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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey shona r u updating it nw me waiting to read it nw😉
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Originally posted by: sweetshera

Hi Shona ur ff is really gr8. U have wonderfully described it dear and the exchanges of dialogues r also gr8.I just love ur ff. Plz update soon. Waiting anxiously.

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Originally posted by: maria_awan

hey shona r u updating it nw me waiting to read it nw😉

k i wil pm u ...hold on
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Originally posted by: gunjankapoor

i read ur story..its very interesting...plz pm me when u update......keep it up😃

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Originally posted by: pRaTiBhA.1990

hey shona...vry gud yaar..

ye indravati kitni idiot h....i hate her..sach me..
hehe..

thanks
certainly agreed...i hate indravati..but dekhna ye kya karthi hai,,,age ...age
thanks for reading.....
i love it wen u say hehehehe😛😊
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Dedicated to ma Maharani ji....Rakhi di....and sowi for making u wait prcians and rakhi di

Precap: Sanyo's introduction, Maharaj Someshwar and Maharani kamalavati and Pratha have reached kannauj. Prithvi and his friends are on their way to Kannauj, with his nana. All in kannauj are arranging a big feast and a very big party pooja for Sanyo.

Early in the morning, there are loads of royal servants in the palace roaming about and preparing arrangements, whereas the people of kannauj are outside celebrating, and making sure that this day is remembered by all.

In Rajmata Roospundari's chamber, there are 2 sisters who are very happy and are very eager to welcome their grand daughter.

Roospundari : pata nahi wo kaisi ho gi???...ab tho wo bahot bari hogayi na

Kamalavati is smiling away on her sister's love for her grand daughter.

Kamalavati : bas didi'aap bhi na'.jab sanyogita aye gi na'

Roospundari : pata nahi kya hoga'meri bachi mujhe pachane gi bhi nahi???

Kamalavati : kyun nahi pachane gi wo apni dadi ko'aaj bahot hi bara din hai'.sanyo aaj aye gi aur phir kuch dino mein usse ka vivaah paka hoga

Roospundari : isi baat ka tho dar hai'jaichand se kaha tha ke abhi wo choti hai'.baad me vivaah karle ge'likin nahi'kamalavati tumhe kya lagta hai'kya Sanyo maan jaye gi apni shaadi ke liye????

Kamalavati : sach kahu tho mujhe lagta hai ke wo maan jaye''jaichand ki khushi ke liye wo kuch bi kar sakti hai

Roospundari was aware of the fact that her beloved granddaughter loved her father, therefore always listened to him as an obedient child'even though if it was against her wishes; but she wanted to hear the truth from her sister, to make her calmer.

(THE SCENE SHIFTS TO JAICHAND IN HIS DARBAR)

In the darbar, all are sitting in the respected seats. Both the sisters come and sit in their seats and are watching the dance played by one of the villagers. One of the servants come and informs Maharaj Jaichand that King Prithvi and his friends have arrived.

Maharani Kamalvati gets up and runs to the entrance of the palace. Everyone comes and greets their new guests. Rajmata Roospundari comes and performs the arti. Prithvi looks at her and smiles. Roospundari smiles back. Prithvi takes his blessings along with his friends. Kamalvati hugs Prithvi and kisses him on his forehead.

Kamalavati : kaise ho beta??

Prithvi: mein teek hu maa

Jaichand interrupts both the mother and the son.

Jaichand : anne mein koi taqleef tho nahi hu na??

Prithvi comes forward and tells him that they had no difficulties when coming. Jaichand hugs Prithvi, as prithvi hugs back. Prithvi meets his father and is very delighted to meet his younger sister Pratha. Jaichand orders his sainiks to take Prithvi and his friends to their chambers and says to them to have some rest, and that they will be gathered again in the evening.

As per as Jaichand's commands, everything happens as his says. Everyone in the palace gets ready and is having something to eat. All are sitting down as Jaichand is standing and is looking in the direction of the entrance of the palace.

Maharaj Anangpal notices this and says aloud, "kya baat hai'.apne Maharaj apni Rajkumari ka intezaar bahot hi be sabri se kar rahe hai"

Jaichand smiles and turns around.

Rajmata looks at Kamalvati and smiles and continues eating. Prithvi looks at his friends. Some of his friends are happy whereas the other 'indravati makes a face and looks at Chamki and then continues eating. Prithvi looks down and then at Jaichand. Jaichand walks to his chamber. Prithvi finishes his lunch and goes to his chamber and gathers his friends too. He reveals his plans to his friend, and informs them that their mission should start as soon as possible. However, maharaj anangpal overhears their conversation and tells Prithvi that they should wait for the princess's arrival first, and can start tomorrow to complete their mission. Prithvi listens and agrees to his nana.

Sanyogita comes to India with her friends'..she feels the breeze of her motherland and closes her eyes'Sanyo's friends look at her and say to her that they should move on'Sanyo smiles and agrees'the three of the gals move ahead to the unknowing country that they left many years ago.

Here Prithvi receives a sandesh from a village called Udaipur. He is told to reach there as soon as possible by a young man'.he is told that there village is in danger as some men are trying to take over their village. Prithvi informs is nana and asks his friends to get ready as they will have to leave right away. Prithvi gets dressed as a villager and departs from kannauj; with his four friends.

Here Sanyogita is moving ahead with her friends. She and her friends ask some local villagers for directions to the kannauj. As Sanyo moves on she pays the villagers too. Both the three gals reach a village where there is a mela taking place. They enjoy and have loads of fun. Some of the people think who they are and wonder if they are from another country the way they are dressed. All the villagers are memorized by Sanyo's beauty and wonder if she is a princess but are unaware of her identity; they talk about her prettiness.

