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Posted: 17 years ago
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PRC : Baba mera naam surya hai(name witheld on purpose).main bhatakte bhatakte yahan par aa gaya hoon.main sanyas lena chahta hoon.kya aap meri madad karenge?
baba:beta tum itni choti umar mein sanyas kyon lena chahte ho?jeevan bahut sundar hai.uska luft uthao.
prc: baba mein bahut akela hoon.mere jeevan mein aisa kuch bhi nahi hai jiske liye main is duniya mein rah saku.
baba (looking amused):3 saal pehele meri mulakat aise he ek hari hui bechari ladki k saath hui thi.jise jeene ki koi ichcha nahi thi.uski ankhen chali gayi thi.par usne himmat nahi hari.aur aaj dekho wo blind school chalati hai mere he ashram mein.aur to aur ek bhale admi ne jate jate use apni ankhein bhi daan mein de di.
prc:kaun hai wo baba?main unse milna chahta hoon.
baba:meri beti nandini.
nandini naam sunte he prithvi k dil mein kuch hua.background mein gana baja (pa ma ga ma ). 😭
prc: kya main unse mil sakta hoon?
baba:tumne thori der kar di beta.wo abhi abhi koteshwar yatra ke liye ashram k kuch karamchariyi k saath nikal gayi hai.par tum chinta na karo.ek mahine mein laut ayegi.tab tak is ashram mein tumhara swagat hai.
😳koteshwar mandir!!!!!!!purani yaadein,...tere bin main yooon......
prc: nahi baba main sochta hoon ki main bhi ek bar bhole nath k darshan kar he aau.
prc send sandesh to pundir,sanjam,chand,arjun in ajmer and ask them to join him.

scene shifts to yatra
nandini kaha ja rahi hai aap????
and they show a lady in khadi clothes with flower jwelleries.lol....its sanyogita with a new hairstyle and clothes..and specssssss
nandini(aka sanyo):are main to yahi thi.teen saal k bad meri ankhon ki roshni wapas ayi hai isiliye main is duniya ko dekhna chahti hoon.jhoomna chahti hoon,churmure khana chahti hoon. 😊
guruma(senior member of ashram):nandini beti chalo baith jao.hume bahut chalna hai abhi.
nandini:nahi guruma aap chinta na kare hum nahi thakenge.hume chalne ki aadat hai(scene shifts back to nandini n surya days). 😭
nandini with tears in her eyes.😭😭:i wish prithvi tum yahan mere pass hote.par tum to na jaane kahan ho//us indravati k saath kush he hoge.
"kasam pyar ki aaye sanam indravati se juda karwayenge hum" 😡
hum e kasam hai hamare in aansuo ki,hum a kasam hai hamare barbad hue 3 saalon ki,hume kasam hai humare duniya na dekhne wale bachche ki.....indravati hum tumhe nahi chorenge...tum ne hume hamare prithvi se alag kiya hai.aab din ginn na chalo kar do kyon ki main wapas aa rahi hoon. tumhare din,raat sab barbad karne....
yatra to ek bahana hai.hum to isi bahane ashram se bahar nikalna chahte the taki hum tum tak pahunch sake..
aur prithvi in 3 saalon mein tumne mujhe dhoondne ki koshish bhi nahi ki?na jane kya halat kia hoga tumne maharajprc mere pita maharaj jaichand ka?wo to mere mrityu ki kha\bar se he mar gaye honge.in sab harkato ka badla lene main aa rahi hoon......😡
Edited by priyankasen1 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#92
wow diiiiiiiiiiiiiii
too good ur story turning is mindblowing even ekta cant think this all.................
😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#93
great!!!!!!!well done!!!!!! 👏 then Prithvi with his friends joins the yatra & he comes to the same temple where they had met 1st time! 😃 sanyogita also comes after prc then background music NI NI SA SA starts! 😛 Sanyogita was just beside PRC they could not saw each other & sanyo left the temple & moved towards her tent. 😭 😭 😭 (same as their first meeting!)guess what???? 😲 now instead of bhimdev ghori wanted to steal the moorti of koteshwar temple!! 😉 all the guptchars of ghori were spread in the yatra. 😆 one of the ghori's guptachar recognized sanyogita 😭 & informed ghori about this! 😭 😭 😭
guptchar: sultan ki jai ho!sultan ki jai ho! 😃
ghori: kya baat hai kaho!
guptchar: sultan! sultan sanyogita zinda hai!! 😃
ghori:(shocked)kya! sanyogita! par tum itne sure kaise ho?? 😲
guptchar: sultan maine khud unhe apni aankhon se dekha hai! aur mujhe koi galat fahmi nahin hui hai! mujhpar vishwaas kijiye! 😃
ghori:(laughs madly) 🤢 ab sanyogita ko meri hone se koi bhi nahin rok sakta! 😭 ha ha.... 🤢 jao aur uspar nazar rakho! 😭
guptchar: sultan unho ne apna naam badalkar nandini rakh liya hai! 😃
ghori: nandini!!!ha ha.... 🤢 chahe kitne naam badal lo sanyogita! 😒 mujhse bachkar kahaan jaaogi!!! 😭 ha ha.... 🤢 (laughs madly for one hour) 🤢 🤢 🤢
to be continued..... 😊 😆 🤣
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice turn.....................

