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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Deepti1808

😭 -- Tears of happiness that AarYa are finally together.


😭--- On seeing the The End at the end.

Where the heck is my kerchief !!

❤️

I LOVE YOU INDU

😃- On seeing that there is going to be an epilogue.

I will edit this when I can form some words.




I LOVE YOU too Deepti...🤗

I shall await one final comment from you my friend...before Sparsh is archived in MF files.😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: padmavar

OH no, the story ended. 😭




🤗 ❤️ 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Leevi05

love it 😉


tnx for wonderful ff indu




Thanks for sticking around till the end, Leevi.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: keerthus.9

Fantastic updates Indu ji

SPARSH will FOREVER be in my heart ❤️
and every time I will think about it , there will be a smile playing on my lips 😊
Thank you for SPARSH 🤗




Thanks Keerthus...

Sparsh brought a lot of love in my life and gave me many friends. I am glad I could return in kind with few smiles.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was a beautiful way to end the story Indu! It's sad to see that this journey has ended, but I'm excited that there's an epilogue!

I loved the ending. Yash and Mishti finally have each other in their paradise "forever." After all that they have been through, it was wonderful to see them so happy. They are truly blessed for having each other!

Great work 👏! Now looking forward to the epilogue!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sheema_rajoo

Indu.. tears are just falling freely down my cheeks. I really dunno whether it's tears of happiness, sadness or both.
The whole part A made me so happy as it was so beautiful to see how much Yash loves Ansh and part B gosh indu, according to you, you said you cannot write explicit scenes. but who needs those scenes when romance is written in such a manner. Gosh my heart was beating so much and it was just pure bliss. There's no need for explicit scenes. The love and romance you pen down is just beyond beautiful.

I laughed out loud at the same time felt so damn sad as the journey has come to an end. Gosh Indu you made me into a cry baby. Sparsh has sparshed my heart that I'm so damn attached to it. The thought of parting with it is just making me cry so much. I was hoping your part B would never end. I'll wait for the official end (after the epilogue) to pen down my appreciation and undying love for this brilliant piece of work. A thousand hugs to you Indu for bringing Sparsh into my life. 🤗




Sheema...*sigh** you are such a sentimental sweetheart...the perfect reader for a gooey writer like moi. 🤗I can actually visualize you talking to me when you write your reactions.

I always maintained that I would not like to stretch this...The kind of love that Yash/Aarti have for each other in Sparsh has not much scope for "after" once they get together. I am just happy that I made you happy...in return I am much enriched. I am a satisfied person today. I have felt myself grow as a writer and that itself sates me. I can't thank anyone enough in this thread for letting me grow...for supporting me throughout. I am so very grateful to you and all the Sparsh readers.

I shall await your in-depth afterword after the epilogue...I haven't forgotten that!...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ssroomani

Ha Indu...read the final part...and waiting for the epilogue!

Sad that it is ended, but you know I like stories which end at the right time and yours did...that makes me very happy!
It was a beautiful journey, Indu...loved every bit of it!




Thanks Shobha...for keeping me company on this journey and for making me happy with supportive comments.
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Posted: 12 years ago
First I'll reply about the first part.

👏

It was very emotional yet very touching. Babuji was so happy and finally relieved that Yashji has legally adopted Ansh. Finally he was ANSH YASH SCHINDHIYA. Guptaji, Baba, is such a sweetheart, I mean kind hearted person.

I thought, I fact I was sure that Yashji will raise this topic to Mr. Schindhiya that if they can accept Palak ( who was also someone else's child) as a part of their family, then why can't they accept Ansh as his son. But I was surprised that instead of Yashji, it was Baba who talked about this. But then I realised that it was because Yash has raised Palak as his own daughter, as ip his own flesh and blood. Maybe that's why this thought never occurred to him. Am I right Indu?

But finally, Mr. And Mrs. Schindhiya accepted this that Ansh is indeed Yash's son. Yash, Aarti, Palak and Ansh are one happy family. ❤️ 🤗

Loved this part also Indu 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful updates Pal 👏 👏 👏...Awww I'm very sad to see it end but you did an incredible job, thank you for sharing it with us...Once again I'm proud of you for venturing out 🤗 🤗 🤗

Arpita's father is the best, I loved the way he made SP see that he had double standards, G3 & SP accepting Ansh was due to Arnav's eye opening speech 👍🏼 👍🏼
ooh the kids are gonna have three grandfathers and two grandmothers while until Dubey gets married 😉

Aww their first date was pure perfection, it was the ideal date...and the way Mishti/Aarti teased Yash about him not kissing her up until their wedding and then the foreplay when she was kissing him 😳 😳 😳

Yeah dadi finally came around which is great cause Yash needed his entire family there with him as well as Mishti 😃

The ceremony sounds like a grand thing especially the pheras with Palak and Ansh joining their parents despite their tiredness and I'm happy that those two lost souls got their happily every after

A beautifully ending to an enchanting story ❤️ ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
di wonderful updates👏
but tears are rolling down my cheeks for both happiness & sadness
happy that i got a chance to read your wonderful story SPARSH but sad that it is ending 😭but such a beautiful ending 👏
part A was emotional and touchy❤️
and part B was wonderful di oh their sweet romance❤️
your writing is beyond beautiful di

i have cried, smiled , laughed during this whole story of SPARSH😭😊😃

thank u so much for giving us a treat to read SPARSH di🤗

waiting for epilogue

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