On the other hand in kannauj; the king Maharaj Jaichand receives a sandesh from Sanyogita. In the letter Sanyogita has concluded the fact that she will not be able to come to India'she will be there in a few days'she also apologies her father and says to him'ho sake tho hume maaf kar dijiye ga'hum india aaj nahi a sakte'.likin hum wada karthe hai ke hum chand dino mein a jaye ge' umeed karthe hai ke aap humse naraj na ho'aap ki beti sanyogita

Reading the letter a tear falls from her father's eyes; Nayantra his wife asks him what the matter is'however, he does not reply and orders his people and his kingdom to postpone all the arrangements and the preparations. Hearing this the royal members ask Jaichand what the matter is and why'Jaichand informs them'.everyone is dis-heartened. Some of the guest tells Jaichand that they have to leave for their kingdom's as their people will be waiting and that they can not stay for long. Hearing this Jaichand agrees and bids farewell to his entire guests. Maharaj Someshawar and his wife too ask the permission to leave kannauj and to go to back to their respected palaces.

It is night time, in kannauj all the guests have left; kannauj is completely covered by silence. Everyone has gone to sleep.

Prithvi and his friends are on their way to Udaipur; but due to a lot of travelling they decide to take some rest. Everyone agrees. However, prithvi tells them that there is a village close by and that they should travel abit further on to reach the close by village.

On the other hand, Sanyo, Sammy and Rupali are walking ahead. Sammy asks Sanyo whether her father is aware of the fact that she has arrived.

Sammy: Sanyo, kya tumhare Dad ko patha hai, ke tum yaha india aye ho

Sanyo has tears in her eyes.....She continues walking ahead.....and ignores Sammy.

Rupali : guys, bahot travel kar liya ..... lets take some rest

Sammy : yaha paas mein ek village hai...waha chal ke koi room rent karle ge

Rupali : haan ye teek rahe ga

Sanyo comes out of her imagination and asks Sammy that how does she know that there is a village close by. Sammy tells Sanyo that its part of her research and..... takes out a map.....

Sammy : don't worry Sanyo...i promise you that you will get to your family in a couple of days, so will Rupali and so will i...peace at last...just don't worry my princess

Sanyo is convinced by Sammy and smiles. Sammy again asks Sanyo that does her father know that she is here...Sanyo tells Sammy that she sent her father a letter telling him that she will be coming today...but no one has come to receive her....

POINT TO THINK ABOUT BELOVED READERS'

Sanyo has arrived in India as she told her father; but her father received a sandesh from Sanyo that she will be coming in a few days....sanyo did not send it then who did??????? Is Sanyo in danger?....does an enemy of Maharaj Jaichand want to finish their enmity with Jaichand by hurting Sanyo????

Prc reaches the village with his friends.

Prithvi : aaj raat hum yaha rest karge...aur kal suba Udaipur ki taraf bare ge

Arjun : teek hai...tho chale

Pundir : tumhe tho har waqt araam karna hotha hai...koi aur kaam nahi kar sakte???

Arjun : raat ko sab sleep karthe hai...aur jo ghosts hothe hai wo raat ko ghumte hai...agar tumhe ghumna hai tho koi problem nahi

Pundir : acha tho ab mein tumhe ghost lagta hu????

Arjun : wo tho tum ho

Prithvi smiles at his friends. Arjun and Pundir stand infront of him whereas Chand and Sanjham stand on the either side of Prithvi.

Prithvi : acha...suno...mujhe Prithvi math bulana....

Sanjham : tumhe prithvi nahi bulaye ge..tho kya bulaye

Prithvi : kuch bi likin prithvi nahi

Arjun : soch lo.....

Arjun smirks....Prithvi looks at him

Arjun : natkhat....ye teek rahe ga...hum sab tumhe yahi bulaye ge

Everyone starts to laugh accept Prithvi.

Prithvi : bahot hasi arahi tum sab ko

Arjun : haan...

Prithvi : mein serious hu Arjun, mujhe koi Prithvi math bulana....

Sanjham : tho kya bulaye tumhe???

Prithvi : mujhe.....surya bulana

All his friends agree.....they move ahead to the entrance of the village. They look around.

Sanyo with her frends have already arrived in the same village. Sammy tells Rupali and Sanyo that Sanyo should not reveal her identity that she is a Rajkumari; otherwise people will start to take advantage out of them.....the three gals agree and come up with a few names for Sanyo to choose.

Sammy: angel, sweetie

Rupali : gita, sita, rani

Sammy: ye kaise naam hai...gita...never...sita....kabhi nahi...meri bari...alex...jazz....shirley...ash

Rupali : hum india mein hai aur ye naam bilkul nahi chale ge

Sanyo: nandini....ye teek rahe ga

Sammy puts her arm around Sanyo and says ..."ye tho bahot acha naam hai...nandini ji"

Sanyo smiles; they move ahead. The village people look at Sanyo and see her and start to gossip about her. Due to Sanyo's prettiness, many of the villagers start to talk about her...and wonder if she is a princess....Sanyo feels uncomfortable...many of the villagers see Sanyo and smile at her...the villagers are waiting for Sanyo to ask so they can fulfil her order as soon as possible. Rupali walks besides Sanyo and Sammy wonders off.

Sammy is looking around, she sees a few boys asking a man for a spare room which they can use for the night to take rest. The man is about to agree; when Sammy comes.

The man is an owner of the spare house. Sammy goes to the man and asks him that can she too wants to hire a room....the man does not say anything.

The boys are none other than Prithvi and his four frends.

Pundir : hum yaha pehle aye hai...

