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Taahir

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

I can't wait for the next update really sizzling update

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Shashi1984

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Wow! It's fabulous. It's interesting. Can't wait for the next part, update soon...

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: shalini28
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its amazing di. 😃
really loved it. u have depicted Yash's desire so well. I really loved it😳🤗

Thanks Shalu 🤗

Even I felt that Yash's desire came out perfectly right. Initially when I started it, I was not convinced with what I had written. But after I changed it, I was ecstatic with the result 😳

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: freya123
amazing update

Thanks Freya 😊

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Tanvi.narula
It's a beautifull OS Di..
Very well written n very fine details make it a beautifully written OS
I liked the fact that this time u chose a diff. Plot to write upon..
Well from my personal pov this update was not explicit.. 😆
let's see what v get in future..😉
eagerly waiting for the further updates..
Thanx for the pm Di.. 😊

Thanks Tanvi 🤗

Tanvi when I sat to write it down for the second time, the ideas of every scenes minute detail kept coming to me out of nowhere. And the end result is in front of everyone.

When the ploy came to me, I was immediately intrigued by it, but was a bit skeptical, for I had never written something like this. But after lot of convincing from Charmi and Abie I finally wrote it down.

But I'm still skeptical of the second part, where the main scene will happen. Lets see how much you all like it 😳

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: chitsri65
Whether Arti becomes puppet or puppeteer...you are hell bent in making us puppet with this special OS...you better come out with your next update - specially to see the area you have not worked. Nikki...will reserve my thoughts for your next update. 😃

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That's my favorite comment Chitra. And you'll have to bear the torture of the puppeteer NIKKI till Monday, cause that's when you'll get the second part 😉

OMG now I feel like I'm under scrutiny for the part that I've never written 😆