Movie dear 😳
The story went so smoothly 😳
Aarthiji the responsible girl 😳
Aman a great friend 😳
Anchu the cute soft lovey boy 😳
Anchises was really a goodie bit who always thought ABT get sister 😳
The school matter was really cool 😆
When Aarthi found Anch missing the true live if Aarthiji was shown 😳
When it came to know abt the disease the threesome were awesome 😳
Coming to that fool Prashanth 😡
He's so cheap 😆
Loved my uppps Yash & his friends Masti a lot 😆
Great acting and planning Yashu 😆
Great work by Yash on his birthdays 😆
Next I hopeniw cheque was filled with hugs kisses later to Yash 😆
Great updTe dear 😳



Thank u..Thank u so much..😛


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Posted: 11 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: kmfan_2

Lovely wonderful super update...

Yashu could be a girl...that was the best...could go on to be her friend...




Thank you so much di..😛

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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Really nice start. Love the flow. I love the bond between Aarthi and Ansh.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
superb update⭐️⭐️⭐️...
i felt so sad for aarthi as she had only ansh and in such a young age she is going through all this😭😭...and even ansh loves her so much👏...
aman is a true friend but didnt get why amans mom dislike aarthi? is there any strong reason which will bring some turn in the story?😉

prasanth is again a bad person here too😡...disgusting man😡😡😡...

yash so kind of him that he sent that cheque without expecting anything back 👏👏...omg aarthi thinking is as sent bt a girl😕...
hope everything will be fine with ansh soon and he will be healthy fit and fine soon😃

will be waiting to know twists and turns in the story😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
Heyy
lovely concept and lovely start 😊
Aarti thinks that Yash is a girl 😆
waiting to see her reaction when she finds out that he is a guy 😆

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