Sammy : acha...tho kamre par tumhara naam likha huwa hai

Pundir : jo bhi ho...kamra mera aur mere dosto ka hai

Prithvi and the rest of the frends are standing behind Pundir; they wonder where Sammy has come from because of the way she is dressed.

Arjun : pundir....larki hai jane dho...meri pyaari behen kamra aap ka hai

Pundir shouts : Arjun, tum chup karo...ye larki hothi hi aisi hai....

The owner of the house does not know what to do; therefore he stays quiet.

Sammy : kya kaha tumne

Chand : aap chup kijiye...yaha hum pehle aye hai...

Prithvi and his frends are very annoyed now...

Sammy : batmeez....patha nahi apne aap ko kya samjhte hai...idiots

Pundir : kya kaha tumne

Sanjham : lagta hai...apni language mein boli

At that time Sanyo and Rupali reach.....Rupali comes forward and stands next to Sammy....

Rupali : bhai saab aap humme kamra dijiye....sirf aaj raat ke liye....larko ka kya hai...wo bahar bhi so sakte hai

Chand is very annoyed...."kya kaha tumne"

The man says to the gals..."dekhiye mein aap ki baat samjhata hu ...isliye..."

The man is interrupted by a sweet and innocent voice that comes behind from Sammy....Sanyo comes and stands near Sammy

Sanyo : soch lijiye

All the boys and the man keep staring at Sanyo....Prithvi looks at Sanyo and is shocked to see how beautiful Sanyo is......Prithvi stands in front of Sanyo.....everyone is memorized with Sanyo's beauty.

The man without a say, hands over the keys to Sanyo....the boys are shocked whereas the gals get happy.....

Pundir : aap aisa kaise kar sakte hai...aapke andar koi insaniyat naam ki cheez hai.....ya nahi

The man smiles at Sanyo.....and ignores the boys.....

Sanyo : tho hum kaha the....kitne money room rent karne ka hai???

The man : aap ke liye free......

Prithvi luks at Sanyo ...."tum apne aap ko samjhti kya ho....???? aur ye"

Sanyo : hum tum se baat nahi kar rahe....bewakoof

Pundir :aap ne mere dost ko kya bulaya

Sammy : jo tumne suna

Sanyo looks away with attitude.....Sammy and Pundir have an argument...whereas Rupali and Chand

Sanyo gets angry....Prithvi continues staring at Sanyo....

Prithvi cums near Sanyo, sanyo fold her arms...prithvi says ."tumhe tho bahot khushi ho rahi hogi"

Sanyo: tumhari problem kya hai???....she turns in the direction of where her frends are yelling and shouts....

Rupali and Sammy and CHand and Pundir stay quite......

Sanyo : kitne bewakoof hai ye larke....ye ek ghar hai ....jo ye uncle de rahe he hume.....ghar ka half tum larko ke liye aur ghar ka dhusra half hum larkiyon ka hai...teek hai....hum yaha sirf aaj ke liye hai....

The man: wa....kya khoob kaha apne...aap tho bahot hi samjhdar ho...ye larke tho useless hai.....

The man tells the boys that they need to pay...the boys pay for the rent....whereas Sanyo just ignores them all and goes inside the house....

Prithvi : apne aapko samjhti kya hai...

The man goes when he gets his money.....Prithvi's frends are outside....they say to prithvi...if they knew who he was...then those gals wud neva talk to him like that..

My precious prcians...hope u enjoyed it....do comment.....do feel free to say to what u wanna see in the here coming updates....AND DO PRESS THE LIKE BUTTON IF u liked ma update....and last of all thanks for reading it...love u all....

Edited by letsrockshona - 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: letsrockshona

Dedicated to ma Maharani ji....Rakhi di....and sowi for making u wait prcians and rakhi di

Precap: Sanyo's introduction, Maharaj Someshwar and Maharani kamalavati and Pratha have reached kannauj. Prithvi and his friends are on their way to Kannauj, with his nana. All in kannauj are arranging a big feast and a very big party pooja for Sanyo.

Early in the morning, there are loads of royal servants in the palace roaming about and preparing arrangements, whereas the people of kannauj are outside celebrating, and making sure that this day is remembered by all.

In Rajmata Roospundari's chamber, there are 2 sisters who are very happy and are very eager to welcome their grand daughter.

Roospundari : pata nahi wo kaisi ho gi???...ab tho wo bahot bari hogayi na

Kamalavati is smiling away on her sister's love for her grand daughter.

Kamalavati : bas didi'aap bhi na'.jab sanyogita aye gi na'

Roospundari : pata nahi kya hoga'meri bachi mujhe pachane gi bhi nahi???

Kamalavati : kyun nahi pachane gi wo apni dadi ko'aaj bahot hi bara din hai'.sanyo aaj aye gi aur phir kuch dino mein usse ka vivaah paka hoga

Roospundari : isi baat ka tho dar hai'jaichand se kaha tha ke abhi wo choti hai'.baad me vivaah karle ge'likin nahi'kamalavati tumhe kya lagta hai'kya Sanyo maan jaye gi apni shaadi ke liye????

Kamalavati : sach kahu tho mujhe lagta hai ke wo maan jaye''jaichand ki khushi ke liye wo kuch bi kar sakti hai

Roospundari was aware of the fact that her beloved granddaughter loved her father, therefore always listened to him as an obedient child'even though if it was against her wishes; but she wanted to hear the truth from her sister, to make her calmer.

(THE SCENE SHIFTS TO JAICHAND IN HIS DARBAR)

In the darbar, all are sitting in the respected seats. Both the sisters come and sit in their seats and are watching the dance played by one of the villagers. One of the servants come and informs Maharaj Jaichand that King Prithvi and his friends have arrived.

