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Posted: 17 years ago
vikram:yeh maine aabhi aabhi kya suna indu 😡
indu:vi..vi...vi..vikram!!!!!!tum yeha par kaise 😳
vikram:pehle tum bato tum yeha kya kart rahi ho aur abhi.........
indu:chalo na vikram kahi aur chal k baat karte hain
vikram:mujhe lagta hain ki tum mujhe dhoka de rahi ho....... 😡
indu:nahi vikram tum galat samajh rahe ho
vikram:main kuch nahi sunna chahata hoon[takes out his talwar n indu runs towards river]
vikram takes out his talwar n just he raised his hand he falls down in river
indu is shocked then MG comes n hugs her........
Mg:aab main tumhe yeha nahi rehne doonga tum aabhi hamare saath chal rahi ho............
indu:nahi sultan main prc ko mare bina yeha se nahi jaaongi



plz this is incomplete complete it................i m not able to think any new twist n turns
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Posted: 17 years ago
soz i cnt continue im lost in my own topic i duno wuz goen on with the story last tym i opend this page was wen it was in page 12 i think? so i cnt be asked to read all tht sozzz
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sexc_111

soz i cnt continue im lost in my own topic i duno wuz goen on with the story last tym i opend this page was wen it was in page 12 i think? so i cnt be asked to read all tht sozzz

arrey u can just read the last two three posts n get n idea coz ekta's serials jahan se bhi dekho its all the same n everything can be considered as a new beginning...so u can do it yaar😆

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: priyankasen1



arrey u can just read the last two three posts n get n idea coz ekta's serials jahan se bhi dekho its all the same n everything can be considered as a new beginning...so u can do it yaar😆



ya its very simple yaar u dont need to think much also do try to write yaar............
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Posted: 17 years ago
indravati mg k saath vapas chali jaati ha.....
sanjam : prithvi ye indu to ja rahi hai chalo abhi ghori per humla bol de...
prc: nahi abhi sahi waqt nahi hai...arrey saath ladki hai kuch bhi ho sakta hai....

sab yatra mein wapas chale aate hai...
sanyo : prithvi indu mili ki nahi?kya hua?
prc : ha wo shayad mg k saath chali gayi hai...sanyo mera ek kaam karo gi?
sanyo : tum bol kar to dekho.
some dialogues with MI music in background....
tabhi na jaane kahan se indu aa jati hai.....

indu : arrey tum sab yahan kya kar rahe ho?
sanyo : arrey indu tum kahan chali gayi thi?hum sab to pareshan ho rahe the....chalo chal kar kuch kha lo....subah se tumne kuch nahi khaya.....

indu : ha chalo.....
sanyo looks bk at prc n both hv a eye lock n they smile...

tambu mein
indu : kajri kya prc ko pata chal gaya meri pregnancy ka?
sanyo : nahi to...use kaise pata hoga?maine nahi bataya per aap ye kyon pooch rahi hai?
indu : pata nahi jis tarah wo mujhe dekh raha tha mujhe aisa laga ki shak kar raha hai...
sanyo: aisa kuch nahi hai maharani..wo kya hai na ki shayad use aapke saath biteye huye purane din yaad aa gaye....
indu look with anger 😡: achcha poorane din?jab apni boori ma ki seva karva karva kar mere haatho ko turvane ka poora bandobast kar rakha tha usne? aur us pratha ko to dekho?umar mein mujhse aadhi aur mujhe ghar se nikal diya?iska badla to mein zaroor lungi aur jaldi he loongi...tum dekh lena kajri...
sanyo : aap kya karne waali ho?
indu : tum bus aam khate jao guthliyaan ginne ki koshish bhi maat karo...wo mera kaam hai....

sanyo goes off feeling very upset n tells everything to prithvi....all are tensed....
tabhi nadi mein unhe ek laash dikhti hai...prc paani mein chalang lagata hai aur laash ko bahar nikal kar laata hai...
sanyo : haaaaaa prithvi y ekya hua?
prc: ghabrao maat sanyo ise kisi ne maar diya hai..
sanyo hugs prc : prithvi hum ne aisa pehele kabhi nahi dekha hum e bahut darr lag raha hai....prithvi ye to vikram hai..ise kisi ne maar diya...par kyon?
prc chk his pulse..: nahi ye to abhi zinda hai chalo vaid k pass le chalte hai...

vaidya: ye abhi zinda hai....per abhi kuch kaha nahi jaa sakta...agar subah tak hosh mein aa gaya to jaan bach sakti hai....

indu : kya hua hai yahan per itni bheed kyon hai?
vaishali : indravati wo vikram ko kisi ne mar ne ki koshish ki hai...
indu looks scraed : VIKRAM!(per wo bacch kaise gaya use to humne kud apni aankhon se nadi mein girte dekha tha aur use to tairna bhi nahi aata tha)...

