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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: RA17

Oh my my this update is as fab as it can be with each detail from section 👏

This ff if titled will be aarti ka sach 😆

Jokes apart love yash got his mind in action and ruled his father with support of tilu and prashant😃

Ansh and yash scene is sooo adorable.. and G3 and vdhi cinvo gr8 fun haan😆

nahiin p got to know about aarti truth😡 and kesha z has not escape ab what next hmm have ti wait or kya.😕. well ;oved this update you twosome awesome hmmm👏👏


Heya Riya!! (Oooh, it rhymed😲🤣) LOL! So now you're planning to rename the story? I can only imagine how many secrets and truths would have needed to be revealed with a title like that in the dark corners of CONland😆...Errrm anyway, yes, the young lord got himself together and made use of the things he had on hand or in this case in mind. Rather than succumbing to the pressure he used it to fortify himself, and Tilu and Prakash were there with him (I doubt Prashant would have been very supportive😆)

Thanks for enjoying that little bit with Ansh, Yash, Vidhi and Gayu. We look forward to having more of those moments soon😉

Sigh...the truth is out indeed. See this is why you can't tell anything to Kesha.😆You spend so much time trying to convince her that before you know it, everyone else knows and believes it before her🤣🤣🤣 (I'm kidding Kesh😆)


Thank you for loving it, and thanks so much for the compliments!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vidya29

It has been a long time since I last reviewed.Enjoying getting back to it again.

The story has evolved beautifully since yash confessed.But I'll start again!😃Plese bear😳. I was wondering where you'd disappeared to.

The foundation of the story that you chose was perfect.I love that era.I can't let go of Castles,the clean air,untainted Nature, Architecture,Gowns,Prince Charming on galloping stallions...I still haven't let go of that little "Disney"ed girl.Yash sincerely needs to revise the Victorian Morality codes though,hoping then shall he restrain thoughts of Aarti's heaving mounds.😳 Well you certainly are with Di and I in our love for that era. Depending on the tale, it can be such a lovely read, and there is something about castles and fancy dresses that melts even the most resolute of hearts.😆 Disney has certainly helped to make the world of princesses and princes look desirable even with all the problems the characters face. Who doesn't love thinking about Cinderella leaving her underprivileged and sad life behind? She was blessed with a fairy god-mother and a prince to boot. And let's not forget Aladdin's rise from pauper to prince with Jasmine (my favourite princess) at her side.

I agree with you, Yash certainly needs to revisit the Victorian Morality codes. Cut him some slack though- four to five years of celib8cy is bound to be difficult on a fellow like Yash🤣🤣

Coming back,you chose to name it as "Conland".With Yash and his meandering thoughts(strawberry flavored perhaps),Conland,indeed. Ah yes, CONland...t'was a name we could not resist. The world of PV filtered into our lives as all words beginning with "con" took on a new meaning. CONland was however the best name for the place. Lord knows we couldn't have used the "dom" like some nations and kingdoms.😲

The way the story progresses,its beautiful.You pick up bits and pieces from here and there and weave it into the story as you go along.My maa always says that its the mark of a good storyteller,finding inspiration in mundane details.I like how bits and pieces ,picked up from the show ,are scattered here and there.It gives you a sense of familiarity.One is not lost upon characters that have little screen space.I, for one, love imagining at the back of my mind as I read.I love giving faces to the characters.Familiarity here,helps. Thank you! As we go along, we do ensure to re-read and keep some set things in mind. There are so many little details that can get lost in a story, and sometimes those details are the most important things and act as unexpected catalysts. Not to mention, with an audience that's always busy and distracted, we can't help but remind them of the little moments in the past.😳

As for the details from the show...in the case of this story. Everything is meant to be an "inside joke". From the very name CONland, we couldn't help but bring to life all those little things that had made us laugh even in the most solemn moments of Punar Vivaah. At times, it's almost as if the writers are purposely sharing a joke with the audience, and we do enjoy laughing at those secret jokes over and over again...so we add it here and give ourselves something to smile at with you all. In addition, the fact alone that we are writing about fictional characters that everyone has so firmly embedded in their minds due to the presence of excellent actors makes us even more determined to get it "right". Of course, we have creative liberties, but there is still a need to make it familiar as you've termed it, and for that we try to keep it all as balanced as possible (between us and PV).

One of the very first thing I came upon after Yash's thoughts about Aarti's Oh-so-fitting curves was Ansh's concern for his Mumma. Also the bond between the kids and Mrs D.
Ansh,god bless him,is such a darling.He gets his mumma,in his own way.I love how understanding he is .Observant too.He surely has Aarti written all over him despite being sired by Prashant.He surely is my Little Prince Charming.I love the way he reacts to her actions,playing his mumma's Knight in shining Armour. LOL! Mention of Yash's thoughts in the same line as Ansh. That one just about bowled me over with amusement. Judging from there history, Aarti and Ansh have quite a dependence on each other, and are very attuned to the happenings in each other's life. It's perhaps that very thing that makes Ansh more observant about the things regarding his mother than an average child. His beautiful nature is most definitely a testament to the nurture Aarti has given him and the indelible mark her teachings have left upon his life. So there ain't no way that blue-bat devil's genes will be turning a grandchild of the noble late King Anshuman into a species of Asp. Lord forbid!

