ArYa FF: Dil Jaanta Hai - Thread 1 (chapt 1-10) - Page 21

Originally posted by: mjht_admirer

Hello ji... 😊

Finally, reading the update as soon as u updated.... pheww!!! 😆😆

Anyway, coming to the update, frankly speaking, the previous chapters were much more catchy than this one. Sorry to be blunt yaar, i hope u understand dear. But again, i guess, for the story sake, u might have thought to show some crucial time in Aarti's marriage life...

Zoya and Aarti's conversation showed something which is possible to see in the future too...

and what was that last Aarti's thought about Vidhi's expression regarding Yash??? Interesting huh!! Really u need to update the next chapter...SOON...

Whatever it may be, ur storyline is always gripping...

loads of love
Vinu

Lol Vinu - i am the opposite. I am actually relatively satisfied with this part as compared to the previous chapters. Yes, this one does not have drama or action, but it wasn't meant to. This chapter (both parts A and B - so be warned) is supposed to portray Arti-Prashant marriage - the day-to-day happenings, small but not quite insignificant incidents are supposed to paint a picture. And these same incidents remain with Arti and help define who she becomes and how she reacts to Yash in the future. I will tie some, if not all, of these same incidents into ArYa's life.

If the part wasn't gripping/catchy enough for you, that's my failing as a writer and i apologize. Thanks for reading and commenting in spite of that my friend.

Originally posted by: kdsubs1

Lol Vinu - i am the opposite. I am actually relatively satisfied with this part as compared to the previous chapters. Yes, this one does not have drama or action, but it wasn't meant to. This chapter (both parts A and B - so be warned) is supposed to portray Arti-Prashant marriage - the day-to-day happenings, small but not quite insignificant incidents are supposed to paint a picture. And these same incidents remain with Arti and help define who she becomes and how she reacts to Yash in the future. I will tie some, if not all, of these same incidents into ArYa's life.

If the part wasn't gripping/catchy enough for you, that's my failing as a writer and i apologize. Thanks for reading and commenting in spite of that my friend.

Awww Kat... Plz don't apologize yaar.. U may think it as ur failure but its actually not... Coz yesterday before reading, i was expecting too much...but then realised that too much expectation is not good... That's why, also realized afterwards that Aarti-Prashant story is necessary before moving further...right??? So plzz...don't apologize... It was not catchy but I liked the part from the story pov...

This was such a splendid update. We can see how Prashant is slowly causing Aarti to lose her confidence and I love how this relates to Aarti's low self confidence in the show. Poor Aarti! Prashant has really brought her down and she deserves someone better. Now I'm curious as to Vidhi's troubled look regarding Yash. The suspense is killing me!

@Kat: Brilliant work, my friend! 👏I am so loving this "building up to the PV by going through the first marriage" approach. This way I get to visualize exactly how their previous relationships were. I hope to see Yash/Arpita equation now after Vidhi's sad expression. As for Aarti/Prashant , their incompatibility is only becoming clearer now...They jumped into this marriage too soon and the consequences are rushing toward them. I just love how you are keeping the faint thread between Yash/Aarti intact by keeping Vidhi/Pankaj in the picture. I also love that Vidhi is a working woman. Looking forward to how you take it up in the respective marriages

Originally posted by: taahir004

An awesome update , I'm glad that Aarti founf a friend in Zoya

and Prasant he seems like an emotional rack , one who cannot control himself , for some reason I'm thinking Prasant might drive Aarti away from him .

waiting patiently for the next update .

Thank you, Taahir.

Yes, Arti has this innate ability to attract good friends like Zoya - she may continue playing a role, i have yet to decide.

Prashant now - i think he is the most complex character. Let's see where Arti and Prashant are headed - soon to be revealed 😉.

Originally posted by: swaggerchick16

hmmm... didn't read it cuz I'm a lazy bones but wen I was skimming through to look at the length I saw Zoe in their??😆😆

Lol Kesha - how lazy can you get?? I split the chapter into smaller parts just for you and you still complain!!! 😆😆

Not Zoe, "Zoya". Now the CVs are stealing ideas from my brain 😆. I had thought of this character and her name when i first started writing DJH - more than a month before they brought in Zoya-Asad!

Originally posted by: Koolsmile

Zoya , another sincere friend to Aarti 😃

I just dont know wat is the prob wid this Prashant 😡

He hates Vidhi, ok.. Sometimes u dont lyk ppl widout any solid reason ,, but he even hates Zoya 😡

Useless creature doesn't lyk Aarti to bond wid any other person 😡

Instead of encouraging her, he is saying that she doesnt look gud in westerns😡

Aarti-Vidhi meet after a year 😳

Good News from Vidhi 😳

Something really bad has happened in Yash n Arpita's lyf right

Naureen - you got it in one. Prashant doesn't like Arti getting close to any one. It makes him insecure, brings out his inadequacies. Reaction of a typical weak person - weak by character and morality.

But hey, Arti is Arti - she lights up people's lives wherever she goes! So she can't help but make good friends like Vidhi and Zoya.

Yash-Arpita - all will be revealed in due course. Dheeraj dharo (have patience) my friend.

Thanks Naureen - for reading and commenting.

Originally posted by: Surish

Thank you 😳 Surish.

Originally posted by: Mishti13

awesome update

Thank you, Mishti.

Originally posted by: ksfan2

love it kat di...i wonder what happend to yash and arpita...lovely update waiting for the next part

Thank you, Rasheeda. Next part will be up in a day or so. And all will be revealed about Yash and Arpita when the time comes 😉.