'FOR YOU ONLY' epilogue UPDATED - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: caller123

Wonderful Jhil. You have brought out each of them's feeling so nicely.

Aarthi's fear after loosing her mom... Yh definitly it would be like that as her world is around her ma and Yash.
Aarthi's father.. What I feel about him is he's running away from something. May be he didn't like to see Shobha suffering and got addicted to work... His thought made me to think like that. His fear really...
He feared to think what will happen to Aarthi after his death.. So that means he love his family.

coming back to Aarthi I can completely understand her situation. She lost someone she loved and not ready to loose another one. Kudoss dear! You have shown it brilliantly..👏
Yash he's so sweet. He could understand Aarthi's fear even at this age. You know only few teenagers can understand like this.

Agree with you. Nobody can take mother's place in child's life. Nobody.
Altogether this update is perfect. I loved every bit of it.
Wonderful work Jhil!! Keep this up!!

first of all thank u soo much for appriciate it, as i said you before i am li'l confused about this part nd scared also. nd after reading your comment feeling relax di.. i tried my best. as here only few charecter so i tried to show all char when it needed. definately its love story but everyone important here

you r right about mr.dubey, he affraid of every situation so he kpt busy himself always. till now sobha was thr for aarti bt now she alone, yash thr, gayetri thr bt mother is mother. i'll try to write more beautifuly about yash and aarti's relation..
and yeah yash undrstand aarti's situation coz he know her frm long tim and he love her
thank you sooo much
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: roserosey

jhil jhil jhil...very sad to see shoba left aarthi forever 😭😭...i know she had been the greatest support for aarthi ...for aarthi shoba was her caring mother ...a lovely friend...and a great guide who always supported aarthi and advised her ...but now i feel really bad for aarthi😭😭...i know aarthi had yash ...yash has been the gretaest support for her too...but u see at the end of day u will be at home and still they hadnt confessed their feelings so aarthi must have felt so lonely sometimes and even more when yash confesses 😭as her heart wants yash but still her mind is not matureto take a decision for her and shecant even share it with her father too😭😭...
i can understand that Mr.dubey wt ever he is doing it is foraarthi only as he is wishing for her secure future but u see spending time with urloved ones is very important ...this give s enough confidence and make them realize that they r being loved andcared😳...but u see this was not happened😭😭...
and aha... aarthi is so possessive of her yash ☺️...and yash is aware of that too☺️...oh my i m so blushing now ☺️☺️...

oh my finally confession happened🤢🤢...
u know i m so angry now u stopped at very interesting moment 😡😡...better u update soon jhil😃😃...

loved it loved it loved it 👏...excellent amazing ...as always⭐️


at first thank you so much. yeah sobha was the biggest support of aarti. she alwys gv her good advise and she was her best frnd also. its heart breaking that sobah had to leave aarti but it was ready frm first chapt., and its also reason behind aarti's letter to yash. all the reason will come out soon, as only 5 or 6 chapt lft.

and i dnt knw u blv it or not bt i knew u'll become angry after seeing whr i end this part😉 , sorry for that.. honestly intentionally i endend tht in interesting point😆.. next part aarti's re action will come, i'll try to gv an update on wednsday or thursday,
thank you one again for support me frm first. i hv only few readers of this story bt i am so happy everyone soo supportive. and for ths few i love to write as you all gv me so much love through your comment, thank you😊


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Posted: 11 years ago

thank you dear😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Anuraksha

Nice update...yash said I love u to aarti wow superbbb dear..feeling sad for shoba...waiting for nxt update, wat aarti will reply to yash...


thanx a lot for comment,, yeah in next part aarti's reaction will come, wait till wdnsday dear
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jhillyarya

first of all thank u soo much for appriciate it, as i said you before i am li'l confused about this part nd scared also. nd after reading your comment feeling relax di.. i tried my best. as here only few charecter so i tried to show all char when it needed. definately its love story but everyone important here

you r right about mr.dubey, he affraid of every situation so he kpt busy himself always. till now sobha was thr for aarti bt now she alone, yash thr, gayetri thr bt mother is mother. i'll try to write more beautifuly about yash and aarti's relation..
and yeah yash undrstand aarti's situation coz he know her frm long tim and he love her
thank you sooo much

No need tto say thank you dear !! You truly deserve a good appreciation for what you did. Agree with you all characters are important.. I do beleive in that that's why I made buaji married in my FF -a story of Aarya!!

Wish you all the best with this FF dear!!
Waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: caller123

No need tto say thank you dear !! You truly deserve a good appreciation for what you did. Agree with you all characters are important.. I do beleive in that that's why I made buaji married in my FF -a story of Aarya!!

Wish you all the best with this FF dear!!
Waiting for the next update.


thank you so very much for the big complement di, 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update! Sad about the demise of Shobha ma. Poor Aarti, really sad as her ma was her best friend with whom she used to share everything. She felt insecure about losing Yash. I am so glad that Yash comforted her and always be with her. And Gayatri ma is so nice to give Aarti love of a mother.

Glad that Yash expressed his feelings that he loves her. Waiting for Aarti's response. Though she also loved Yash, but never expressed to him.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Jhil - Emotion beautifully conveyed. Good job. Waiting to see the reaction from Arti.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jhillyarya


at first thank you so much. yeah sobha was the biggest support of aarti. she alwys gv her good advise and she was her best frnd also. its heart breaking that sobah had to leave aarti but it was ready frm first chapt., and its also reason behind aarti's letter to yash. all the reason will come out soon, as only 5 or 6 chapt lft.

and i dnt knw u blv it or not bt i knew u'll become angry after seeing whr i end this part😉 , sorry for that.. honestly intentionally i endend tht in interesting point😆.. next part aarti's re action will come, i'll try to gv an update on wednsday or thursday,
thank you one again for support me frm first. i hv only few readers of this story bt i am so happy everyone soo supportive. and for ths few i love to write as you all gv me so much love through your comment, thank you😊


u see jhil though it was ur first time as a writer asu said ...it was really an amazing job and u convey the emotion so beautifully that we readers bask in that emotion ...
great job jhil...i always love to encourage the writers as i love to read and i dont have the skill to write...pls keep up this job 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Jhil
Finally I found some free time today. So today I've decided to use it as reading day and commenting on all the update that I read.
I read all the nine parts in one sitting. And I loved what I've read so far. 👏

I loved the letter written by Aarti. The pain and Aarti's longing and wait for Yash was so beautifully written.

I'm loving their friendship from their childhood, till now, which is slowly converting into love for each other.
Felt bad about Shobha Ma.
Now I'm eager to know what happened between them that Yash once again got so angry with her.

Hey Jhil I'll try my best to read the upcoming chapters of this FF, on time. 😳

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