vaidya : abhi vo ladka khatre se bahar hai aap sab unse mil sakte hai...
all go inside to meet n indu follows behind.

sanjam: kyon pehchana hume vikram?ab kaise ho tum?prc ne tumhari jaan bachai...
vikram stares in the heaven without reply...
prc: chalo tum aaram kar lo...hum sab chalte hai....
NO ANSWER
pundir : arrey kam se kam prithvi ka sukriya he kar lete?
NO ANSWER

arjun : ek lagau kya isko?mu tor doonga iska...sukriya tak nahi kar sakta hai kya?

all are leaving....
vikram : main yahan kaise aya?
all turn bk.
prc : tum hume paani mein nbehte huye mile the....ky ahua tha vikram?kya tumhe tayrna nahi aata hai?
vikram : paani? vikram?ye sab kya bol rahe ho tum log?mujhe to kuch bhi yaad nahi hai..

arjun: achcha kuch yaad nahi hai?jab talwar se teri gardan kat denge na tab yaad aa jayegi....
vaidya : ruk jao ye tum sab kya kar rahe ho?
sanjam: aap nahi jante hai vaidya ji ye bahut bara nautanki hai.
vaidya : ek vaidya ki aankhon se kuch nahi chipta hai....sachmuch iski yaadaasht chali gayi hai...ise kuch bhi yaad nhi hai...
pundir : do char sar par paregi to apne aap yaad aa jayega.....
tabhi na jaanne kahan se indravati bhagti hui aa jati hai.....: viky viky ye tumhe kya ho gaya ?ye kisne kia?main use zinda nahi chorungi....
vikram : kaun ho tum aur mujhse kyon chipak rahi ho?duur hato...
indu : tum apni indu ko bhool gaye vicky?
sanyo : indravati chalo yahan se inhe aaram karne do..chalo!!!!!!
bahar jakar : ye kya kar rahi thi aap?
indu : dekh rahi thiki wo saach much natak kar raha hai ya phir uski yadaash chali gayi hai...mein to prc ki madad kar rahi thi...
sanyo : koi zaroorat nahi hai..aapko pata hai jab aap chali gayi thi to chnad ne aapka peecha kia tha...hum ne prc ko to rok liya tha par unhe kaise rokti?chand ko malum hai ki vikram ka bachch aap ke pet mein hai aur usne aapko vickram ko dhakka dete hue bhi dekh liya tha...wo to shukar manao ki use kisi kaam se yatra chodni pari warva prc ko saab pata chal jata...
indu : achcha to ye pehele kyon nahi bataya tumne?main chalti hoon...bhar mein gaya vikram aur uski yaadaasht....
n indu leaves....
prc: sukriya sanyo...tum ne achcha jaal bichaya ab use chand ke wapas aane ka darr to bana rahega plus ye pata bhi nahi chalega ki hum ne uska peecha kia tha aur sab kuch dekh liya tha...
sanyo : per chand kahan hai ?use kuch ho gaya to.?use akele he bhej diya tumne?
prc: chand to yahi hai sakbe saamne...wo dekho...
they show a cook shouting at others...he is wearing typical rajasthani dress with big moustach n surma in eyes.....he turns..lols........its chander..

sab kush ho gaye.....
Edited by priyankasen1 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

well done Priyanka di & Malshree di!!!!!👏👏aur sab log bhool gaye kya ki prc ko ghori ke guptcharon ko bhi rokna tha shivling churaane se!!!😆i am cotinuing with the next episode....then they all feel very happy to see Chand...

prc: arre....chand bardai!!!!😃waah waah!!!😃 kya baat hai poet se cook ban gaye aur hume bataaya bhi nahin!!!😆bahut nainsafi hai!!😆chalo ab to hume kuchh khaane ko do!!!!😆

chand: arre... prithvi yeh kaisi baat kar rahe ho main abhi bhi wahi bekaar sa poet hoon😆 khana waana banana mere bas ki baat nahin!!!!😆

prc: ha ha ha ha.......(then he hugs him)🤗

sanyo: bas!! ho gaya bharat milaap!!!😆ab cholo bhi varna woh indravat aagayi to saara plan chaupat samjho!!!😆

prc: haan!!chalo!!!😊

(then they leave& go back to tambu.then sanyo goes to tambu of indu)

sanyo: arre maharani indravati aap itni pareshaan kyun dikh rahin hain???😊

indu: arre... pareshan na hoon to kya karoon!!!😒

sanyo: kya hua????😊

indu: arrre....main yeh bachcha nahin chaahti!!!kya karoon???arre kuchh maheene baad to sabko yeh pata chal jaayga ki main pregnent hoon!!!!ab kya karoon???kuchh samajh main nahi aa raha hai!!!!😒