prc: dekho sanyogita yisi yatra par hain aur uuska naam nandani hain
chand:kya,yeh to.............
arjun:haan yeh to..............
pundir:aare yeh to..................
prc:haan yeh wahi naam hain nandani..........
nandani:hey devi maa aab aap hame iitni sakti dijiye ki hum phir se prithvi ko aapna bana sake aaur uush indravati ko sabak sikha sake ki sachha pyaar kabhi nahi harta
pundhir:prc main jara ekbar yeha par puri tarah dekh kar aata hoon kahi nandani mil jayegi........
prc:pundhir tum nahi badle thik hain,par aapna dyaan rakhna
chand:ruke main bhi tumhare saath aata hoon
arjun:prc aagar tum bura na mano to main kuch kahoo
prc:haan bolo na arjun kya baat hain
arjun:maine tumhe bina bataye maya ko bhi ish yatra pe saath le aaya
prc:saach kaha hain maya bhabhi
arjun:woh bahar kadhi hain
prc:arjun tum bhi kamal karte ho arjun jaao jakar maya ko lekar aao
maya:prc kahi aap humse naraj to nahi hain
prc:nahi maya hame khusi hain ki aap bhi hamare saath ish yatra me chalk rahi hain
maya:sukhriya,main aapki madat karna chahati hoon
main nandani ko jaanti hoon...........
prc:kya
maya:haan aap chaliye mere saath main milwati hoon use aap se
prc:sach jaldi chaliye
maya:nandani
nandani:haan maya kaho
maya:dekho to tumse milne kaun aaya hain
nandani:prc hum....................(returns to flash back)
prc:sanyogita chalo hum shaadi kar lete hain tumhare bina main akela tanha maar hi gaya tha par main aashram pahuucha to waha k baba ne kaha ki tum ish yatra pe aaye ho to main tumhare piche chala aaya
nandani:nahi prc tum ne hamri bhawanao k saath khela hain humtum se shaadi nahi karenge
prc:dekho sanyogita tumhare pitaji bahut hi pareshaan hain aur bahut dukhi bhi main uunko aab aur nahi sambhal sakta tum mere saqth chalo
nandani:kya pitaji............
prc:haan woh tumhari yaad me bahut dukhi hain
nandani:mujhe uunke pass le chalo prc..........
prc:thik hain tum chalne ki tayari karo hum aaj ni niklenge



suddenly...................
entry of ghori...................
hahhahahahhahahhahahahhahahahahhahhahhahahhaahha 😆 maharaj prc aap sanyogita ko kahi nahi le ja sakte....................


ur turn continue...................................
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PRC: tumse matlab? 😡
mg : sanyo meri haram ki rani hai.nahi pata kya?
nandini:pagal ho gaye ho kya?yaad nahi humara divorce ho chuka hai?
mg:divorce to tumne humse zabardast karva lya tha apne sainik bhijwa kar.par aab nahi tumhe hamare sath chalna he hoga.

