AarYa OS 'You Are My Rain'...Chapter-5, page-55

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: jitupatole5
awesome update,plz continue and update soon egarly waiting.

Thanks

I'll try to update it after I finish my OS "Because of You"

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Posted: 11 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: Ken309
Lovely update
waiting to see what Aman does to bring them together 😊

Thanks Ken

Even I don't know exactly what Aman will do. I just have outlined his scenes, I'll use them as the story progresses 😛

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Posted: 11 years ago

#263

Originally posted by: kmfan_2
Lovely update...enjoyed it dear...
Can't wait for AarYa to get closer...

Thanks Shanti.

It'll take them time to come closer, as Aarti will try to keep a little distance from him. The more distance she'll keep, the more closer he'll go to her 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: saf24
It's a pleasant surprise to see an update for this OS. The update nice and sweet. The changes in Yash are starting to come out but Aarti is afraid to acknowledge them for fear that things will turn out worse later on. Glad that Aman notices the change in Yash as well and looking forward to what is in store next.

Happy Anniversary Abie

Thanks Saf

It was a surprise for me also, as I had decided to not touch it till I finish BOY.

Yash will slowly start getting more and more attracted to her. The more busy he'll get with his work, the more he'll miss her. Mumbai reminds Aarti of what had happened last time post Mumbai.

Aman's entry will play a huge part to bring AarYa closer 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#265

Originally posted by: prachidalmia
lovely update
looking forward for the next one
please do update soon
also waiting for the updates on mtb and boy
please do update them as well

Thanks Prachi.

I've been busy lately, so I'm not getting time to concentrate on the updates of MTB and BOY. But you'll surely get one of the updates by next week. Most probably it'll be MTB update. Followed by BOY.

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#266

Originally posted by: chitsri65
Nikki - will read and comment later - personal work pending.😃

It's ok Chitra, take your time. I completely understand 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#267

Originally posted by: Folla
thanks for the pm amazing update and iam so excited to aman mission to bring aarya togother waiting your update

Thanks Folla.

Aman's mission will begin from the next update. He'll try to make Yash jealous, even without doing anything 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

#268

Originally posted by: billieberry
Awesome chapter Nikki di👏⭐️👏
Blindfold game made me remember Aarti's return to SM (I seriously love d place Eyelock and then strangers again hmmm!)😳😳
Now Aman entry Ouch! Blows wondered why yash launched him with blows... oh his new friend came late!😆
Poor Aarti feeling left out...but Aman wont let his besty feel that way😉😉
Aman teasing yash awesome..."can I hug her in your absence" no way!! Now Aarti is only limited to Yash😛😛
Love Aman's entry... he is a nice company to be with and I think aarti's fears will reduce now...😃😃
Coconut scene...I guess Aman did it willingly and Ansh adding salt to the soup.. Tea scene hehehe!!🤣
Innocent Payal & Palak..don't know what is going on only ansh who witness d memorable tea sip and eyelock😳😉
Awaiting to see how yash realize his love for Aarti and how she will overcome her fears
Thanx nikki di for this short refreshing part...love it❤️
Thanx for the pm😳😳
THE SPECIAL NOTE
You really Amaze me nikki di.❤️.did I say this before🤔
But I really do admire Ur caring nature God Bless You Abundantly Dear!!🤗
Abie dear I didn't make any special thing just a wish from my heart
My Heartiest Congrats to you for reaching 1 complete year in the forum👏⭐️👏 proud of you
God bless you and keep smiling😊 ❤️ 😊
Don't know much about you, but am glad to wish u in this special moment, though am late but do refreshing it hehehe!😆😆😃
Charmi dear it's such a beautiful creation..love it👍🏼👏
Abie dear..if u don't mind I can help u steal it😆...just kidding.😉.it really nice creation great job!⭐️
Okay don't have much to say...exhausted of words
I feel am repeating same thing over😕
You guys rock keep the friendship bond flag flying...❤️🤗❤️

Billie the eye lock scene I had written based on that scene only. That time also Aarti kept her distance from him.

Yash has slowly and unknowingly started to make his claim on his beautiful wife, soon he'll become possessive also, which I'll make him more passionate ☺️

Yash knows that Aarti will feel lonely as he'll be busy with his work, that's why he called Aman, without knowing that the same Aman I'll play Cupid in his life 😆

On your special note...

Billie I seriously don't know what to say to such a touching compliment for me.

My nature, be it good or sometimes bad also, is Gods gift.

Bless you sweet Billie, and may you always stay Happy and Healthy ❤️

Thanks for wishing Abie.

And you can use Charmi's creation, she won't mind it, neither will Abie, trust me 😳

And Billie you are also our Friend. You too can join us in our Masti whenever you feel like it 🤗

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#269

Originally posted by: roserosey

want to raed the update of BOY soon as i was dying to see aarthi JKR avatar😆😆...soon di pls...and dont say that u will not update YAMR soon ...coz u cant do like that i want to read it also ...
so i m now waiting for MTB...BOY...YAMR...and then exclusive interview😉
u cant let me down di i m waiting ...remember rosey when u r struggling to write then u will bet a mood to write😆😆...love u 🤗

Rosey BOY update will come after MTB. But if I'm not able to concentrate on MTB properly, then I'll first work on BOY, as I already know what to write in it (at least I think I know what to write in it 😆)

I won't let you down, but I'm not sure how soon you'll get any of the updates

But you'll get them one of these days 😆

Love you too my stalker 🤗

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#270

Originally posted by: Abie10
First of all so so sorry for my late comment.😔😔

Nikki, thanks for this nice special update once more.🤗 It was really awesome.👏👏

Poor Aman got a punch as greeting from Yash.😆 I understand why Aarti was so confused by Yash's action.😆 Aww love to see a jealous and possessive Yash..no hugging his Aarti even in his absence.😊 Hehe, that coconut seem to have some never ending water. And the kids never mss a chance to pull their parents legs.😳😛

Yash is falling for Aarti but he haven't realised yet. This much of concern and possessiveness is the result of that only. Waiting to see how he realises his true feelings and a sure it wll be fun. And yeah Aman is there to play cupid between them.😉

Am suree you won't take long in updating..remember your boss gave an order.🤣

Abie, finally you commented on your favorite YAMR 🤗

This is my gift to you for your anniversary. 🤗

Aman has now become immune to Yash's punches 😆. Abie no hugging Aartiji anytime means that only Yashji can hug her Anytime 😉. Which he'll start doing Anytime, from the next update 🤢. Then we will say poor Aarti, as she'll have nowhere to run 😉 😆

The coconut was as magical as that small cup of never ending tea. But as usual, one of the munchkins interrupted them 😡 😆

Abie I can assure out that you'll enjoy reading about Yash's concern and possessiveness towards his Aartiji, 😉

Have I ever listened to My Boss, that I'll listen this time also 🤣