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pratibha singh

@pratsy

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+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: sweetshera
wow really superb ud. Hey kya hua us raat ko yaar,tumne toh suspense create kar diya,anxious 2 no wat happened that night.Waiting for thed nxt part.

thanx sweety..suspense khul jayga ..thoda wait karo😃

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pratibha singh

@pratsy

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: niyaati
wow praty...long part..thanksssss.
nyc part sweety..

vaise madam ye raat ka suspense kya h...

jaldi se bata...

hmm..suspense jald h khul jayga..thoda to wait kar😃

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pratibha singh

@pratsy

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#83

@kanika..dnt worry sweety..sanyogita apna love confess jaroor karege...

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iqra11

@iqra11

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#84

praty ...first of all sorry for late comment

and second of all this update is fabulous...prithvi ki entry its so formal and so superb...correct word

arre huni jaldi se sanyo ka part dikhao and prc's feelings for sanyo...are they the same or changed...jALDI SE NEXT UPDATE KARO PLEASE

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iqra11

@iqra11

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#85

one more thing...can u plzz pm me wen u hav updated

love u loads

shona

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pratibha singh

@pratsy

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#86

hey shona..m glad dat u like it...

i ll pm u..kk..

sanyogfita k entry jaldi hi hogi..dnt worry.....nxt ud me prithvi ka gussa dekhne ko milega...heheeeeeee...........

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pratibha singh

@pratsy

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#87

part-5

arjun goes upstairs.......
prithvi k cabin se 1 candidate nikla..
arjun-wat happen dude..
candidate-i think d boss is mad.........
arjun-ahh..wat
candidate-yeaah..
mujse poochta h tumhari shadi ho gye..
mene kaha yes..
to kehta h..sorry..no job 4 u..
hahh..
ye bhi koi baat h kya..
jiski shadi ho jati h kya vo job nhi karta
arjun-ahh..i knw..bossie thoda khiska hua h
candidate-thoda nhi..poora ..huh..
arjun-baaba re..prithvi kya kar raha h........
suddenly..arjun saw a beautiful lady sitting..........😳😳............................
arjun-hmm..beautiful..
hey sweety..hiee
lady-hello
arjun-so....wat r u doing here
lady-ahh..vhi jo sab kar reh h..
me interview dene ayi hu
arjun-wat.................
lady-why r u shocked..
arjun-tumhe newspaper me add dhyaan se nhi padha tha kya..
bossie ka associate ek ladki...ahh..weird............
lady-excuse me....
arjun-yaa sweety..
prithvi ko apne aaspaas ladkiya bilkul pasand nhi h..
tum andar mat jana plz...
u better go frm here..
lady-no..muje interview dena h...
arjun-hmm.😉.soch lijiye madam..
lady-i m confident..
i m sure i ll get dis job..
arjun-okk..go at ur own risk......
hmm..i think now its ur turn..
all d best
lady-thank u mr..
arjun-mr.arjun..prithvi's best friend n best associate
lady-ohh..nice meeting u sir
she enters prithvi's room..

arjun-haii..she is such a nice girl..hmm..agar prithvi ne ise reject kiya to..ise me apna assisatant rakh luga,...hahha.....
hmm..prithvi to obviously use reject kar dega..oohh..vo mere assistant..wow.....

suddenly maya aati h..
ehem..sir............😃.....arjun sir
arjun-yaa sweety
maya-kya baat h sir..
u r vry happy
arjun-yeaah...
i m...........😃😃..............

suddenly..................they heard a loud voice..................GET OUT......😡😡...........JST GET OUT OF HERE....😡😡..........
arjun-omg..dis is prithvi's voice..
maya-omg..kya hua sir ko..
arjun-kuch nhi..
vo 1 ladki gye h andar interview dene..
maya-wat......................😭....................................................poor girl
arjun-yaa...
maya-aap andar jakar dekhiye..
arjun-naa baba...muje marna h kya..................
maya-pta nhi andar kya chal raha hoga...

prithvi's cabin:
prithvi-listen u..watever..jst go..
muje apne aaspaas ladkiya pasand h....
ladkiyo ko fashion.😡.gossips k alawa kuch nhi ata.,😡..
lady-bt sir..suniye to...mere qualifications..
prithvi-listen u..
plz..go..jst go....
dnt irritate me..
lady-sir..jst hav a look at my qualifications..
prithvi-no way..
plzz go..
otherwise..i ll call d security n throw u out of my cabin.................😡..........

lady-my god..mr.prithvi chauhan..
aapke baare me jo suna tha..aap to usse bhi jyada rude h........😡😡..

prithvi-wat...mere cabin me khadi hokar..tum muje hi rude keh rhe ho................

lady-rude..
hah..
u r nt only rude..
u r arrogant........stupid idiot..selfish.
aapko ladkiyo se baat karne ki tameez nhi h..
me yaha interview dene ayi hu..samjhe aap..
muje koi shauk nhi h aapke sath kaam karne ka...
u listen 2 me carefully...
agar aapko lagta h ki poori duniya aapki respect karti h...den..u r wrong mr.chauhan...
sab aapse darte h..dats y aapki respect karne ka natak karte h....

bt u r disgusting...........
prithvi-get out...
lady-u go 2 hell..

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pratibha singh

@pratsy

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: rumela711926
lovely ya

thanxx jaani........................😃

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KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 15 years ago

#89

Wow, wonderful, superb update👏.It's too good praty⭐️.

Wah,I liked the conversation between Arjun and one of the candidates😆😉😃.

I loved the conversation between prithvi and one of lady candidates😊.

too good dear😆.

Kaya bola oh lady ne prithvi ko, iye bol oh lady hain, kahi sanyo toh nehi😆😊😃.

Post next part soon dear😳.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago

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gunjan kapoor

@gunjankapoor

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: pRaTiBhA.1990

hello evry1......😃

this is my 1 ff........

i m not a gud writer..bt i ll try my best.......

my story is all about love....revenge.....pain

my story revolver around childhood love.......

is childhood love true.......or its just an attraction....

*~*childhood love*~*

It all started out with a peck on a cheek,
Then a small secret we swore to keep,
Isn't childhood love just so sweet?
*
He gave me a few present and flowers each time,
He even drew me a small heart that says, "Your Mine,"
How can cupid make true love ever so blind?
*
Through years sadly we grew apart,
But your face will never leave my heart,
It wasn't an ending, it was a start.
*
You started looking at other girls,
Leaving me alone in the old world,
What happened to all those sweet whispeers and words?
*
I watched you from afar,
Making sure you were in no harm,
Yet secretly wishing you were in MY arms..!!

my story is abt 2 best frenz...prithvi n sanyogita........their love......friendship......misunderstandings...revenge........

seems interesting...poem is very nice..

i ll read n comment

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