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Posted: 12 years ago
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@MSN_Vanny- Thankzzz... Will continue soon! 😃


@Prasadini- Thankz.. 😳🤗 Will continue! 😉


@Padmavar- Thanks.. Glad you liked it.. Will update it! 😳😉


@AmeenaForEva- Thanks so much! Will do it... 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Extremely fantastic for your first attempt. I love it! Please update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats on starting your first FF and that was a superb start. Your words were beautifully written and definitely got my attention. Looking foward to what you have in store next.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh wow i read it again sweety looks like yash already knw aarti wow thats actually awsum great do update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sorry IsYa for taking so long to read your first FF and sorry for the late comment.

I liked it. For a first timer, you are good.👏

Please do continue, and continue soon.

Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: suhaaana

Oh wow i read it again sweety looks like yash already knw aarti wow thats actually awsum great do update soon



The story actually a bit tricky! The real one will be revealed in next part! I'll update soon, Suha! Thanks for reading again! 😃😃😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Sorry IsYa for taking so long to read your first FF and sorry for the late comment.


I liked it. For a first timer, you are good.👏

Please do continue, and continue soon.

Thanks for the PM


Never mine, buddy! 😃 I'll do it soon! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Welcome to the write's circle, Isya! 😊 The way you flow the story is just awesome and beautiful...and of course you should CONTINUE...no question about it, ok! 😃👍🏼

Thanks for the PM and please continue doing so whenever you update next.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks for all the likes and comments... 😉

Here comes the 2nd part... 😃






Part 2

He stood still while busily looking intensely and carefully at the Owner of the Voice. He just could not believe his eyes and his ears' For a moment, he felt as he was blind and deaf towards his surroundings but not towards HER. He realizes that it was all due to HER Voice.


"But how could this be? It is HER Voice, but the Owner of the Voice is not HER' not Her at all' I mean there should not be two people with same VOICE'!"


He stood there as he became restless and his mind was completely in confusion'


"How, How and How'???" He continues to sighs. "How this could happen? She's no more! But HER Voice' HER Voice is exactly like HERS. He decided to continually stare at Her, just to know more about Her Voice'


He began to be lost staring at her. He started to whisper to himself'


"SHE is pretty and beautiful! Isn't SHE?," his eyes were still being glued on her. This time he looked at her from bottom to the top like he was actually doing a Chemistry experiment which he used to observe the process of color changes.

He finally realized that the girl has not only attracted his attention but also had impressed him through HER breathtaking beauty.


"This SHE is extremely beautiful." He repeated the sentence again and again' Praise her again and again...

BUT, he realized something had been disturbing him from his heart and he started to complained to himself.


"What am I doing? Staring at someone or a girl who is a stranger??? And praising her repeatedly' Aargghh' I just don't do this! After all, I am only having Arpita in my heart. I can't be focusing my eyes on girls like this! In fact, I never do such things before and I won't do that. What's happening to me?." He continue walking slowly and plead to himself that he won't ever try to look behind.


He stepped a few steps forward and stop again. He heard HER Voice again' THAT Voice'


"Aarghhh' Not again! Not again please! But what can I do anyway? I can't ignore this VOICE. I've been longing for it' I missed it so much! HER Voice is making me simply intolerable' No, I need to know her! At least know something about HER!" he said while deciding to go near her and maybe questioned her on something.


As he made his way near to her, he realized that he is quite not far from her. He once again look at her, he couldn't escape his eyes off from her. SHE was standing there, probably purchasing some groceries. He can hear HER Voice clearly. She may be voicing out the things she needed to the seller.


Yash was smiling all the time and he knew that he has been attracted to her like magnet just because of that particular VOICE and her beauty which he found only after he had figure out her Voice.

Yash now saw she is taking some money from her purse to pay the shopkeeper. She finally gave that money to the shopkeeper while giving a Big Smile to him.


"Oh, God! What a SMILE she has' Doesn't she know how to control herself from giving such smiles?! The Smile will definitely attract others to her. Not only Others, but also ME! Oh, I hate her for this!" he complained.


He stopped walking again. He suddenly remembers that he can't do this anymore. He can't go mad after someone he doesn't know...


"Wait!!! Why did I care so much about HER? I can't be forgetting Arpita. Why I'm giving such reactions? Why I'm taking such actions to be near to other girl?" he complained again.


He simply tried to ignore HER for the next second.


"Yes' I have to' I have to do this' You're going back home now, Yash! And that's final!" he told himself.

He took a final gaze at her and tried to hear HER Voice for the last time. He heard her saying 'Thank You'. Before he could step backward, his eyes widened as he suddenly saw a big mob like a huge Gang of gangsters trying to come on HER way' Trying to be near HER. Trying to reach HER...


He ran as fast as lightning and arrived to the place she's standing.Without thinking more, he grabbed her hand tightly and said'

"Come with me gal' Don't ask me anything! And ya, fast please!!!"


"Eyyy.. what are you doing??!! Let me off! Who are YOU??? Ouch' You are hurting my hand!" she responded to him angrily. She beats him and continue to screamed at him'


"Leave my hand now' Or else I'll call the police! And why are you dragging me with you along? Are you going to kidnap me? Help!!!! Help anyone!!!" she yelled and screamed loudly while looking around.


"You are so noisy! Shut up and please follow me' I'll tell you the reason later' And please'Please don't beat me! It's not pain! You're not eligible to beat me as you are not strong enough' So, please stop it!" said Yash while teasing her' He actually wants her to speak more so that he could listen to HER Voice...


"What??? How dare you tease me? You know who I am? I'm Aar'" before she could complete saying her name, Yash held her in his arms. This left her surprised! She holds him tightly as she puts her right hand on his back and left hand on his shoulder. She looked at him and he looked at her too.


He smiled and said, "Good girl' Now you won't talk so much, is it??? Because I am carrying you like I'm carrying a baby!" he teases her back.


She realized that she was actually lost looking at him and came back to reality once he teased her. She replied to him'

"Stop teasing me and put me down now, okay? Waisey, how long did you take to have this kind of muscular body? Cool'You can carry me this far! Eyh' tell me na who are you and why are you with me now?"


He ignored HER and finally saw a house not far from them. He has no idea whether there are people who are staying there or not. What he thought is just saving HER from any danger.

Yash opened the door of the house and found that the house is actually empty when they went in. He puts her down gently and pushed her lightly to the side to lock the door.

He locked the door and turned his body towards at her. He started to look at her.


I hope you all like it.. Comments and Likes please!!! 😛

I'll try to update soon.. 😃


Please add me IsYaRoCHeR for PM...

Edited by IsYaRoCHeR - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start dear,continue soon :)

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