PraDhi OS : Healing The Wounds

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Prateek Paridhi One Shot


Healing The Wounds




"Paridhi!" , Prateek kissed Pari's shoulder & hugged her from back , "Are you alright?"

"Ye--ss Prateek---Im--fine." , Paridhi stuttered.

"Is there anything you want to share?"

"Yes--I mean no--."

"What is it Paridhi?"

Pari hugged Prateek tight , "I want to tell you Prateek , I really really love you. Sorry for every pain I have given you. Im really sorry Prateek."

"Pari! Shhh..! I love you too. "


*******


"Yash Bhaiya! Any news? Where is my Pari?"


"Prateek relax! We'll get her. Police is doing its best job."


"Mr Scindiya! Please come.'' , Inspector called.


"Chhotte ! Inspector is calling me. I'll keep updating you! You just take care."


"Yes Inspector sahab?"


"Yash Ji! We have discovered somebody . Its A young frail fair lady. Looks like Paridhi , as per your description. Some fishermen discovered the body , she was badly drenched & is in hospital now. She is very critical. Shall we go to the hospital?"


Yash nodded & followed him.


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"Prateek bhaiya! Please eat something." , Aarti pleaded.


"Nahi Aarti bhabhi I cant."


Meanwhile Prateek's phone rang.


"Ji Yash Bhaiya--Any--"


"Yes ! Prateek! Immediately come to Newlife Hospital."


"Bhaiya?"


"You just come here." , Yash disconnected the phone.


"Bhabhi im going to hospital."


"I'll come along." , said Aarti.


*********


Prateek held unconscious Pari's hand , "Why did you do this Pari? Why?". He kissed her hand & began crying.


Pari's mother caressed his hairs & wiped his tears , "Prateek. I need to tell you something."


She narrated the whole tragedy that shook Paridhi & made her repent every passing second. Prateek was taken aback .


"Mummy. This much of trust she should have on me. She is my wife. I do have the guts to forgive her."


"Prateek?" , said Pari's mother in shock.


"Mummy! You only said she was drunk , was not in her senses. How am I supposed to believe she cheated me? She can never cheat me. I feel so helpless now. I did see the guilt in her eyes. I could never read that." , Prateek began crying.


"Mr Prateek Scindiya! Your wife is gaining consciousness." , doctor came & said.


"Come mummy." , Prateek held her hand & ran to Pari's room.


Paridhi slowly slowly opened her eyes & saw Prateek weeping. He was crying but had a faint smile. Paridhi joined her hands. Prateek rushed to her & clutched her hands .


"How could you do this Pari?"


"I never meant to cheat---"


Prateek placed his hand on her lips & said , "How could you think you can leave me alone? How could you? I cant live a second without you! Don't you know?"


Paridhi sighed , "I have always loved you , I will always love you."


Prateek smiled , "I know! I love you Paridhi. Come lets go home! A new beginning awaits us."


The End



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice Shubhi. I hope the prateek in the show is like the one in ur OS!😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aaahhh..
what a great job u have done with this OS Shubhi... 😃
i loved the Pratik of ur OS...
it ws actualy nice to read sumthin on dis couple too.. 😊
love u.. 🤗
Edited by AbbyluvsMaan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Something for parteek paridhi
Wow it's nice :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice story n for a change it's about PraDhi
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was nice to see a PraDhi OS! I loved it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is the first story I have read on PraDhi and I must say I loved it! 😊
The emotions between the couples could definitely be felt! Good job! 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome OS. Fab job Shubhi

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Posted: 12 years ago
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This was just lovely!!! Kudos!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice Shubhi. I hope the Prateek in the show is as mature as the one you drew out.

BTW - I love the stories you write. Continue giving us the reading pleasure please.

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