Maharani Kamalvati gets up and runs to the entrance of the palace. Everyone comes and greets their new guests. Rajmata Roospundari comes and performs the arti. Prithvi looks at her and smiles. Roospundari smiles back. Prithvi takes his blessings along with his friends. Kamalvati hugs Prithvi and kisses him on his forehead.

Kamalavati : kaise ho beta??

Prithvi: mein teek hu maa

Jaichand interrupts both the mother and the son.

Jaichand : anne mein koi taqleef tho nahi hu na??

Prithvi comes forward and tells him that they had no difficulties when coming. Jaichand hugs Prithvi, as prithvi hugs back. Prithvi meets his father and is very delighted to meet his younger sister Pratha. Jaichand orders his sainiks to take Prithvi and his friends to their chambers and says to them to have some rest, and that they will be gathered again in the evening.

As per as Jaichand's commands, everything happens as his says. Everyone in the palace gets ready and is having something to eat. All are sitting down as Jaichand is standing and is looking in the direction of the entrance of the palace.

Maharaj Anangpal notices this and says aloud, "kya baat hai'.apne Maharaj apni Rajkumari ka intezaar bahot hi be sabri se kar rahe hai"

Jaichand smiles and turns around.

Rajmata looks at Kamalvati and smiles and continues eating. Prithvi looks at his friends. Some of his friends are happy whereas the other 'indravati makes a face and looks at Chamki and then continues eating. Prithvi looks down and then at Jaichand. Jaichand walks to his chamber. Prithvi finishes his lunch and goes to his chamber and gathers his friends too. He reveals his plans to his friend, and informs them that their mission should start as soon as possible. However, maharaj anangpal overhears their conversation and tells Prithvi that they should wait for the princess's arrival first, and can start tomorrow to complete their mission. Prithvi listens and agrees to his nana.

Sanyogita comes to India with her friends'..she feels the breeze of her motherland and closes her eyes'Sanyo's friends look at her and say to her that they should move on'Sanyo smiles and agrees'the three of the gals move ahead to the unknowing country that they left many years ago.

Here Prithvi receives a sandesh from a village called Udaipur. He is told to reach there as soon as possible by a young man'.he is told that there village is in danger as some men are trying to take over their village. Prithvi informs is nana and asks his friends to get ready as they will have to leave right away. Prithvi gets dressed as a villager and departs from kannauj; with his four friends.

Here Sanyogita is moving ahead with her friends. She and her friends ask some local villagers for directions to the kannauj. As Sanyo moves on she pays the villagers too. Both the three gals reach a village where there is a mela taking place. They enjoy and have loads of fun. Some of the people think who they are and wonder if they are from another country the way they are dressed. All the villagers are memorized by Sanyo's beauty and wonder if she is a princess but are unaware of her identity; they talk about her prettiness.

On the other hand in kannauj; the king Maharaj Jaichand receives a sandesh from Sanyogita. In the letter Sanyogita has concluded the fact that she will not be able to come to India'she will be there in a few days'she also apologies her father and says to him'ho sake tho hume maaf kar dijiye ga'hum india aaj nahi a sakte'.likin hum wada karthe hai ke hum chand dino mein a jaye ge' umeed karthe hai ke aap humse naraj na ho'aap ki beti sanyogita

Reading the letter a tear falls from her father's eyes; Nayantra his wife asks him what the matter is'however, he does not reply and orders his people and his kingdom to postpone all the arrangements and the preparations. Hearing this the royal members ask Jaichand what the matter is and why'Jaichand informs them'.everyone is dis-heartened. Some of the guest tells Jaichand that they have to leave for their kingdom's as their people will be waiting and that they can not stay for long. Hearing this Jaichand agrees and bids farewell to his entire guests. Maharaj Someshawar and his wife too ask the permission to leave kannauj and to go to back to their respected palaces.

It is night time, in kannauj all the guests have left; kannauj is completely covered by silence. Everyone has gone to sleep.

Prithvi and his friends are on their way to Udaipur; but due to a lot of travelling they decide to take some rest. Everyone agrees. However, prithvi tells them that there is a village close by and that they should travel abit further on to reach the close by village.

On the other hand, Sanyo, Sammy and Rupali are walking ahead. Sammy asks Sanyo whether her father is aware of the fact that she has arrived.

Sammy: Sanyo, kya tumhare Dad ko patha hai, ke tum yaha india aye ho

Sanyo has tears in her eyes.....She continues walking ahead.....and ignores Sammy.

Rupali : guys, bahot travel kar liya ..... lets take some rest

Sammy : yaha paas mein ek village hai...waha chal ke koi room rent karle ge

Rupali : haan ye teek rahe ga

Sanyo comes out of her imagination and asks Sammy that how does she know that there is a village close by. Sammy tells Sanyo that its part of her research and..... takes out a map.....

Sammy : don't worry Sanyo...i promise you that you will get to your family in a couple of days, so will Rupali and so will i...peace at last...just don't worry my princess

Sanyo is convinced by Sammy and smiles. Sammy again asks Sanyo that does her father know that she is here...Sanyo tells Sammy that she sent her father a letter telling him that she will be coming today...but no one has come to receive her....

POINT TO THINK ABOUT BELOVED READERS'

Sanyo has arrived in India as she told her father; but her father received a sandesh from Sanyo that she will be coming in a few days....sanyo did not send it then who did??????? Is Sanyo in danger?....does an enemy of Maharaj Jaichand want to finish their enmity with Jaichand by hurting Sanyo????

Prc reaches the village with his friends.