sanyo:(thinks for a while)hmmm....yeh to badi mushkil waali baat hai!!!😊

indu:kajri tum ek kaam karo kal tum kisi bhi bahaane se mujhe uss budhhe vaidya ke paas le chalna!baaki kaam mujh pe chhod do!aur haan prithvi se koi bhi baahaana bana dena aur kisi ko bhi iss baat ki bhanak padi to tom jaanti ho na ki tumhaara bhai....😈(gives an evil smile)

sanyo: nahi nahi!!!!mere bhai ko kuchh mat kariye!!!aap ka kaam ho jaayga!!!😒

indu: kaam ho jaaye to hi tumhaare bhai ke liye achha hai!😈(gives an evil smile & goes away.then sanyo goes to her & prc's tambu)

sanyo:prithvi....😒

prc: haan kya hua???tum itni pareshaan kyun dikh rahi ho???😕

sanyo: prithvi pareshaani hi waali baat hai!😒(& tells everything to him)

prc:(tensed)hey bhagwaan ab kya hoga!!!😲agar woh indravati vaidya ke paas chali gayi to usse to sab kuchh pata chal jaayega!!!!😒aur abhi tak uss ghori ke guptcharon ka bhi kuchh ata pata nahin chala hai!!😒yatra ko khatam hone mein to sirf paanch din hi bache hain!ab karoon to karoon kya!!!😒

sanyo:prithvi itna pareshaan mat ho!dheeraj se kaam lo!iss tarah tension karoge to kuchh bhi samajh mein nahi aayega!suno mere paas ek zabarast idea hai!!!

prc: kya???

sanyo:kyun na vaidya ko hi kahin bhaga diya jaaye!!😊 "naa rahega baas na bajegi baasuri"!!!!😆

prc:arre wah!!!sanyogita!!kya idea hai!!!😃par hum vaidya ko bhagaayenge kaise????😕

sanyo:woh sab hum pe chhod do!!!😊

prc: shukriya sanyo!!😊agar aaj tum naa hoti to aaj to pata nahi main aaj zinda bhi hota ya nahi!!!😭

(prc ke aakh se aansoo nikal aate hain)😭

sanyo:prithvi kyun tum aisi baatein kar rahe ho!😒hum jab tak zinda hain tab tak tum par kabhi koi aanch nahi aane denge!!!😊ab chalo apne yeh aansoo pochhho aur khana khane chalo!!!😊(prc ki aankh sanyo pyaar se pochhti hai)

prc: sanyogita....(and hugs her)🤗

to be continued......

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Posted: 17 years ago

doosre din around 4 in morning

sanyo : maharani indravati chaliye...yatra shuru hone mein ab kuch he ghante bache hai...chalo raat k andhere mein sooraj nikal ne se pehele hum apko us vaidya k pass le chalte hai...
indu : thik hai chalo.

chalte chalte wo ek nadi k pass ki ek kutiy amein pahunche.

indu : ye tum mujhe kahan le aayi kajri.
sanyo : chaliye yahi rehte hai wo vaidya...humne unse kaha ki aap ko unse kuch khaas kam hai isiliye hum inke ghar par he milenge.

andar poora andhera tha,sirf ek diye ki lau aur poore kamre mein dhoon thee.
indu : arrey ye sab kya hai?itna andhera kyon hai?
sanyo: ye vaidya ki yehi khasiyat hai...ye apna chehra kisi ko nahi dikhate hai...
indu: achcha vaidya ji aap koto kajri ne bataya he hoga ki hum yahan par kis liye aaye hai...kya aap humari madad karenge?hum aapko muh mangi rakam denge.

vaidya ne sir hilaya aur haat baraya....haat mein kuch goliya thi.
sanyo ne unhe lekar indu ko diya aur ishara kia ki use wo kha jaye...
indu ne goli kha li aur thodi he der mein behosh ho gayi...

tabhi wahan arjun aa jata hai...
arjun: pundir sab thik tha na?
vaidya urns...lols..its our own pundir
everyone smile.... 😛😊
its morning indu is in her tambu....wakes up.
indu: kajri hum yahan kaise aaye.
sanyo: humne aapke sainiko se kehkar aap ko yahan tak le aaye.
indu: sainik????kya matlab...aur wo vaidya?kya hua? mera bachcha giraya ki nahi usne?
sanyo: maharani ji mujhe khed hai ki apka pregnancy itne dino ka ho chuka hai ki agar aap ne achcha girwaya to aapki jaan ko khatra ho sakta hai...
indu : kya??? nahi aisa nahi ho sakta hai!!!ab hum kya karenge?hume ghori ki begum nahi banna hai.
sanyo: ek yojna hai....dekhiye waise bhi vikram apni yaadasht kho chukhai to kyon aap use he pata le aur usi se shaadi kar le??aap k saath saath apke bachche ka bhi bhala ho jayega....aur ghori to bevkoof hai..apki haaton ki putli hai...use to aap kabhi bi raaste se hata dengi...
😉 😉
indu : tum thik keheti ho kajri...ab to aisa he karna parega...ab chalo hume yatra mein aage barna hai....