tabhi pundir,arjun,sanjam,chand aa jate hai.
prc:peeche mur kar dekh lo ghori.tumhare peeche tumhari maut hari hai lekin maine tumahari patni ko vada kia hai ki main tumhe nahi maroonga isiliye apni salamati chahte ho to chale jao.
mg (puppy face):thik hai main ja raha hoon par apne peeche kuch aisa chor kar jraha hoon ki tum kahin apna muh nahi dikha paoge...hahahahahaha!!!!maharaj prc ab tumhe aur tumhare ajmer ko tabah hone se koi nahi bacha sakta...n he exists
prc: isne ye kya kaha?kya matlabh tha iska?
nandini:choro ye sab prithvi.hum a kannauj wapas le chalo.
prc: nahi sanyo dekha na tumne tumhari jaan ko kitna khatra hai.hum tumhe akele nahi jaane de sakte hai aur abhi hum tumhare saath aa bhi nahi sakte hai kyon ki ume is yatra ko poora karna hai aur mg ka bhed janna hai.
sanyo:thik hai karo tum apni man mani.main ja rahi hoon apni disha mein.tumhe to meri bhavnao se khelne ka bahana chahiye .bus!
maya:aisa nahi hai nandini.zara prithvi k bare mein to socho?jo teen saal tumhari yaad mein tarpa ho tum use doshi karar rahi ho?
nandini:"chup raho.hum ja rahe hai.hum a abhi us idravati ki bachchi se milkar sabak sikhana hai.