Prithvi : aaj raat hum yaha rest karge...aur kal suba Udaipur ki taraf bare ge

Arjun : teek hai...tho chale

Pundir : tumhe tho har waqt araam karna hotha hai...koi aur kaam nahi kar sakte???

Arjun : raat ko sab sleep karthe hai...aur jo ghosts hothe hai wo raat ko ghumte hai...agar tumhe ghumna hai tho koi problem nahi

Pundir : acha tho ab mein tumhe ghost lagta hu????

Arjun : wo tho tum ho

Prithvi smiles at his friends. Arjun and Pundir stand infront of him whereas Chand and Sanjham stand on the either side of Prithvi.

Prithvi : acha...suno...mujhe Prithvi math bulana....

Sanjham : tumhe prithvi nahi bulaye ge..tho kya bulaye

Prithvi : kuch bi likin prithvi nahi

Arjun : soch lo.....

Arjun smirks....Prithvi looks at him

Arjun : natkhat....ye teek rahe ga...hum sab tumhe yahi bulaye ge

Everyone starts to laugh accept Prithvi.

Prithvi : bahot hasi arahi tum sab ko

Arjun : haan...

Prithvi : mein serious hu Arjun, mujhe koi Prithvi math bulana....

Sanjham : tho kya bulaye tumhe???

Prithvi : mujhe.....surya bulana

All his friends agree.....they move ahead to the entrance of the village. They look around.

Sanyo with her frends have already arrived in the same village. Sammy tells Rupali and Sanyo that Sanyo should not reveal her identity that she is a Rajkumari; otherwise people will start to take advantage out of them.....the three gals agree and come up with a few names for Sanyo to choose.

Sammy: angel, sweetie

Rupali : gita, sita, rani

Sammy: ye kaise naam hai...gita...never...sita....kabhi nahi...meri bari...alex...jazz....shirley...ash

Rupali : hum india mein hai aur ye naam bilkul nahi chale ge

Sanyo: nandini....ye teek rahe ga

Sammy puts her arm around Sanyo and says ..."ye tho bahot acha naam hai...nandini ji"

Sanyo smiles; they move ahead. The village people look at Sanyo and see her and start to gossip about her. Due to Sanyo's prettiness, many of the villagers start to talk about her...and wonder if she is a princess....Sanyo feels uncomfortable...many of the villagers see Sanyo and smile at her...the villagers are waiting for Sanyo to ask so they can fulfil her order as soon as possible. Rupali walks besides Sanyo and Sammy wonders off.

Sammy is looking around, she sees a few boys asking a man for a spare room which they can use for the night to take rest. The man is about to agree; when Sammy comes.

The man is an owner of the spare house. Sammy goes to the man and asks him that can she too wants to hire a room....the man does not say anything.

The boys are none other than Prithvi and his four frends.

Pundir : hum yaha pehle aye hai...

Sammy : acha...tho kamre par tumhara naam likha huwa hai

Pundir : jo bhi ho...kamra mera aur mere dosto ka hai

Prithvi and the rest of the frends are standing behind Pundir; they wonder where Sammy has come from because of the way she is dressed.

Arjun : pundir....larki hai jane dho...meri pyaari behen kamra aap ka hai

Pundir shouts : Arjun, tum chup karo...ye larki hothi hi aisi hai....

The owner of the house does not know what to do; therefore he stays quiet.

Sammy : kya kaha tumne

Chand : aap chup kijiye...yaha hum pehle aye hai...

Prithvi and his frends are very annoyed now...

Sammy : batmeez....patha nahi apne aap ko kya samjhte hai...idiots

Pundir : kya kaha tumne

Sanjham : lagta hai...apni language mein boli

At that time Sanyo and Rupali reach.....Rupali comes forward and stands next to Sammy....

Rupali : bhai saab aap humme kamra dijiye....sirf aaj raat ke liye....larko ka kya hai...wo bahar bhi so sakte hai

Chand is very annoyed...."kya kaha tumne"

The man says to the gals..."dekhiye mein aap ki baat samjhata hu ...isliye..."

The man is interrupted by a sweet and innocent voice that comes behind from Sammy....Sanyo comes and stands near Sammy

Sanyo : soch lijiye

All the boys and the man keep staring at Sanyo....Prithvi looks at Sanyo and is shocked to see how beautiful Sanyo is......Prithvi stands in front of Sanyo.....everyone is memorized with Sanyo's beauty.

The man without a say, hands over the keys to Sanyo....the boys are shocked whereas the gals get happy.....

Pundir : aap aisa kaise kar sakte hai...aapke andar koi insaniyat naam ki cheez hai.....ya nahi

The man smiles at Sanyo.....and ignores the boys.....

Sanyo : tho hum kaha the....kitne money room rent karne ka hai???

The man : aap ke liye free......

Prithvi luks at Sanyo ...."tum apne aap ko samjhti kya ho....???? aur ye"

Sanyo : hum tum se baat nahi kar rahe....bewakoof

Pundir :aap ne mere dost ko kya bulaya

Sammy : jo tumne suna

Sanyo looks away with attitude.....Sammy and Pundir have an argument...whereas Rupali and Chand

Sanyo gets angry....Prithvi continues staring at Sanyo....

Prithvi cums near Sanyo, sanyo fold her arms...prithvi says ."tumhe tho bahot khushi ho rahi hogi"

Sanyo: tumhari problem kya hai???....she turns in the direction of where her frends are yelling and shouts....

Rupali and Sammy and CHand and Pundir stay quite......

Sanyo : kitne bewakoof hai ye larke....ye ek ghar hai ....jo ye uncle de rahe he hume.....ghar ka half tum larko ke liye aur ghar ka dhusra half hum larkiyon ka hai...teek hai....hum yaha sirf aaj ke liye hai....