chalte chalte indu ke pao mein chot lagti hai aur wo girti hai vikram ki banhon mein...vikram looks puzzled.....
indu : mujhe maaf kar dijiye...
vikram indu eye lock ❤️(background: dekha hai peheli baar saajan ki aankon mein pyar) 😆 😆
vikram : nahi thik hai

sanyo ,prc,gang smiles.
prc: ab tumhara dhyan tumhare is pyare vicky par he tika rahega indu.. 😳

later they show two people talking in a temple
female: humari chaal kamiyab ho gayi...
male: haan aur ye sab tumhari vajah se he hua hai.
female :ha ha ha ha ab prc ko kabhipata nahi chalega ki uske asli dushman the kaun aur kya chahte the..
male : sahi kaha hai tumne..isi baat pe chalo jashna manaye...
bahar gana chal raha hai "yaaron k hum yaar hai yaara"...sab naach rah hai...these two shadow characters are slowly walking towards all.....they turn....light falls on them.....lols....its jaimal and jaimalini 😆 😆 😆

Precap :vaishali falls into pundir's arms n eye lock....nw year brings with it a new love story blooming in prc and ekta..dont miss the episode...

WISH U ALL A VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR!

Edited by priyankasen1 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
lol yeh prc will cum back alive and no1 will be able to recon. him n he has alot of promble explaining to his love that he is really prithviraj chauhan 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
😆 can't even imagine thaat.... 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago

HAPPY NEW YEAR TO EVERYONE!!!!!!😃well done priyanka di!!!!!👏wow!!!jaimal & jaimalini!😆& a very romantic precap!😊& where is Malshree di?????i am continuing with the next episode.....😊

then prc & friends continue their yatra & jaimal & jaimalini also follow them....😡

jaimal: dekho jaimalini uss sanyogita ko iss baat ki bhanak bhi nahi padni chahiye ki hum uska peechha kar rahe hain.😊

jaimalini: uski phikar mat karo kissi ko kuchh nahin pata chalega!😊

jaimal: bas! kissi bhi tarah uss sanyogita ka kaam tamaam ho jaayega to Kannauj,Ajmer aur Dilli(Delhi) teeno humaara!!!!😡ha ha ha....😡

jaimalini: par vo kaise?????😕

jaimal: arre sanyogita ke gham mein prithvi apne aap hi mar jaayega😡 to automatically Dilli aur Ajmer humaara hua na!😡itni comman sense waali baat tumhe kaise nahi samajh mein aayi!😆

jaimalini: arre haan maine to yeh kabhi socha hi nahin!😆waah aap kitne chaalak ho gaye hain pati dev!!!😆

jaimal: woh to main bachpan se hi tha!!!😆🤣samjho to achhha aur na samjho to......😆

guess what???😆 indu dono ko dekh leti hai!!!!😆

indu: (in her mind) arrre jaimal aur jaimalini!!!!😲yeh dono budhhe yahaan kya kar rahe hain???😲arre agar inhone sanyogita...arre nahi kajri!!!😆(main to khud hi confuse ho jaati hoon ki kaun kajri hai aur kaun woh asli chudail sanyogita!!!😡)😆agar yeh kajri ko sanyogita samajh kar usse milne gaye to???😲to mere saare kiye karaaye par paani phir jaayega!😒ab main kya karoon???😕kya karoon??😕 kuchh samajh nahi aa raha!!!!😕mujhe kisi bhi tarah kajri ko sab kuchh bataana padega.par kaise???😕

then scene shifts to prc & friends.chalte chalte vaishali ke feet ek big stone se takra jaate hain aur voh girne lagti hai.😒tabhi pundir usse aakar samhaal leta hai then they have an eye lock!!!😃😍(how romantic!!!😍but i am not able to choose a correct background music for this scene😭 so please choose your favorite song & play it here with this romantic scene!!!😃)

vaishali: shukriya!!!!humme bachaane ke liye!!!😊

pundir: koi baat nahi!!aisa ho jaata hai!😊

prc & rest of the friends smile by looking at each other!!!😆

pundir: arre tum sab itna muskuraa kyun rahe ho???😕

prc: nahi! kuchh nahi pundir!😆 hum bas aise hi muskuraa rahe the.chalo yatra continue ki jaaye varna hum peechhe chhoot jaayenge!!😊

pundir: haan chalo chalo!!!😊(background music bam bam bhole... starts!)😛

To be continued........😊

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