Payal and Palak have perhaps started to see Aarti as more than just Mrs D.If memory serves right,Both of them have at one point have called her "Mumma".The Girls are delightful,especially Payal.Nah...both.The three of them are so innocent!I love it when Ansh says that Yash is almost as handsome as him.😆Your memory is correct. Aarti has been the one nurturing constant in their lives for a very long time, and the love that she has given them appears to have been equal to her love for Ansh. It's no wonder that the little dearhearts are so attached to her without an understanding of the complexities of position and lineage. As for Ansh his one-liner😆.

Sanju is the very fitting image of the soul sister.The way she understands and accepts Aarti and her idiosyncrasies,is touching. Agreed! What they share is something beautiful, and Sanju's on loving, compassionate spirit is such a match for Aarti's.

Maya,for the love of my sweet god,is maya.I would never be able to understand her reasoning behind hating Aarti as such.Jealousy be damned. Maya will be Maya. If Aarti ever manages to reform her, it would be amazing to say the least.😳

Kinshuk,before was a fleeting mention.Now ,he is a valiant man.Noble and Loyal.Just the man for Sanju.True that. From a passing phantom to a reality, and exactly the sort of steadfast, loving, loyal fellow a woman like Sanju deserves.

Lady Tilashini is the dainty maiden who is as wise as her brother. Indeed she is.

Mr P(not the devil).I like him.He is Yash's Sanju. Definitely so.

Yash ,Aarti and Prashant would be dicussed in the next post along with the rest of my musings. No problemo! (whispers- Thank the Lord!😆)


P.S.This is long,I know.Sorry.😳😊





Phew!! Be right back to your comment.😆

EDITED😃

It was an absolute delight reading your comment Vidu and an even greater one responding to it. Don't be afraid to drop a lengthy post on us every now and then, it lets us know you're interested and paying attention.😳 Thank you for taking the time to write such a long post, and thanks for reading!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ashGC_arja

Great update👏👏... That was funny as well as so great when Yash cited out those law points instead of Pankrap???😕😆.

I am waiting for the next update


LOL! Pankrap was too busy making eyes at his ladylove to be thinking about these kinds of laws. 😆 Do hope you enjoy the next update.

P.S. A few updates back- when Sir P first came- we learned why Yash and Sir P call him Pankrap. Funny story I've been told.😆

Thank you for commenting!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Prasadini

Faboulous updates dears👏



Thank you Prasu!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Kittya_Cullen


Heya Riya!! (Oooh, it rhymed😲🤣) LOL! So now you're planning to rename the story? I can only imagine how many secrets and truths would have needed to be revealed with a title like that in the dark corners of CONland😆...Errrm anyway, yes, the young lord got himself together and made use of the things he had on hand or in this case in mind. Rather than succumbing to the pressure he used it to fortify himself, and Tilu and Prakash were there with him (I doubt Prashant would have been very supportive😆)

Thanks for enjoying that little bit with Ansh, Yash, Vidhi and Gayu. We look forward to having more of those moments soon😉

Sigh...the truth is out indeed. See this is why you can't tell anything to Kesha.😆You spend so much time trying to convince her that before you know it, everyone else knows and believes it before her🤣🤣🤣 (I'm kidding Kesh😆)


Thank you for loving it, and thanks so much for the compliments!!

kadeen i only mention aarti ka sach not saach ka saamna else you have to bring radha tracke here tooo😆😆
thanks for your kind words and works,,, will loook forward to next😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: RA17

kadeen i only mention aarti ka sach not saach ka saamna else you have to bring radha tracke here tooo😆😆
thanks for your kind words and works,,, will loook forward to next😃😃


You're welcome and I know it was only Aart's...but in CONland there could never be just one hidden truth😛😆 Have a good rest of the weekend Riya😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Kittya_Cullen


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*Dying with laughter* So "real" Kesh, whatever do you have in mind for P? Don't worry, we'll think of something perfectly suited for your Agricultural mind. There are after all so many ways to use a piece of sh...errrm manure.😆


(Drastic measures- Lol! Haven't heard that phrase with a Caribbean spin in a long time.🤣)


well i don't see any other way to put it the man is really using drastic measures 😆

I'm gonna be my tools practicals next week maybe I can use a shovel on him and them roll him in shit 😡 huh he threw me in the mud prashant better start wearing his running shoes cuz i've got my con-heels rearing to go 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Kittya_Cullen


You're welcome and I know it was only Aart's...but in CONland there could never be just one hidden truth😛😆 Have a good rest of the weekend Riya😃

my friend weekend are more of aaryaland hey i even van rhyme😉😃
tace care njy weekend
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Posted: 12 years ago
Having a great laugh with all your name and places... Who invent them yar... Yash is sure to get the job... Missing Aarti in here.. But you both did an amazing job... Loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago

It was an hilarious update, can't control myself not to laugh. 😆
With the character like Tilashini and Kesha itself, the name says it all.

So, Yash took advantage the years he has learned about the Law w/ his brother Pankcrap, I mean Pankaj!! LOL!
Leaving SP a what? stupefied reaction!? 😆

And oh the last part, did Pareshant actually heard what Aarti said about her truth? Scary..

Looking forward for the next...

Great going dearies.. 😳

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