The man: wa....kya khoob kaha apne...aap tho bahot hi samjhdar ho...ye larke tho useless hai.....

The man tells the boys that they need to pay...the boys pay for the rent....whereas Sanyo just ignores them all and goes inside the house....

Prithvi : apne aapko samjhti kya hai...

The man goes when he gets his money.....Prithvi's frends are outside....they say to prithvi...if they knew who he was...then those gals wud neva talk to him like that..

My precious prcians...hope u enjoyed it....do comment.....do feel free to say to what u wanna see in the here coming updates....AND DO PRESS THE LIKE BUTTON IF u liked ma update....and last of all thanks for reading it...love u all....

thanks shona i loved it was awsome yaar kiya style hai sanyo ka 😆😆😆free mein hi house mil gaya 😆😆aur larkay becharay paisa day kar aur insult kay baad larkiyon kay hath se😆nice really nice jaldi update karna donot took it lond plz plz plz plz jaldi update karna sweeti
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Originally posted by: letsrockshona

k i wil pm u ...hold on

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: letsrockshona

Dedicated to ma Maharani ji....Rakhi di....and sowi for making u wait prcians and rakhi di

Precap: Sanyo's introduction, Maharaj Someshwar and Maharani kamalavati and Pratha have reached kannauj. Prithvi and his friends are on their way to Kannauj, with his nana. All in kannauj are arranging a big feast and a very big party pooja for Sanyo.

Early in the morning, there are loads of royal servants in the palace roaming about and preparing arrangements, whereas the people of kannauj are outside celebrating, and making sure that this day is remembered by all.

In Rajmata Roospundari's chamber, there are 2 sisters who are very happy and are very eager to welcome their grand daughter.

Roospundari : pata nahi wo kaisi ho gi???...ab tho wo bahot bari hogayi na

Kamalavati is smiling away on her sister's love for her grand daughter.

Kamalavati : bas didi'aap bhi na'.jab sanyogita aye gi na'

Roospundari : pata nahi kya hoga'meri bachi mujhe pachane gi bhi nahi???

Kamalavati : kyun nahi pachane gi wo apni dadi ko'aaj bahot hi bara din hai'.sanyo aaj aye gi aur phir kuch dino mein usse ka vivaah paka hoga

Roospundari : isi baat ka tho dar hai'jaichand se kaha tha ke abhi wo choti hai'.baad me vivaah karle ge'likin nahi'kamalavati tumhe kya lagta hai'kya Sanyo maan jaye gi apni shaadi ke liye????

Kamalavati : sach kahu tho mujhe lagta hai ke wo maan jaye''jaichand ki khushi ke liye wo kuch bi kar sakti hai

Roospundari was aware of the fact that her beloved granddaughter loved her father, therefore always listened to him as an obedient child'even though if it was against her wishes; but she wanted to hear the truth from her sister, to make her calmer.

(THE SCENE SHIFTS TO JAICHAND IN HIS DARBAR)

In the darbar, all are sitting in the respected seats. Both the sisters come and sit in their seats and are watching the dance played by one of the villagers. One of the servants come and informs Maharaj Jaichand that King Prithvi and his friends have arrived.

Maharani Kamalvati gets up and runs to the entrance of the palace. Everyone comes and greets their new guests. Rajmata Roospundari comes and performs the arti. Prithvi looks at her and smiles. Roospundari smiles back. Prithvi takes his blessings along with his friends. Kamalvati hugs Prithvi and kisses him on his forehead.

Kamalavati : kaise ho beta??

Prithvi: mein teek hu maa

Jaichand interrupts both the mother and the son.

Jaichand : anne mein koi taqleef tho nahi hu na??

Prithvi comes forward and tells him that they had no difficulties when coming. Jaichand hugs Prithvi, as prithvi hugs back. Prithvi meets his father and is very delighted to meet his younger sister Pratha. Jaichand orders his sainiks to take Prithvi and his friends to their chambers and says to them to have some rest, and that they will be gathered again in the evening.

As per as Jaichand's commands, everything happens as his says. Everyone in the palace gets ready and is having something to eat. All are sitting down as Jaichand is standing and is looking in the direction of the entrance of the palace.

Maharaj Anangpal notices this and says aloud, "kya baat hai'.apne Maharaj apni Rajkumari ka intezaar bahot hi be sabri se kar rahe hai"

Jaichand smiles and turns around.

Rajmata looks at Kamalvati and smiles and continues eating. Prithvi looks at his friends. Some of his friends are happy whereas the other 'indravati makes a face and looks at Chamki and then continues eating. Prithvi looks down and then at Jaichand. Jaichand walks to his chamber. Prithvi finishes his lunch and goes to his chamber and gathers his friends too. He reveals his plans to his friend, and informs them that their mission should start as soon as possible. However, maharaj anangpal overhears their conversation and tells Prithvi that they should wait for the princess's arrival first, and can start tomorrow to complete their mission. Prithvi listens and agrees to his nana.

Sanyogita comes to India with her friends'..she feels the breeze of her motherland and closes her eyes'Sanyo's friends look at her and say to her that they should move on'Sanyo smiles and agrees'the three of the gals move ahead to the unknowing country that they left many years ago.

Here Prithvi receives a sandesh from a village called Udaipur. He is told to reach there as soon as possible by a young man'.he is told that there village is in danger as some men are trying to take over their village. Prithvi informs is nana and asks his friends to get ready as they will have to leave right away. Prithvi gets dressed as a villager and departs from kannauj; with his four friends.

