Dil Jaanta Hai - Thread 2: Ch 21 (Pg 134) - Page 73

Originally posted by: taahir004

Loved the progress as I finally got to know Arpita's side of the story again an awesome chapter 18

Thank you Taahir. Arpita's side of the story is now out in the open - and time enough for Arti to figure out what she can and reach out to Yash...

Originally posted by: BSwan

update soon

I will Bswan - as soon as i finish responding to all the comments 😊.

Originally posted by: rutu83

selfishly, i hope not 😉😃

😆 - it won't be for lack of trying though.

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

Awww - so adorable .

Originally posted by: RA17

Hey Kat as without aarya this spel ffs has become even more spl

N all i can say thanks to all of you great writers

I read 14b again n man i discovered every time something new n unique in each part

Here as i read n flow with yash n aarti interaction

Sobebody see as perfect partners as both has gone thru the loss of thr beloved

Or some as parents to ansh

But i can see a ease which i think they themselves n evben in ther family yet not acknowledge be it how aarti without hesitance being rude to yash n after realizing apologizing n then planning out n

Aarya best their ishare language love them but still not looking directly each other wat makes them smile is each other or in each other company

Man i never know i will be again lost at words after re reading a update after 3-4 time

Kat how can you do this hmmm

Chal cya on ch15

Oh my poor Ria 🤗. You are really missing ArYa and PV aren't you? I am glad DJH has been able to help you some.

Arti and Yash have always been connected. Every time they have met, one has helped the other in a way that has touched their hearts. Hence - Dil Jaanta Hai. Dil toh jaanta hai, but insaan kab janega?? 😛

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Originally posted by: RA17

ch 15

again what a sync i must say yash n aarti as their thr process they both sitting on swing

a smile when they thor of ansh simulateneosly a pian of their loss n shiver with the thoe they will be sharing everything in ther life from ther someone spl to someone else

again vidhi the common

n love the way you use sometimes painting,tea or jasmine this time to epress much larger picture that in simple words that again need applause for your thot process while writing

n my heart goes for aarti the way you take us again in deep world of her where we never want to be touched ourselves abt her past her birth her parents

kat how can you really it is diifcult to understand waht you wrote n wonder how could or wat made you write tht point

as yash msg strikes yes its a yes vidhi "You are right, spring is the time for new beginnings."

n then her 3 worries dissolve in a way to make her say yes

its such a simple three letter word but they took such a long n gone thru upheaveal of emotion rather dissect their entire life or i shud say pura wajood hila ke rakh de n its has to be as parents its a great deal but as individuals who have gone thru first of each emotion be it love n you knw wat i mean it gives me goose bumps how difficult it is well Kat i know bahut lamba comment ho gaya but this thots has strike me after your ff was not theri even i watch the show may be one of major reason you take us to aarti n p and lily ash n aarpita journey too before coming to the subject PUNAR VIVAH

Ria - you and Borna are going to make me re-read all the old updates!! Not because you are commenting now but because you are picking up and commenting on so many details. Some of which i had forgotten 😆.

Arti and her childhood - i "discover" bits and pieces of her childhood as i write. Aside from her being an orphan and having known Vidhi all her life, i haven't thought through Arti's childhood. But at pertinent points of the story, it makes an appearance. I can't even begin to imagine how she became the person she did - especially in the show.

Yes, we are nearing the start of the PV journey. Its necessary to deal with the past before the two can start afresh - so that's what's happening even in the recent updates.

Ria - thank you so much for going through the updates and giving me your feedback in such detail 🤗.

Originally posted by: mjht_admirer

Ouch! That hurts. I am sure Aprita's part and her past must have been really difficult to write. Hai na?? Writing about a character whos not in the story anymore, is quite difficult to portray but u made it look as real as possible.

I think this Aprita's death mystery is kinda open analysis for us. It could have been overdose unintentionally/ intentionally. Well, I take it as unintentionally. I don't wanna feel negative that it was suicide in her depressed state.

Loved Aarti and Anjali's small didi wala conversation.

Green eyed monster was too good. Good that u r showing more signs of sensor between AarYa and the best was the very 1st where Aarti had her Yash Sensor experience. 😉

No offence to the Arpita's part but I kinda loved this scene not because it felt passionately romantic but it actually showed how well Aarti and Yash, basically here Aarti, is moving over her past, her Prashant

Way to go AarYa.

loads of love
Vinu

Ah Vinu. Yes, writing about the whole Arpita section was difficult. The situation itself was depressing and on top of that i made Arpita such a difficult character, so full of paradox, it was a struggle to write her in such a way that she would come alive on the pages or you could relate to her.

Yes her death is open to interpretation -the overdose could be intentional or not. Either way, Yash is riddled with guilt.

Lol - you don't think the jealousy and sensor bit was too soon? 😆 - glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: salvatore-nina

Lovely update! Arpita's tale is tragic but I'm glad that Aarti is slowly helping Yash to overcome the void Arpita left in his life.

Thank you Nina. Arti hasn't quite helped yet - but she is getting there. As long as she can help him keep his guard down, his natural exuberance will come out.

Originally posted by: .KillTheBitch.

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