tabhi na jaane kahan se gane ki awaz aati hai "kaisi paheli hai ye zindagani"
sab tambu se bahar aa jate hai.
lolsssssssssss its indravati ..her hair style is a short golden bob cut now and she weras weird chamkila ghagra with dark make up.......not again....
indu: kyon maharaj prc hairan ho mujhe yahan dekh kar?kush to definitely nahi ho??????wo kya hai na ki hume ye sandesh mila ki tum second honeymoon ki planning kar raheho to maine socha kyon na tumhe wish karti chalu.
sanyo: tum kya lene aayi ho yahan?hume alag kar k jee nahi bhara kya tumhara?
indu: nahi sanyo gussa nahi karte hai!!main to bholenath k darshan karne aayi hoon yahan par.tumhari tarah thodi hoon jo bin bihaye prithvi k saath rang raliya manane aaj gayi?/
sanyo ne kheench kar indu ko ek chanta lagaya....THASH!!! 😡
indu:sanyogita tumne ye achcha nahi kiya....iska hisab to main karke he rahoongi....
arjun:"jao yahan se. abhi ...isi waqt...warna hum tumhari aankhein noch lenge......
indu feels situation ius against her and goes off .....
indu:abhi to main ja rahi hoon par ek baat sun lo...main laut kar aaongi aur tumhari yatra ko kabhi kamyab nahi hone doongi......
sanyo:"prithvi hum bhi chalte hai...hume nahi lagta hai ki hum dono kabhi bhi ek ho sakte hai.isiliye yehi achcha hai ki hum apni poorani yaado ko bhula de aur alag alag yatrpoori kare.....adhe mein yatra chorna ashubh hota haina?
prc thinks:"to aaaj bhi tumhe meri phikar hai sanyo?aaj bhi tum mujhse juda nahi reh sakti ho...is yara k anth tak to main tumhe apna bana he loonga"....😊. 😊
aloud he says😭: jaisi inki ichcha...chalo hum aram karke aage barenge.......looks at sanyo from back....
(gana .....kya pyaar karo o ge mujse....mmujhseeee)
Edited by priyankasen1 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great!!!!!!well done!!!!! 👏 then they continue the yatra.Prithvi thinks that what gori was saying before leaving & he remembers that how bhimdev tried to steal the moorti & then he realises that ghori is also very greedy person & maybe he would be planning to steel the shivling of koteshwar temple. 😒 then Prc tells to his friends about these things & chand says now we should try to find the guptchars of ghori like we had done in bhimdev's case. 😊 then prc says good idea. 😃 we have to do this again. 😒 then jai jai PRITHVIRAJ CHAUHAN song starts 😛 at the background.then scene shifts to sanyo.her friend vaishali asks her.....
vaish: Maharani Sanyogita aap kyun nahin prithvi ke paas vaapas laut jaati hain????
sanyo: VAISHALI!!!yeh tum kya bol rahi ho???main ab prithvi se pyaar nhi karti! 😡
vaish: achha! to aap prithvi ko chhod kar vaapas kyun nahi chali gayin????
sanyo: (thinks for a while & says)yatra ko beech mein chhona apshakun maana jaata hai! 😊
vaish: sanyogita aap apni parchaai se jhoot nahi bol sakti! 😊 aap abhi bhi Prithvi se utna hi pyaar karti hai jitna pehle karti thi! 😊
(sanyo remembers her past spent with prc & song kasam pyaar ki aye sanam starts) 😭
to be continued.....
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Posted: 17 years ago
#97
nice yaar only we people r playing the game hey guys plz join the game..............................[/size=6> 😭
Edited by ranjitkar - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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yes we want more ideas & imagination plz help us!!!!!!!!!! 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
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r a yaar mere ideas bhi ab kam par jayenge...so plzzz its a request guys do continue this story...n malshree kabhi to episode continue kar diye kar...sirf gr8 keh kar chali jati hai?//
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Posted: 17 years ago
prc: pundir,arjun,sanjam,chand hume atark rehna hoga...iis ghori ka kuch bharosa nahi hai...pata nahi kya karne wala hai...
sanjam: tum chinta mat karo prithvi....ajmer ki taraf uthne wale har annkh ko hum noch lenge....
prc:arjun aab tum aramkarlo...maya bhabi bhi thak gayi hogi.....
arjun smiles and leaves....scene shifts to sanyo...
maya: kya mein andar aa sakti hoon nandini???
nandini:ha maya aa jao...tumhe kab se permission ki zaoorat ho gayi....in teen saal o mein anjane mein he sahi par tumne humara bahut dhyan rakha hai....par hamari to ankhein he chali gayi thi isiliye hum tumhe kabhi pehchan nahi sake....achcha kao kya kehna hai???
maya: sanyo....kys aab tum prithvi se pyar nahi karti ho?
sanyo: plz maya choro ye sab...mein prc ka naam bhi nahi sun na chahti hoon....agar wo humse pyar karta to in teen saal o mein kabhi hum adhoondne ki koshish to karta?wo to raja hai na?agar chahta to dhoond he leta....usne aisa nahi kiya...kya use meri laash mili thi jo usne mujhe mara hua samajh liya?maine usi k karan apna bachcha bhi kho diya 😭
maya: par sanyo wo bhi to kush nahi tha na?usne to amne jeena he chor diya tha...janti ho tum....prc ne ajmer chor diya aur mere bete ko raja bana diya aur khud sanyas lene nikal pare the jabbhatakte huye wo tumhare ashram pahunch gaye....
sanyo: sab galat hai maya.....agar aisa hai to indravati humare peeche yahan tak kaise aayi?ghori ko kaise pata chala ki hum zinda hai?aur humare pitaji???wo to bichar is gham mein abhi tak hai ki hum mar chuke hai....
maya(looking serious):ek baat aur sanyo....chachaji ne in 3 saalon mein tumhare pita maharaj jaichand ko bandi banakar rakha hai.....tumhari maut k khabar se e jaichand maharaj toot gaye...tumhari dadi roopsundari ko paralysis ka attack aa gaya tha aur tumhari mata nayantara ki to shock se awaz he chali gayi....chachaji jaimal ne un sab ko karagar mein bandi bana kar rakha hai...isiliye kehti hoon...abhi tumhara kannauj lautna uchit nahi hai....
sanyo:kya keh rahi ho maya?hume kuch karna hoga....
tabhi wahan par chand aur arjun aa jate hai...
Chand: sanyo abhi sahi samay nahi hai...thoda intezar karo....hum sabhi tumhara saath denge....
sanyo:nahi mujhe tumhari ya tumhare dost prc ki madad ki koi zaroorat nahi hai...tum jao yahan se..... 😡
Edited by priyankasen1 - 17 years ago

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