Here Sanyogita is moving ahead with her friends. She and her friends ask some local villagers for directions to the kannauj. As Sanyo moves on she pays the villagers too. Both the three gals reach a village where there is a mela taking place. They enjoy and have loads of fun. Some of the people think who they are and wonder if they are from another country the way they are dressed. All the villagers are memorized by Sanyo's beauty and wonder if she is a princess but are unaware of her identity; they talk about her prettiness.

On the other hand in kannauj; the king Maharaj Jaichand receives a sandesh from Sanyogita. In the letter Sanyogita has concluded the fact that she will not be able to come to India'she will be there in a few days'she also apologies her father and says to him'ho sake tho hume maaf kar dijiye ga'hum india aaj nahi a sakte'.likin hum wada karthe hai ke hum chand dino mein a jaye ge' umeed karthe hai ke aap humse naraj na ho'aap ki beti sanyogita

Reading the letter a tear falls from her father's eyes; Nayantra his wife asks him what the matter is'however, he does not reply and orders his people and his kingdom to postpone all the arrangements and the preparations. Hearing this the royal members ask Jaichand what the matter is and why'Jaichand informs them'.everyone is dis-heartened. Some of the guest tells Jaichand that they have to leave for their kingdom's as their people will be waiting and that they can not stay for long. Hearing this Jaichand agrees and bids farewell to his entire guests. Maharaj Someshawar and his wife too ask the permission to leave kannauj and to go to back to their respected palaces.

It is night time, in kannauj all the guests have left; kannauj is completely covered by silence. Everyone has gone to sleep.

Prithvi and his friends are on their way to Udaipur; but due to a lot of travelling they decide to take some rest. Everyone agrees. However, prithvi tells them that there is a village close by and that they should travel abit further on to reach the close by village.

On the other hand, Sanyo, Sammy and Rupali are walking ahead. Sammy asks Sanyo whether her father is aware of the fact that she has arrived.

Sammy: Sanyo, kya tumhare Dad ko patha hai, ke tum yaha india aye ho

Sanyo has tears in her eyes.....She continues walking ahead.....and ignores Sammy.

Rupali : guys, bahot travel kar liya ..... lets take some rest

Sammy : yaha paas mein ek village hai...waha chal ke koi room rent karle ge

Rupali : haan ye teek rahe ga

Sanyo comes out of her imagination and asks Sammy that how does she know that there is a village close by. Sammy tells Sanyo that its part of her research and..... takes out a map.....

Sammy : don't worry Sanyo...i promise you that you will get to your family in a couple of days, so will Rupali and so will i...peace at last...just don't worry my princess

Sanyo is convinced by Sammy and smiles. Sammy again asks Sanyo that does her father know that she is here...Sanyo tells Sammy that she sent her father a letter telling him that she will be coming today...but no one has come to receive her....

POINT TO THINK ABOUT BELOVED READERS'

Sanyo has arrived in India as she told her father; but her father received a sandesh from Sanyo that she will be coming in a few days....sanyo did not send it then who did??????? Is Sanyo in danger?....does an enemy of Maharaj Jaichand want to finish their enmity with Jaichand by hurting Sanyo????

Prc reaches the village with his friends.

Prithvi : aaj raat hum yaha rest karge...aur kal suba Udaipur ki taraf bare ge

Arjun : teek hai...tho chale

Pundir : tumhe tho har waqt araam karna hotha hai...koi aur kaam nahi kar sakte???

Arjun : raat ko sab sleep karthe hai...aur jo ghosts hothe hai wo raat ko ghumte hai...agar tumhe ghumna hai tho koi problem nahi

Pundir : acha tho ab mein tumhe ghost lagta hu????

Arjun : wo tho tum ho

Prithvi smiles at his friends. Arjun and Pundir stand infront of him whereas Chand and Sanjham stand on the either side of Prithvi.

Prithvi : acha...suno...mujhe Prithvi math bulana....

Sanjham : tumhe prithvi nahi bulaye ge..tho kya bulaye

Prithvi : kuch bi likin prithvi nahi

Arjun : soch lo.....

Arjun smirks....Prithvi looks at him

Arjun : natkhat....ye teek rahe ga...hum sab tumhe yahi bulaye ge

Everyone starts to laugh accept Prithvi.

Prithvi : bahot hasi arahi tum sab ko

Arjun : haan...

Prithvi : mein serious hu Arjun, mujhe koi Prithvi math bulana....

Sanjham : tho kya bulaye tumhe???

Prithvi : mujhe.....surya bulana

All his friends agree.....they move ahead to the entrance of the village. They look around.

Sanyo with her frends have already arrived in the same village. Sammy tells Rupali and Sanyo that Sanyo should not reveal her identity that she is a Rajkumari; otherwise people will start to take advantage out of them.....the three gals agree and come up with a few names for Sanyo to choose.

Sammy: angel, sweetie

Rupali : gita, sita, rani

Sammy: ye kaise naam hai...gita...never...sita....kabhi nahi...meri bari...alex...jazz....shirley...ash

Rupali : hum india mein hai aur ye naam bilkul nahi chale ge

Sanyo: nandini....ye teek rahe ga

Sammy puts her arm around Sanyo and says ..."ye tho bahot acha naam hai...nandini ji"

Sanyo smiles; they move ahead. The village people look at Sanyo and see her and start to gossip about her. Due to Sanyo's prettiness, many of the villagers start to talk about her...and wonder if she is a princess....Sanyo feels uncomfortable...many of the villagers see Sanyo and smile at her...the villagers are waiting for Sanyo to ask so they can fulfil her order as soon as possible. Rupali walks besides Sanyo and Sammy wonders off.

Sammy is looking around, she sees a few boys asking a man for a spare room which they can use for the night to take rest. The man is about to agree; when Sammy comes.

