Arya OS ~ Success or Defeat in Love ???final part on pg.21-26/10 upd

palbhar

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Nice ending!!!! Thank you dear!!!!!

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Vincy Anne

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Wow !!! Awesome ending !!!👏👏👏

Love it .. This was a really great OS ..👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

Loved every part of it ... ❤️❤️❤️

Oh and this is definitely a success in love for Aarya ... 😆

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kmfan_2

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Maha dear...I read this OS first thing in the morning but wanted to write a long reply...

What a lovely emotional and full on update...

It was really an amazing end to a beautiful story...

Love according to me can never see defeat because loving in itself is a great feeling irrespective of whether it is being reciprocated or no...plus if one truly loves someone...there is NO WAY that one would not get back the same in the same measure...

Beautiful kids scenes especially the Aayu ones with the family...and not to talk of the amazing meeting of Yash and Aarti...

Excellent one my dear..this was heart touching to the core...

Loved it and love you for writing such a beautiful one...🤗

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Mohini Singh Narayan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#184

Amazing update dear! 👏

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umaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#185

awesome update.. lovely end...All is Well End is Well...😆

thanks for pm..!!

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Mahalakshmi

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: caller123
yay me first.🥳

Now to update.
It was such a pleasure to read this update Maha.
I love each and every word.
Ayu I thught it must be same ayu when he met Yash at the mall. I only wondered why he said mumma to rita.
I really love their reunion.
It's so nice.
I was like
And the children and Aarya part I love it🤗❤️
I'm sad😭 it's the last part but I'm happy that our Aarya is together again.😳😳😳
great work Maha!👏

haha 😆 i knew all my brilliant readers would have got the twist i have hidden 😉
thank u so much sweetu for your lovely comment 😳
i am so overwhelmed to see this much response for my work.. it makes me do more and more..

thanks a ton and i dont have any words to express my happiness kate 😃
i am so blessed to have u all .. love you dear

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Mahalakshmi

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Posted: 11 years ago

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