The man is an owner of the spare house. Sammy goes to the man and asks him that can she too wants to hire a room....the man does not say anything.

The boys are none other than Prithvi and his four frends.

Pundir : hum yaha pehle aye hai...

Sammy : acha...tho kamre par tumhara naam likha huwa hai

Pundir : jo bhi ho...kamra mera aur mere dosto ka hai

Prithvi and the rest of the frends are standing behind Pundir; they wonder where Sammy has come from because of the way she is dressed.

Arjun : pundir....larki hai jane dho...meri pyaari behen kamra aap ka hai

Pundir shouts : Arjun, tum chup karo...ye larki hothi hi aisi hai....

The owner of the house does not know what to do; therefore he stays quiet.

Sammy : kya kaha tumne

Chand : aap chup kijiye...yaha hum pehle aye hai...

Prithvi and his frends are very annoyed now...

Sammy : batmeez....patha nahi apne aap ko kya samjhte hai...idiots

Pundir : kya kaha tumne

Sanjham : lagta hai...apni language mein boli

At that time Sanyo and Rupali reach.....Rupali comes forward and stands next to Sammy....

Rupali : bhai saab aap humme kamra dijiye....sirf aaj raat ke liye....larko ka kya hai...wo bahar bhi so sakte hai

Chand is very annoyed...."kya kaha tumne"

The man says to the gals..."dekhiye mein aap ki baat samjhata hu ...isliye..."

The man is interrupted by a sweet and innocent voice that comes behind from Sammy....Sanyo comes and stands near Sammy

Sanyo : soch lijiye

All the boys and the man keep staring at Sanyo....Prithvi looks at Sanyo and is shocked to see how beautiful Sanyo is......Prithvi stands in front of Sanyo.....everyone is memorized with Sanyo's beauty.

The man without a say, hands over the keys to Sanyo....the boys are shocked whereas the gals get happy.....

Pundir : aap aisa kaise kar sakte hai...aapke andar koi insaniyat naam ki cheez hai.....ya nahi

The man smiles at Sanyo.....and ignores the boys.....

Sanyo : tho hum kaha the....kitne money room rent karne ka hai???

The man : aap ke liye free......

Prithvi luks at Sanyo ...."tum apne aap ko samjhti kya ho....???? aur ye"

Sanyo : hum tum se baat nahi kar rahe....bewakoof

Pundir :aap ne mere dost ko kya bulaya

Sammy : jo tumne suna

Sanyo looks away with attitude.....Sammy and Pundir have an argument...whereas Rupali and Chand

Sanyo gets angry....Prithvi continues staring at Sanyo....

Prithvi cums near Sanyo, sanyo fold her arms...prithvi says ."tumhe tho bahot khushi ho rahi hogi"

Sanyo: tumhari problem kya hai???....she turns in the direction of where her frends are yelling and shouts....

Rupali and Sammy and CHand and Pundir stay quite......

Sanyo : kitne bewakoof hai ye larke....ye ek ghar hai ....jo ye uncle de rahe he hume.....ghar ka half tum larko ke liye aur ghar ka dhusra half hum larkiyon ka hai...teek hai....hum yaha sirf aaj ke liye hai....

The man: wa....kya khoob kaha apne...aap tho bahot hi samjhdar ho...ye larke tho useless hai.....

The man tells the boys that they need to pay...the boys pay for the rent....whereas Sanyo just ignores them all and goes inside the house....

Prithvi : apne aapko samjhti kya hai...

The man goes when he gets his money.....Prithvi's frends are outside....they say to prithvi...if they knew who he was...then those gals wud neva talk to him like that..

My precious prcians...hope u enjoyed it....do comment.....do feel free to say to what u wanna see in the here coming updates....AND DO PRESS THE LIKE BUTTON IF u liked ma update....and last of all thanks for reading it...love u all....

Thanks for dedicationg this part to me.Ok, let's come to the update.
It's superb, mindblowing, brillinat update👏.
At first the roopsundari's love for her grand daughter is awesome.I loved this.
Then, the bonding between kamlabati and roopsundari.U remind me the old days.It's great dear.I loved their conversation dear.Then ,prithvi and his friends comes at the kannuj and the way welcomedby jaychand.It's great.I liked this part also.U wrote it very well.I can imagine this scene very well.I loved the way u described sanyo returning in India.,What happen , prithvi ko jaan par raha hain udaypur.Ok, let's see.What u store for us.Hey jaychand ko kiska letter aaya, sanyo ke naam se.I guess she is in danger but who is behind this.U create suspense ha.Great dear.
Hey jachand loves his daughter.Sanyo ka kaya hua?Prithvi ko arjun ne bilkul sahi kha natkhat.

"Prithvi : acha...suno...mujhe Prithvi math bulana....

Sanjham : tumhe prithvi nahi bulaye ge..tho kya bulaye

Prithvi : kuch bi likin prithvi nahi

Arjun : soch lo.....

Arjun smirks....Prithvi looks at him

Arjun : natkhat....ye teek rahe ga...hum sab tumhe yahi bulaye ge

Everyone starts to laugh accept Prithvi.

Prithvi : bahot hasi arahi tum sab ko

Arjun : haan..."

I really loved this part.Very true say by Arjun.Ha ha natkhat.

Wow, sanyo ka naam bhi ho gaya nandini.Reallu, u remebered me the old days.I miss those days.ow, prithvi and his friend ka jhagra ho gaya sanyo and her friends.Great I loved this part also.Lerki ke liye free mein room aur lerko ke liye nehi.ha ha ha ha.
Anyway the full update 's just oo good, brillint, awesome.No cannot wait more.pls pls post next part also my little princess.
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thanks for the lovely update dear

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